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Posted: 10 years ago
When will u update next chptr..
Candyyy m waitin :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey i m new...i read all of ur chaptr tht was fantastic... 👏
u r mindblowng dear...👍🏼
i lovd ur story sooo mch...amazingly awesome yaar...❤️
now ths is my favorite story ths is what i want to read...i lovd to read ths type of story lik jealous manik or nandini...
u penned each and evry scene vry beautifully. ...😊
the way cabir was teasing manik was amazng...ii lovd cabr n manik scene...🤣
last part was my favorite...terrace passionate romance was fabulous and finally the KISS was superbbb...🥳
.eagerly waiting fr next part...
continue soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
read all chapter in one go... it's fantastic...
beautifully penned...
jealous manik or nandini...
cabir's teasing manik was amazing.. loved cabir n manik scene.
last part was awesome... passionate romance and KISS was superb
.eagerly waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guys.. First of all sorry for late update.. And by the way how was today's episode ? Heheh..
Okay here is a new chapter .. Tried hard to put every character in a single frame.. I know you love special manan updates but pls appreciate other characters too..


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Chapter 27 A

Scene 1--- ( terrace, ky2 club)---

Manik and Nandini slowly broke the kiss..Their eyes were still closed.. The song was still going on.. Manik joined his forehead with her. Nandini's heart beats were still racing fast. Manik was breathing heavily.. Manik had tightly held her with his both hands encircled around her waist and Nandini had her hands on his shoulders.

The song ended and with that Nandini slowly opened her eyes.. and she found that Manik's eyes were still closed.. He was totally lost in her .. A little smile crept to her lips..

She thought " whether u have got answers for ur WHYs or not.. but I have answers to all my WHYs.." And this thought made her blush..

She slowly moved back while removing her hands from his shoulders.. This made Manik open his eyes.. He saw her moving away but before she could actually move, he tightened his grip around her waist and pulled her closer.. Nandini banged in his chest and blushed even more harder.. She was stealing her looks. . Manik smirked seeing such kind of effect on her..

He playfully asked "what happened?"

Nandini looked at him. Manik again playfully " Ab vase nhi fekna mujpe?". And Nandini flushed listening that.. She immediately looked down and shyly uttered " Manik. Everyone .. Everyone must be waiting.. Let's go"

But Manik was busy tracing each and every bit of her beautiful face with his eyes and didn't reply..This made Nandini look at him.. His silence was saying those things which she always wanted to hear.. He was looking at her with his loved filled eyes. Their eyes met. And Manik slowly leaned closer to her.. Nandini's heartbeats were again raised.. She didn't know how to react and turned her face a little bit away while closing her eyes tightly and clenching his blazer tightly. Manik smiled at her shyness and moved back.. Nandini was breathing unevenly with her eyes closed.. Manik smirked and immediately turned her to face her back.. This made her open her eyes.. Manik wrapped her in his arms while hugging her from behind.. Nandini smiled a little..

Manik while snuggling in her hair whispered "u know what.. kuch hi dino me.. my life has changed , everything has changed.. And it's YOU.. who is responsible for this change.. YOU are changing the world around me.. "

Nandini's smile grew a little wider.. Manik gulped his saliva and continued " everyone said that I am obsessed with u.. Yes.. I was.. I was obsessed.. And I am still obsessed with u.. But it isn't only obsession.. but.. but much more than that.."

Nandini turned her face to look at him and found he had closed his eyes.. Manik felt her face more closer.. He continued while rubbing his nose against her cheek " jab se tum aai ho.. My anger has vanished; the bitterness in me is no longer in existence and the monster in me ... I am not able to find him..". Nandini closed her eyes and placed her hands on his .


Manik continued " ur innocence, cuteness, ur smile , ur boldness. Ur softness.. " while rubbing his cheek against her.. He continued "and even .. Even Ur tears . .." And he sighed and opened his eyes.. Nandini too opened her eyes and looked at him. Manik continued while looking into her eyes " Ur tears .. Ur pain.. Everything creates a strong impact on me ".

Nandini couldn't believe if it was the same kadva Manik who never knew to utter sweet words..

Manik continued " I can't see u in pain, I can't see ur tears.." . Nandini turned to face him.. Manik left her waist..

Manik still looking into her eyes " When I heard u singing for the first time I was lost.. When I hugged u first time in the jungle I could feel ur fear.. Then I lost u the same day and I was so restless.. Whenever u were hurt, I felt ur pain.." Nandini's eyes became moist..

Manik " and the day I realised my feelings for u, from that day I was on a mission.. " he sighed and continued" and the mission is to make u smile".

And Nandini's smile grew wider and wider. Manik " u know what.. I love stars.. And for me you are the most shining star Nandini..".

Nandini was feeling weak on her knees.. She immediately cling to him and hugged him tight. Manik was dumbstruck at first but he closed his eyes and took her in his embrace.



Scene 2 -- ( ground floor ,ky2 club)-----

Soha was busy sipping her drink while observing Aaliya and Aryamann..

Suddenly Navya came and said " Nandini washroom me bhi nahi h"

Soha "kya baat kr rhe hain ye?" . Navya followed her gaze and saw aryamann and aaliya.

Aaliya was dancing with Aryamann with her hands encircled around his neck with a full smile on her face.. And Aryamann had to held her waist unwillingly.. A soft music was playing.. Navya giggled seeing Aryamann's flushed face..

Aryamann saw her giggling and became more annoyed.. He tried to free himself from Aaliya's grip but aaliya clenched him more tightly and blackmailed him " I'll tell ur secret to everyone.."

Aryamann annoyingly " look.. Ms.. Ms.. Whatever is ur name. From the past 15 minutes u r blackmailing me.. Now cut this crap and tell me..."

Aaliya giggled and cut him in middle" really..? U don't know MY name.. U know there is one more person who is playing this name game with me.." while trying to open her eyes..

Aryamann freaked in a low voice " I think u r just fooling around" . He had held her wrists to free himself from her grip just then Aaliya said " I know tum kaun ho"..

Aryamann was dumbstruck. He immediately left her hands.. And uttered " what.. What do u mean."

Aaliya while trying to open her eyes " u think I am a fool.. Hmm.. Ur talks .. No..no...ur lectures actually.." while making an annoyed face..

And while opening her eyes wide she said " ur lectures na.. Unko sun k I got to know that who r u.. The day u told me to get free from all the boundaries.. To leave my past and move on.. That day only I came to know who r u.."

Aryamann gulped his saliva..


Scene 3 --------------

Soha while keenly observing Aaliya and Aryamann turned to place her glass on the slab and bumped into Dhruv.. And the drink spilled over Soha's dress.

Dhruv to soha " m.. M really sorry.. I was on phone and...".

Soha " no.no.. Its. Okay.. Wo.."

Suddenly Navya cut her in middle and said " kya its okay." And while looking at Dhruv she said " humne socha tha tum Nandini k dost ho.. Par tum ... Tumhe Cabir ne bheja h na".. And she turned her head in every possible direction and found that Cabir and mukti were sitting on a couch.. Navya rushed to them leaving Soha and dhruv surprised.. Soha freaked " listen navya..".


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Edited by candy1990 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Post the next part please? It's been very long. Please? Add more of MaNan romance. Please.
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Posted: 10 years ago
CHAPTER 27( continued...)

Scene 4--------

Aryamann was stealing his looks...

Aaliya annoyingly "are.. look at me.. Look into my eyes.."

Aryamann turned his face to look into her eyes.. They were happy eyes, twinkling eyes.. Aaliya was smiling .. There was a freshness, a newness in her face.. She was not that Aaliya whom he had met a few days before.. He was thinking of the reason for this sudden change. He was busy judging her expressions just then his trance was broken by Aaliya's voice.

Aaliya with a broad smile said " I am changed because I listened to u.. I left my past far behind and see I am happy.." Suddenly she changed her expression from smiling to a sad and uttered " What Manik did to me was unexpected.. I was almost shattered.."

Aryamann with confused expressions was looking at her.

Aaliya with a painful expression " I was frustrated.. No one noticed.. Not even my friends. Actually I only hide it from them.. But.. But they should have noticed naa.. Hai naa.." while looking into his eyes.. But Aryamann said nothing..

And Aaliya smiled again saying " but u know what.. you noticed.." while poking her finger in his chest.. Aryamann didn't know how to react .. Aaliya continued "u noticed my frustration, my sadness.. And ur few words changed me.. And because of those words I came to know that u r..." She chuckled still trying to open her eyes wide..

Aryamann had held his breath just then she said " u r an Angel.. God has send u to make me smile.. Angel ho tum". She chuckled.

Aryamann sighed and nodded his head in disbelief. He gulped his saliva and said to her " u r drunk.. I think u should..."

Aaliya with an annoyed face "are u always like this.. So boring??" while trying to see his face.. But it was getting blurred..

Aryamann " yes.. But only with u.." And with that he rolled his eyes looking up in the sky.. Suddenly he felt Aaliya's head on his chest.. Aaliya had become unconscious. Aryamann was dumbstruck..


Scene 5----------------------------

Manik and Nandini were hugging each other tightly suddenly Nandini heard her phone ringing.. Nandini immediately broke the hug and Manik was dumbstruck..

Manik confusingly " what happened?"

Nandini worriedly " manik.. My phone is ringing.. Where is my clutch?"

Manik surprisingly in a low voice " Nandini.. Like seriously?.. phone .."

Nandini worriedly " manik tell me na.. It must be chachi's call.."

The phone rang again. And Nandini's eyes fell on her clutch that was lying near the door of terrace.. And she ran to the door.. Suddenly Manik's eyes fell on her leg. Manik narrowed his gaze and found that her leg had a big pink bandaid..

Nandini had opened her clutch but she missed the call and found that she had 5 missed calls from Navya too. She freaked " Manikkk.." and turned.. She found Manik standing right in front of her.. Manik worriedly " ye bandaid.. Tumhari leg pe.."

Nandini was puzzled.. She said " manik.. Leave it.. Its nothing.. Only 2 stiches.. Chachi ka call and Navya k 5 missed calls.. Chalo.."

Manik freaked " stiches..!! What..? .."

Nandini in a haste " relax manik.. Sirf do stiches. They must be searching me. Chalo"

Manik angrily " aur ye tbse hai jabse tume jungle me chot lgi h. Right?"

Nandini ignored him and said " manik chalo.." while opening the door of terrace and dragging him.

Manik annoyingly " Nandini. Listen.. It's serious and you.. M not going anywhere.."

Nandini while dragging him to the stairs " manik pls understand.. Maddie will go mad if he doesn't find me there.."
And a jealous Manik while gritting his teeth " let him be.. I am not afraid of anyone..".

Nandini too gritted her teeth and said " Manik.. Shut up.. That vase is still there .. See.." while dragging him and gesturing him to see the vase.

A girl "Crazy lovers r back..". Manik chuckled and Nandini was embarrassed.. she eyed him . Manik shrugged his shoulders and said " what did I do?"



Scene 6-----------------------------------------

Cabir was drunk.
Cabir "Aaliyaaa... chose Aryamann... Why?"

Mukti coolly " tujhe chad gai hai.. Don't assume things. Don't u remember that day he shouted on her because of Harshad. So usne apna frustration nikala. That's it."
But Cabir wasn't convinced...

Suddenly Navya came there and started shouting on Cabir.. Navya while gritting her teeth " subeh subeh tumhara chehra dekh lia islie itna Drama ho rha h..".

Soha and Dhruv also reached there.. Cabir and mukti were surprised...
Cabir annoyingly " listen Madhubala.. Right now m feeling dizzy.. We'll talk..sorry.. fight.. later.."

Navya continued " pehle Manik aur Nandini ka bus wala scene..". This made everyone conscious. Cabir immediately stood up with his eyes wide open. Navya "fir Harshad k sath college me ladai.."

Cabir stammered " I think..u..u.. U have lost it. u r drunk".
Navya " chup kro tum"

Cabir while pressing his lips in anger and pointing his finger at her " listen Madhubala.. Don't instigate me to..."
Navya while clenching her teeth and jerking his hand away saying " are Kia instigate.. Kya Kr loge..?"

Suddenly Soha shouted " both of u shut up..". Navya and Cabir stopped.

Soha sighed and said to Navya " Dhruv is a nice guy.. He didn't do anything intentionally.. Ok.. So relax..." .. Everyone was surprised listening that from Soha's mouth.

Soha turned to Dhruv and said " m sorry.. Wo.."
Dhruv " no.. I should be saying sorry"
Soha " no.. Why would u feel sry... I am sorry .. That day..."
Dhruv " listen.. Don't. Be. Please.."

Everyone kept looking at them being dumbstruck.. Cabir chuckled and said to navya " see.. Dono sorry sorry khel rhe hain.. Aur hum bekaar me begaani shaadi me Abdullah deewana."

Soha and Dhruv were embarrassed..
Soha uttered " no.. That day.. I should have thanked him for helping me.. But..but I shouted on Ur friend.."

Suddenly Aryamann came their holding Aaliya from her shoulders and said " u shouted at whom?". Aaliya was unconscious. Mukti and Cabir held Aaliya and made her sit on the couch..

Soha uttered " at her" pointing on Aaliya.. She continued " She took my side that day despite of the fact that Harshad is her brother.. She said bad words to him and I..."

Aryamann was shocked.. He turned to see Aaliya who was lying unconscious on the couch.. He recalled the day he shouted at aaliya. He was feeling guilty.

Suddenly Nandini reached there and was puzzled seeing fab4 and her group togerther.. Navya " kaha thi tum?"
Manik also reached there and was surprised too.. Before Nandini could say a word Navya said to manik " oh! To tum apni girlfriend ko chod k ..."
Mukti cut her in middle and said " kisi aur ki gf k sath ghum rha h" while eyeing Manik suspiciously.

And the impulsive Manik freaked " Nandini kisi ki girlfriend nhi h. And na hi aaliya meri gf hai". And with that Cabir hide his face.. Nandini's eyes got widened.. And there was a silence for a moment..

Mukti was eyeing manik angrily. Aryamann didn't like Manik's words.. Soha and dhruv were clueless.. Navya was a bit shocked. Suddenly Mukti broke the silence " aaliya is not ur gf.. Fine.. But how do u know Nandini is not..."

Cabir cut in middle saying " because.." He looked at manik and said in a breath " Because Manik and Nandini are friends.. ". Everyone including Manik and Nandini were again shocked..

The scenario was being watched by a pair of evil eyes..

Suddenly their attention was grabbed by DJ voice. DJ announced" guys time for the cake cutting ceremony. Happy anniversary ky2.."
Everyone in the hall shouted " woohoo.." And clapped..

Aryamann thought " I don't like this guy.. And Nandini aur ye friends.. Nandu se baat krni hogi".


Scene 7-----------

Aryamann, Soha and Navya were walking towards the exit gate of club.. Nandini was following them. She looked back at manik who was standing at a far distance.. Their eyes met and she smiled.. Manik was also smiling.. Cabir was observing the scenario.. Finally Nandini left.. Manik was still smiling.. He ruffled his hair, sighed and turned.. And found Cabir smiling at him like a fool.. Manik immediately changed his expressions from smiling to serious and asked " why r u smiling like an idiot?"

Cabir giving a fake broad smile " tu acting mast krta h.." And he changed his expressions to serious and asked " ho gya... ? Ab bolega?"
Manik opened his mouth wide and uttered" kya.. Wo.. I told her about my feelings for her.. And... U know.. That I ... I... "

Cabir " I love u kaha ?"
Manik with a sad face "No.. She stopped me.."

Cabir being surprised " what..?"
Manik making a cute sad face "yaa"

Cabir " okay leave it.. U told her ur feelings.. And What did she say ?"

Manik happily " yaa.. I told her everything and she said.. She said ..." And his smile vanished with that..

Manik freaked " Cabir.. She said nothing" and he fell on the sofa with a thud sound.


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edited -- get " bairiya " from ramaiyaa vastavaiyaa for next update.. And m keeping an eye on evryone.. So sb k sb commmet krna..
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Stay blessed.. Stay happy.. Keep smiling.. Keep shining..

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Edited by candy1990 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing updated
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
As usual an unusual update. But who is that person with evil eyes. Keep surprising us.Harshad I guessPlzzz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyyy..
U r an awesome writer... The way u hve penned everything ...its too good...
Accha cmng to the update...
I loved the part whr manik confessed everything...that was sooo cute...
How much he cares for her... He was so worried seeing her stiches...
I agree they are crazy lovers...hehehe...
Aryamann nd aaliya...wohhooo... And the way soha was watching them...lol...
And navya lyk srsly went to fight wid cabir... I thought everyone would get to noe the bus scene...heheheheh...
Now aryamann doesnt lyk manik ... That had to happen... And cabir rocks as always...
Thank u so much 4 a long update... I loved reading it...
Tc...stay blessed..
Loads of love

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