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awesome update candy dear...!!!😉👏⭐️👏
i really loved all couples...cavya...so funny...!!!😆😆
soha and dhruv awww so cute...😊
i really loved aliya in this update...😃
u penned so perfectly yaar...coming to manan ...as usual passionate and romantic...!!! 😉😳😉
who is that evil eyes ??????????😲😲😲😲😲😲
my favorite scenes from this part...
Scene 1
She thought " whether u have got answers for ur WHYs or not.. but I have answers to all my WHYs.." And this thought made her blush..
Manik while snuggling in her hair whispered "u know what.. kuch hi dino me.. my life has changed , everything has changed.. And it's YOU.. who is responsible for this change.. YOU are changing the world around me.. "
Nandini's smile grew a little wider.. Manik gulped his saliva and continued " everyone said that I am obsessed with u.. Yes.. I was.. I was obsessed.. And I am still obsessed with u.. But it isn't only obsession.. but.. but much more than that.."
Nandini turned her face to look at him and found he had closed his eyes.. Manik felt her face more closer.. He continued while rubbing his nose against her cheek " jab se tum aai ho.. My anger has vanished; the bitterness in me is no longer in existence and the monster in me ... I am not able to find him..". Nandini closed her eyes and placed her hands on his .
Manik continued " ur innocence, cuteness, ur smile , ur boldness. Ur softness.. " while rubbing his cheek against her.. He continued "and even .. Even Ur tears . .." And he sighed and opened his eyes.. Nandini too opened her eyes and looked at him. Manik continued while looking into her eyes " Ur tears .. Ur pain.. Everything creates a strong impact on me ".
Nandini couldn't believe if it was the same kadva Manik who never knew to utter sweet words..
Manik continued " I can't see u in pain, I can't see ur tears.." . Nandini turned to face him.. Manik left her waist..
Manik still looking into her eyes " When I heard u singing for the first time I was lost.. When I hugged u first time in the jungle I could feel ur fear.. Then I lost u the same day and I was so restless.. Whenever u were hurt, I felt ur pain.." Nandini's eyes became moist..
Manik " and the day I realised my feelings for u, from that day I was on a mission.. " he sighed and continued" and the mission is to make u smile".
And Nandini's smile grew wider and wider. Manik " u know what.. I love stars.. And for me you are the most shining star Nandini..".
Nandini was feeling weak on her knees.. She immediately cling to him and hugged him tight. Manik was dumbstruck at first but he closed his eyes and took her in his embrace.
Scene 2
Aryamann saw her giggling and became more annoyed.. He tried to free himself from Aaliya's grip but aaliya clenched him more tightly and blackmailed him " I'll tell ur secret to everyone.."
Aryamann annoyingly " look.. Ms.. Ms.. Whatever is ur name. From the past 15 minutes u r blackmailing me.. Now cut this crap and tell me..."
Aaliya giggled and cut him in middle" really..? U don't know MY name.. U know there is one more person who is playing this name game with me.." while trying to open her eyes..
Aaliya while trying to open her eyes " u think I am a fool.. Hmm.. Ur talks .. No..no...ur lectures actually.." while making an annoyed face..
And while opening her eyes wide she said " ur lectures na.. Unko sun k I got to know that who r u.. The day u told me to get free from all the boundaries.. To leave my past and move on.. That day only I came to know who r u.."
Scene 4-
Aryamann turned his face to look into her eyes.. They were happy eyes, twinkling eyes.. Aaliya was smiling .. There was a freshness, a newness in her face.. She was not that Aaliya whom he had met a few days before.. He was thinking of the reason for this sudden change. He was busy judging her expressions just then his trance was broken by Aaliya's voice.
Aaliya with a broad smile said " I am changed because I listened to u.. I left my past far behind and see I am happy.." Suddenly she changed her expression from smiling to a sad and uttered " What Manik did to me was unexpected.. I was almost shattered.."
Aaliya with a painful expression " I was frustrated.. No one noticed.. Not even my friends. Actually I only hide it from them.. But.. But they should have noticed naa.. Hai naa.." while looking into his eyes.. But Aryamann said nothing..
And Aaliya smiled again saying " but u know what.. you noticed.." while poking her finger in his chest.. Aryamann didn't know how to react .. Aaliya continued "u noticed my frustration, my sadness.. And ur few words changed me.. And because of those words I came to know that u r..." She chuckled still trying to open her eyes wide..
Aryamann had held his breath just then she said " u r an Angel.. God has send u to make me smile.. Angel ho tum". She chuckled.
Aryamann sighed and nodded his head in disbelief. He gulped his saliva and said to her " u r drunk.. I think u should..."
Aaliya with an annoyed face "are u always like this.. So boring??" while trying to see his face..
Aryamann " yes.. But only with u.." And with that he rolled his eyes looking up in the sky..
Scene 5
Manik worriedly " ye bandaid.. Tumhari leg pe.."
Nandini was puzzled.. She said " manik.. Leave it.. Its nothing.. Only 2 stiches.. Chachi ka call and Navya k 5 missed calls.. Chalo.."
Manik freaked " stiches..!! What..? .."
Nandini in a haste " relax manik.. Sirf do stiches. They must be searching me. Chalo"
Nandini while dragging him to the stairs " manik pls understand.. Maddie will go mad if he doesn't find me there.."
And a jealous Manik while gritting his teeth " let him be.. I am not afraid of anyone..".
Nandini too gritted her teeth and said " Manik.. Shut up.. That vase is still there .. See.." while dragging him and gesturing him to see the vase.
A girl "Crazy lovers r back..". Manik chuckled and Nandini was embarrassed.. she eyed him . Manik shrugged his shoulders and said " what did I do?"
Scene 6
Cabir "Aaliyaaa... chose Aryamann... Why?"
Mukti coolly " tujhe chad gai hai.. Don't assume things.
Soha sighed and said to Navya " Dhruv is a nice guy.. He didn't do anything intentionally.. Ok.. So relax..." .. Everyone was surprised listening that from Soha's mouth.
Everyone kept looking at them being dumbstruck.. Cabir chuckled and said to navya " see.. Dono sorry sorry khel rhe hain.. Aur hum bekaar me begaani shaadi me Abdullah deewana."
Navya said to manik " oh! To tum apni girlfriend ko chod k ..."
Mukti cut her in middle and said " kisi aur ki gf k sath ghum rha h" while eyeing Manik suspiciously.
And the impulsive Manik freaked " Nandini kisi ki girlfriend nhi h. And na hi aaliya meri gf hai". And with that Cabir hide his face.. Nandini's eyes got widened.. And there was a silence for a moment..
Cabir cut in middle saying " because.." He looked at manik and said in a breath " Because Manik and Nandini are friends.. ". Everyone including Manik and Nandini were again shocked..
Scene 7
Cabir giving a fake broad smile " tu acting mast krta h.." And he changed his expressions to serious and asked " ho gya... ? Ab bolega?"
Manik opened his mouth wide and uttered" kya.. Wo.. I told her about my feelings for her.. And... U know.. That I ... I... "
Cabir " I love u kaha ?"
Manik with a sad face "No.. She stopped me.."
Cabir being surprised " what..?"
Manik making a cute sad face "yaa"
Cabir " okay leave it.. U told her ur feelings.. And What did she say ?"
Manik happily " yaa.. I told her everything and she said.. She said ..." And his smile vanished with that..
Manik freaked " Cabir.. She said nothing" and he fell on the sofa with a thud sound.
thanks a lot for the pm dear
continue asap
take care
i really loved all couples...cavya...so funny...!!!😆😆
soha and dhruv awww so cute...😊
i really loved aliya in this update...😃
u penned so perfectly yaar...coming to manan ...as usual passionate and romantic...!!! 😉😳😉
who is that evil eyes ??????????😲😲😲😲😲😲
my favorite scenes from this part...
Scene 1
She thought " whether u have got answers for ur WHYs or not.. but I have answers to all my WHYs.." And this thought made her blush..
Manik while snuggling in her hair whispered "u know what.. kuch hi dino me.. my life has changed , everything has changed.. And it's YOU.. who is responsible for this change.. YOU are changing the world around me.. "
Nandini's smile grew a little wider.. Manik gulped his saliva and continued " everyone said that I am obsessed with u.. Yes.. I was.. I was obsessed.. And I am still obsessed with u.. But it isn't only obsession.. but.. but much more than that.."
Nandini turned her face to look at him and found he had closed his eyes.. Manik felt her face more closer.. He continued while rubbing his nose against her cheek " jab se tum aai ho.. My anger has vanished; the bitterness in me is no longer in existence and the monster in me ... I am not able to find him..". Nandini closed her eyes and placed her hands on his .
Manik continued " ur innocence, cuteness, ur smile , ur boldness. Ur softness.. " while rubbing his cheek against her.. He continued "and even .. Even Ur tears . .." And he sighed and opened his eyes.. Nandini too opened her eyes and looked at him. Manik continued while looking into her eyes " Ur tears .. Ur pain.. Everything creates a strong impact on me ".
Nandini couldn't believe if it was the same kadva Manik who never knew to utter sweet words..
Manik continued " I can't see u in pain, I can't see ur tears.." . Nandini turned to face him.. Manik left her waist..
Manik still looking into her eyes " When I heard u singing for the first time I was lost.. When I hugged u first time in the jungle I could feel ur fear.. Then I lost u the same day and I was so restless.. Whenever u were hurt, I felt ur pain.." Nandini's eyes became moist..
Manik " and the day I realised my feelings for u, from that day I was on a mission.. " he sighed and continued" and the mission is to make u smile".
And Nandini's smile grew wider and wider. Manik " u know what.. I love stars.. And for me you are the most shining star Nandini..".
Nandini was feeling weak on her knees.. She immediately cling to him and hugged him tight. Manik was dumbstruck at first but he closed his eyes and took her in his embrace.
Scene 2
Aryamann saw her giggling and became more annoyed.. He tried to free himself from Aaliya's grip but aaliya clenched him more tightly and blackmailed him " I'll tell ur secret to everyone.."
Aryamann annoyingly " look.. Ms.. Ms.. Whatever is ur name. From the past 15 minutes u r blackmailing me.. Now cut this crap and tell me..."
Aaliya giggled and cut him in middle" really..? U don't know MY name.. U know there is one more person who is playing this name game with me.." while trying to open her eyes..
Aaliya while trying to open her eyes " u think I am a fool.. Hmm.. Ur talks .. No..no...ur lectures actually.." while making an annoyed face..
And while opening her eyes wide she said " ur lectures na.. Unko sun k I got to know that who r u.. The day u told me to get free from all the boundaries.. To leave my past and move on.. That day only I came to know who r u.."
Scene 4-
Aryamann turned his face to look into her eyes.. They were happy eyes, twinkling eyes.. Aaliya was smiling .. There was a freshness, a newness in her face.. She was not that Aaliya whom he had met a few days before.. He was thinking of the reason for this sudden change. He was busy judging her expressions just then his trance was broken by Aaliya's voice.
Aaliya with a broad smile said " I am changed because I listened to u.. I left my past far behind and see I am happy.." Suddenly she changed her expression from smiling to a sad and uttered " What Manik did to me was unexpected.. I was almost shattered.."
Aaliya with a painful expression " I was frustrated.. No one noticed.. Not even my friends. Actually I only hide it from them.. But.. But they should have noticed naa.. Hai naa.." while looking into his eyes.. But Aryamann said nothing..
And Aaliya smiled again saying " but u know what.. you noticed.." while poking her finger in his chest.. Aryamann didn't know how to react .. Aaliya continued "u noticed my frustration, my sadness.. And ur few words changed me.. And because of those words I came to know that u r..." She chuckled still trying to open her eyes wide..
Aryamann had held his breath just then she said " u r an Angel.. God has send u to make me smile.. Angel ho tum". She chuckled.
Aryamann sighed and nodded his head in disbelief. He gulped his saliva and said to her " u r drunk.. I think u should..."
Aaliya with an annoyed face "are u always like this.. So boring??" while trying to see his face..
Aryamann " yes.. But only with u.." And with that he rolled his eyes looking up in the sky..
Scene 5
Manik worriedly " ye bandaid.. Tumhari leg pe.."
Nandini was puzzled.. She said " manik.. Leave it.. Its nothing.. Only 2 stiches.. Chachi ka call and Navya k 5 missed calls.. Chalo.."
Manik freaked " stiches..!! What..? .."
Nandini in a haste " relax manik.. Sirf do stiches. They must be searching me. Chalo"
Nandini while dragging him to the stairs " manik pls understand.. Maddie will go mad if he doesn't find me there.."
And a jealous Manik while gritting his teeth " let him be.. I am not afraid of anyone..".
Nandini too gritted her teeth and said " Manik.. Shut up.. That vase is still there .. See.." while dragging him and gesturing him to see the vase.
A girl "Crazy lovers r back..". Manik chuckled and Nandini was embarrassed.. she eyed him . Manik shrugged his shoulders and said " what did I do?"
Scene 6
Cabir "Aaliyaaa... chose Aryamann... Why?"
Mukti coolly " tujhe chad gai hai.. Don't assume things.
Soha sighed and said to Navya " Dhruv is a nice guy.. He didn't do anything intentionally.. Ok.. So relax..." .. Everyone was surprised listening that from Soha's mouth.
Everyone kept looking at them being dumbstruck.. Cabir chuckled and said to navya " see.. Dono sorry sorry khel rhe hain.. Aur hum bekaar me begaani shaadi me Abdullah deewana."
Navya said to manik " oh! To tum apni girlfriend ko chod k ..."
Mukti cut her in middle and said " kisi aur ki gf k sath ghum rha h" while eyeing Manik suspiciously.
And the impulsive Manik freaked " Nandini kisi ki girlfriend nhi h. And na hi aaliya meri gf hai". And with that Cabir hide his face.. Nandini's eyes got widened.. And there was a silence for a moment..
Cabir cut in middle saying " because.." He looked at manik and said in a breath " Because Manik and Nandini are friends.. ". Everyone including Manik and Nandini were again shocked..
Scene 7
Cabir giving a fake broad smile " tu acting mast krta h.." And he changed his expressions to serious and asked " ho gya... ? Ab bolega?"
Manik opened his mouth wide and uttered" kya.. Wo.. I told her about my feelings for her.. And... U know.. That I ... I... "
Cabir " I love u kaha ?"
Manik with a sad face "No.. She stopped me.."
Cabir being surprised " what..?"
Manik making a cute sad face "yaa"
Cabir " okay leave it.. U told her ur feelings.. And What did she say ?"
Manik happily " yaa.. I told her everything and she said.. She said ..." And his smile vanished with that..
Manik freaked " Cabir.. She said nothing" and he fell on the sofa with a thud sound.
thanks a lot for the pm dear
continue asap
take care
