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DikshaAnand thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read both the 2 parts together . They were superb . Navya was fun in the party beer & all haan. Aryamann and aliya talk was beautiful . The next part was so romantic MANAN luved Dem. The song was superb rain made it more beautiful uff ...i was imagination the whole scenario.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...again awsm as always...it was amazing update...soo romantic...u described song scene very well dea...u knw wht u rocked it...i jus loved it...
Thanku thanku thanku sooo much for the lovely n wonderful update...i am totally in love with ur ff...update soon ..eagerly waiting for next part...love u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic...!!!!!
wow...yaar...its the best part
from scene 1 to scene 8...its beautiful and amazing...!!!
scene 9...wow...its romantic and magical...!!!
i am still roaming in garden with manan and sweet butterfly...!!!
u penned perfectly...!!! keep up the good work sweetie...its mind blowing...!!!

every single scene was beautiful...but coming to my most special ones...!!!

scene-1
1) Nandini gulped her saliva.. Her mind was saying " get up nandu...why are you pretending" but she herself was wondering why she is not able to move.. There was something that was not letting her get away from him..
2) Manik closed his eyes and smelt the scent of her beautiful locks.. Manik thought " why she is so irresistible?"
3) Nandini was still shivering .. Realising this manik had started rubbing his hand slowly against her shoulders and thought " she is so soft.. Like a rose petal". He was lost in her irresistible charm.


scene- 3
1) He saw a few drops of water on her face and shoulder.. He moved his hand from her elbow to her shoulder cleaning those water droplets.. He then moved his hand to her cheek and rubbed her cheek with his thumb..

scene-6
1) Manik shouted " Aaliya is not my gf". Nandini clenching her teeth " Han to Maddie b mera bf nai h"..
And after realizing what they just heard Manik - nandini in unison " what..? Come again.." with their eyes wide opened..

2) Manik " Don't go.." Nandini's eyes widened.. Manik " i mean..wo.. Song..."
Nandini" tujhe chahu betahasha"
Manik's jaw dropped listening that..
Nandini continued " zahenaseeb.. Ye song kaha h sir ne prepare krne ko.. Kr Lena practice" Manik composed himself and nodded.
Nandini turned and took a few steps towards girls hostel.. She had a big smile on her face.. Manik was also smiling endlessly.. Nandini put a finger in her mouth, bit her lower lip and then slightly stroke her forehead smiling and blushing..
Manik ran his fingers through his hair and nodded his head while smiling

scene- 7
Navya" dekho.. Humara dhyan mat divert kro.. Kya hua?" Nandini " pta nhi..par.. KUCH TO HUA HAI .." and she hung up smilingly..
Navya " hello.. Hello. Are kaat dia call..kya hua ise"

scene- 8
Manik " Abe.sale.. Get up.. see it's a beautiful morning.."
Cabir still in a sleepy voice" i know Teri morning beautiful h.. Time waste mt Kr.. Gana gaa."
Manik -" what?"



scene-9
everything was special...including the song...perfect for manan current situation...
but the last part was so close to my heart...!!!

1) Manik to himself " now I know why m so concerned for u .. I am in love with you.. Nandini.." still lost in her..
Nandini to herself " now I know why I was pretending last night.. I am in love with you.. Manik." still lost in him..

2) manik held her arms and asked her not to move while nodding his head.. And with his expressions he asked her to look at her shoulder..
Nandini being confused looked at her shoulder and a big smile came in her face.. It was the same colorful butterfly sitting on her shoulder ..
Nandini slowly moved her head to look at manik stiil smiling.. Manik took his phone and bring his face near her face.. Both smiled.. And he took a selfie..
"click"


thanks a lot for this beautiful update dear
continue soon
take care
with love
aavani



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aavani

Fantastic...!!!!!
wow...yaar...its the best part
from scene 1 to scene 8...its beautiful and amazing...!!!
scene 9...wow...its romantic and magical...!!!
i am still roaming in garden with manan and sweet butterfly...!!!
u penned perfectly...!!! keep up the good work sweetie...its mind blowing...!!!

every single scene was beautiful...but coming to my most special ones...!!!

scene-1
1) Nandini gulped her saliva.. Her mind was saying " get up nandu...why are you pretending" but she herself was wondering why she is not able to move.. There was something that was not letting her get away from him..
2) Manik closed his eyes and smelt the scent of her beautiful locks.. Manik thought " why she is so irresistible?"
3) Nandini was still shivering .. Realising this manik had started rubbing his hand slowly against her shoulders and thought " she is so soft.. Like a rose petal". He was lost in her irresistible charm.


scene- 3
1) He saw a few drops of water on her face and shoulder.. He moved his hand from her elbow to her shoulder cleaning those water droplets.. He then moved his hand to her cheek and rubbed her cheek with his thumb..

scene-6
1) Manik shouted " Aaliya is not my gf". Nandini clenching her teeth " Han to Maddie b mera bf nai h"..
And after realizing what they just heard Manik - nandini in unison " what..? Come again.." with their eyes wide opened..

2) Manik " Don't go.." Nandini's eyes widened.. Manik " i mean..wo.. Song..."
Nandini" tujhe chahu betahasha"
Manik's jaw dropped listening that..
Nandini continued " zahenaseeb.. Ye song kaha h sir ne prepare krne ko.. Kr Lena practice" Manik composed himself and nodded.
Nandini turned and took a few steps towards girls hostel.. She had a big smile on her face.. Manik was also smiling endlessly.. Nandini put a finger in her mouth, bit her lower lip and then slightly stroke her forehead smiling and blushing..
Manik ran his fingers through his hair and nodded his head while smiling

scene- 7
Navya" dekho.. Humara dhyan mat divert kro.. Kya hua?" Nandini " pta nhi..par.. KUCH TO HUA HAI .." and she hung up smilingly..
Navya " hello.. Hello. Are kaat dia call..kya hua ise"

scene- 8
Manik " Abe.sale.. Get up.. see it's a beautiful morning.."
Cabir still in a sleepy voice" i know Teri morning beautiful h.. Time waste mt Kr.. Gana gaa."
Manik -" what?"



scene-9
everything was special...including the song...perfect for manan current situation...
but the last part was so close to my heart...!!!

1) Manik to himself " now I know why m so concerned for u .. I am in love with you.. Nandini.." still lost in her..
Nandini to herself " now I know why I was pretending last night.. I am in love with you.. Manik." still lost in him..

2) manik held her arms and asked her not to move while nodding his head.. And with his expressions he asked her to look at her shoulder..
Nandini being confused looked at her shoulder and a big smile came in her face.. It was the same colorful butterfly sitting on her shoulder ..
Nandini slowly moved her head to look at manik stiil smiling.. Manik took his phone and bring his face near her face.. Both smiled.. And he took a selfie..
"click"


thanks a lot for this beautiful update dear
continue soon
take care
with love
aavani



hey aavani..
thanku so so much for this super amazing comment.. Not only this , ur previous comment was also heart touching.. You seriously..u are actually quoting lines from my story..
u said "
i am just loving this..scene 9...wow...its romantic and magical...!!!
i am still roaming in garden with manan and sweet butterfly...!!! "
i have no words to explain how much eagerly i was waiting for ur comment..
stay blessed girl.. Stay happy..
keep reading.. Keep commenting., m overwhelmed..
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was such a cute update keep writing
thnks for da PM
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1

wow...again awsm as always...it was amazing update...soo romantic...u described song scene very well dea...u knw wht u rocked it...i jus loved it...
Thanku thanku thanku sooo much for the lovely n wonderful update...i am totally in love with ur ff...update soon ..eagerly waiting for next part...love u

hey hasi-pani1.
thanku so much to u guys.. Who are appreciating my story..
u said that u r totally in LOVE with my story.. Thnku.. It was overwhelming..
keep appreciating me , keep commenting, keep liking my story..
thnx again..
stay blessed..stay happy
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was awesome😊. u penned it beautifully.
Song sequence was jus perfect😳😳😳
waiting 4 confession
update nxt part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: HTA111

Wow beautiful mindboggling wonderful update

He was so jealous that he just cant control it but when she is near to him all he wanted to embrace her in his arms and cuddle up

When he found out that she is not aryaman gf his happiness got no boundaries he just wants to confess that he is in love with her

Continue soon and thanks for pm

hey HTA111..
first of all don't say thnx for pm.. Its okay..
and thnku for ur lovely comment.. U r a reader who reads between the lines.. Love to hear more from u.. Keep writing.. Keep appreciating..
keep smiling..
thanku
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shivani_telang

woooahhh candy bestest part ever
aisa lga koi movie dekh li
amazingly awsm part yaar sry maine part 20 ni padha tha...
wow a cute selfie with butterfly awww cuties :* :* 😳 😉

Lol.. I knew it.. K tune nhi dekha h chapter 20.. Hahahaha..
your comment was not reflecting that enthusiasm that u alwz pour in while writing comments,.
Hahha..
movie dikha di na .. Lol..
hehhe..
thankyou sweety..
muaaahhh...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DikshaAnand

I read both the 2 parts together . They were superb . Navya was fun in the party beer & all haan. Aryamann and aliya talk was beautiful . The next part was so romantic MANAN luved Dem. The song was superb rain made it more beautiful uff ...i was imagination the whole scenario.

hahah.. Hey diksha.. Even I wanted everyone to get manan pheels,, that's why I mentioned in my note (pg40) , k aaram se baith k padhna.. Hehhe..
keep writing, keep appreciating my story
will never disappoint u guys..
stay blessed...

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