naa jeena tere bina - manan ff updated part 36 page 40 - Page 5

I love Chachi
She is protect of her daughter and has every reason to be angry

so guys , heres the next part...hope u like it...

part 11 :

in hospital ,

chachi is very annoyed with manik ... (thinking herself) manik ko sab kuch pata thaa ... usey yeh bhi pata tha ki agar nandini apne aap par zyada zor karti tho , uske saath bahut serious bhi ho sakti thi...manik kitna badal gaya... woh aisa kyun chahtha hoga.. woh mera aacha beta tha...phir .. joh bhi ho is baar main usse maaf nahi karoonghi .. shukhar hai , mujhe uska asliyat toh pata chala . ab ussey naa main apni beti ke aas paas bhi usko aane nahi doonghi ...haa..bas (determined )

one weak pass on...all this one week, manik comes there without informing and goes .there he is noticed by a person , everytime

finally nandini gets discharged from the hospital , she is more than happy just because she can finally attend college and be with her manik . his just mere presence gives her a wonderful feeling which she doesn't have words to express...

nandini :(holding jar in her hand ) (bahara from I hate luv storys) mujhe nahi pata wat chachi is talking about ...everything will be fine naa ?? wat do u think ??

suddenly chachi enters and asks her to go to bed ... she tells chachi that she wants to go to college and will come back fast . in front of her innocent face and her pouty expression , her lovely chachi couldn't upset her .. she gave her permission to do so... nandini hurried to reach her college ...on the way , she thinks that after so long...one long week she'll meet her love , manik monkey malhotra . she reached the college , and rushed inside ...she came to the classroom wer she always find manik... but he wasn't there... suddenly a pair of warm hands on her eyes ...she easilly recognized them...manik...

manik: (hugging her tight) [ kaise bataaoon song :bg admiring her through the song] y u in the collage ... ur supposed to take rest .

nandini: i missed u... y didn't u come so many days ...wat happened ??

manik was out of words . he decided to change the topic ...by the way nandini , how is chacha ,chachi...

nandini becomes upset , she tells him wat all chachi said to her . he explains to her , its just due to stress and that everything will be alright ..

nandini gets excited and tells manik: lets go to class ..i want to see everyone ... manik ( remembering her expulsion) , he tells( flirty voice) u just came and u want to leave me and go...lets go outside today..

nandini didn't agree at the first , but then she couldn't just tell him no...

in evening ,

FAB5 meet at manik's house .

manik : yaar cabir , today toh somehow i managed .

cabir : how will we tell her about all this

manik : cabir , are you out of ur mind..listen...we will not tell her anything now...k

dhruv gets pissed off listening to it ...he says : manik , don't be so selfish.. arey, for ur mistake we all must lie...y...

manik : buddy...wats wrong with u , ive noticed , past so many days ur like this...y...

dhruv..: u still asking me that question ..u know she was so close to death...i saw her how broken she was ... y...was everything her fault ... u misunderstood her , u ill treat her, u insult her and after all this u want us to lie to her so that u can use her...how could u ??

manik: buddy , ur getting me wrong...

cabir interferes and tells manik to keep quiet as he wanted to talk to dhruv .

cabir: dhruv, wat r u saying ...u know everything ...just leave it now...lets not pull it long kk ...

dhruv just leaves from there ... alya looks at him tensed ...

manik: cabir dhruv ko kya ho gaya... y is he so upset..??

cabir : manik, Nandini was a very good friend of his ... and u didn't see , but we saw.. the sight of her falling and blood is really too bad and painful to forget for someone like dhruv...kk...seriously..it was that bad ...

manik looked in pain so cabir decided to change the topic.

cabir : so manik wat will we do now...

precap:

nandini watching mms clip

she gets glimpses of falling .

I can only speak for myself

Hope aftr watcng the mms nandini vl b fyn
Cont soon waitn eagerly dear

Please don't show her the mms just yet... First give some sweet moments between MaNan

Show Dhruv's care towards Nandini and his anger towards Manik. Maybe a sequence where Cabir asks him if he still feels for Nandini and Dhruv explaining that Nandini was always so innocent and sweet and they had promised to be friends always and that day he was going to lose his dear friend.

Suggestions credits: Pious (the real account holder, I just use this account to read MaNan FFs)

I just read this ff in one go...i must say u r an amazing writer...u have potrayed the story so well...i liked this story very much...u have written this ff with a new concept rather than what happened in the show...i really appreciate ur hardwork...plz continue soon... .


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manik is sitting near the pool and remembering wat ever happened to nandini , how close he was to lose her forever and cabir saying that the accident was really terriible... he screams nandinis name in pain and cries loud... he throws his glass which he was holding ... he felt really in pain ...

manik : wat did i do ( hitting his forehead with his hand )...how could i hurt her so much...wat would have i done without her ...how could i...he starts breaking things in anger...and crying loudly ...

at murthys,

nandini is sleeping peacefully... chachii is sitting near her .. chachii is watching a video clip ...

chacha ( from downstairs) : shannoji...shannojiii

chachii :haa , aayii ( keeps the fone as such there and runs down)... chachiis fone starts to ring...it stops ringing but nandini wakes up listening to this... nandini gets up and looks at the fone ...she sees the clip just started playing... she was shocked to see manik in it...

before she could see any further , somebody blindfolded her ...and covered her mouth so that she doesnot scream...

the voice asked her to relax and she at once glowed with happiness ...it was her all time favorite friend...dhruv...

dhruv took the fone from her hand and kept on the table . he turned her towards him ... he as usual had his cute smile on his face ... nandini was very happy to see him ... he asks her to go with him...she holds his hand ...

nandini : dhruv how come ur here ...

dhruv : surprise...(smiling thinking of the way he came in through the window ...) just to make u happy...

nandini : really a courageous move ...because if anybody comes to know then...(raising her eyebrows, teasing him )

but nandini , just gets a glimpse of her falling and she gets shivers ... she tells dhruv about this fears ...she tells its happenening for last 3 days ... he remembers wat doctors said and decides to not tell anything to her ... he tells her it k and its just because of stress.. she responds to him by nodding yess...

dhruv : chalo nandini, come on...

nandini : wer dhruv..( dhruv takes her to her terrace )

dhruv takes his guitar and starts singing : banjaara from ek villian

nandini gives him a friendly stare ... dhruv looks at her peaceful and smiling face ... he just felt relaxed seeing her so happy after all that she went through...she was as pure and beautiful as a white rose...so flawless ...

at college ,

manik comes inside nyonika's room and asks her to cancel nandini expulsion letter ...

nyonika :( angry ) manik, u don't have the right to talk to ur mom in that tone ...

manik : (laughing) wat...wat did u just say ...mom...right ...(angry) just do as i say...or ill have to call dad...get it...and im sure he won't be happy to know that im hurt ...get it...

nyonika:( frustrated )...

manik is about to leave ...he turns back and tells her that ..i remember ur give and take policy , so ill do watever u want ...get it ...so ...

nandinis expulsion letter gets cancelled ... he takes it from the poen and tears it so that she doesnt come to know ...everything is back to normal...

nandinicomes to college and as soon as she enters the class she gets a beautiful welcome by everyone ... she is so happy .

backgroung somebody is singing...she smiles blushing as she knows its her manik...

(walking towars her ) Tu hi meri hai saari zameen

Chahe kahin se chalun

Tujh mein hi aake ruku

(looking into her eyes.)...Tere siva Main jaun kahan

Koi bhi raah chunu ,Tujh mein hi aake ruku

Tum Mile To Lamhein Tham gaye

Tum mile to Saare gum gaye

Tum mile to muskhurana aa gaya

Tum mile to jadoo chaa gaya

Tum mile to jeena aa gaya

Tum mile to mene paya hai khuda

(takes her hand and starts dancing ) Tujh mein kinara dikhe

Dil ko sahara dikhe , Aa meri dhadkan tham le

Teri taraf hi mude , Yeh saas tujhse jude

Har pal yeh tera naam le ...

Tum mile to abb kya hai kami

Tum mile to duniya mil gai

Tum mile to mil gaya asra

Tum mile to jadoo chaa gaya

Tum mile to jeena aa gaya

Tum mile to mene paya hai khuda

stops dancing and have a eyelock...

cabir : clears his throat (manan looks away from each other , a bit embarassed ) so nandini , welcome back...long time ...

FAB5 hug her ... and she is more than shocked ... she thinks to herself ...(wats going on...)

she again gets her glimpses of falling and she gets restless... she moves away from there and holding her head goes outside...the party goes on...dhruv realises nandini missing... he comes out to look for her , soon manik also looks for her ...dhruv calls out her name and while coming to corridor...dhruv sees her fainted on the ground ... he holds her and sprinle water on her ... manik reaches the spot and sees dhruv rushing her to first aid room ...manik goes with him...he couldn't just stand the sight of him holding her...he was boiling with anger...he just stayed quiet...

at first aid room...,

the doctor examines her and tells him.. that she fainted due to stress...and she will be fine... nothing to worry ... u can take her home...don't worry... she just needs rest...

FAB5 reaches there ... manik was about to take her ...wen dhruv holds his hand and tells him : manik, from here ill take her ...u dont need to worry...k..

cabir : but dhruv...manik...(dhruv interrupts)

dhruv : u can forget everything cabir , but i cant ... manik.. (pointing at him) he tried to destroy her completely ..inspite of her always been with him...whatever he did to rag her (rmrbering making her spot, making her clean shoes..etc.. )...and soha incident ...she told him everything ...did he believe ??...he knew that Nandini didn't know nyonika ma'am like we knew...(looking at manik) ...have u ever told her about ur mom's selfish nature, her attitude..anything..then..??. u knew Nandini was innocent ,for her nyonika was manik's mother..god damnit.. and still...u hated her...everything finished , betrayal...wow (clapping hands and insulting manik )...now wat???...u left her to die rt..??...u know wat ,(looking at manik and cabir )...she was already dead ,wen u, the great manik malhotra tried to humiliate her in front of all those poens by telling her to dance ... [walk towards manik] so now...the great manik malhotra...y u coming near her??...for u, everything was over...ho (smirking) i get it, u didn't get her completely,u know what i mean exactly. ...rt...but u know wat...i will never let u do that ... get it manik...u better...or...(very angry)

manik holds his collar... but left it realising wat dhruv said was right ... and it was his buddy... dhruv leaves the room with nandini in hand ... manik was completely heart broken ...he couldn't bear his pain ...he went home very sadly...depressed,lifeless...

dhruv drops nandini home... and goes back to his home...

dhruv:( thinking to himself) nandini , i won't let anybody hurt u anymore ... i'm with u always ...i promise ...

manik...drinks alcohol...(bg: main tenu samjaavaki ...male) the thought of dhruv carring her and wat he told her was irritating and literally killing him...

at murthy's ,

nandini was confused .. y this happens to her now often ...she remembers seeing manik in a clip in chachis fone ...she runs down to chachi and ask for her fone ... chachi asks her to y she needs her fore wen she has hers ..

nandini asks her about the clip...chachi soon understands that nandini wants to see the clip and see might get more hurt...so avoiding her question, chachi asks her to sit down for dinner...

nandini : (thinking) everything is so different suddenly... she becomes very disturbed .. seeing her disturbed , chachi tells her that , it was a clip of FAB5 from youtube and she deleted it as she had seen it completely , so...

she decides to keep her bag ready to go to college ... she drops all her things on the table...her eyes suddenly fell on a paper which looked more like a official letter .. she opens it ...nandini is shocked ...WHAT

PRECAP:

expulsion letter...

manik explains..

I hoped u like this part...actually if this long update is boring u guys...pls do let me know wat u guys feel of it...its encouraging...thank u ...sooo muchhh🥳