naa jeena tere bina - manan ff updated part 36 page 40 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I will get pious to read this... Awesome!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome!!!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘šŸ¼ Please PM me the next part!!!! šŸ¤—
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 7:

nandini slowly opens her eyes ... manik could see her opening her eyes ... she had dark circles around her eyes .she was looking very tired ( bg:kuch kum roshan hai roshni ) ..all this time manik is wondering wat will he tell her ..will she ever forgive me for wat ive done .. will she leave me and go forever this time ...please nandini ...please give ur monster just this one more chance ...ill make it worth it .

nandini as she opened her eyes ...she could see her most loving manik monkey malhotra standing there ... she was very happy... indeed ... suddenly as she wanted to get up .. her head felt heavy .she couldnt just bear the pain.. she realised something was seriously wrong... she slowly lifted her hand to see her having an iv tube fitted ..she head was cover with bandages ... she touched her head and said : ouch..its paining ...

slowly did she realise there was a pair of muscular strong arms holding onto her ...his scent itself was making her just dissolve into him..just looking into his pain filled eyes filled with love for her was enough for her to realise everything will be fine. he assured her with his eyes ... she like a small kid holding onto him ..manik felt good, relaxed and was smiling at her innocence .

slowly , now he decided to ask her wat was at that time important , but was interrupted by nandini wen she asked :manik.. how are you...don't worry too much ...(she cups his face in her hands as if nothing ever happenend ) manik just couldn't believe wat was actually happening .. he was very happy ... manik thought : shes so sweet , she forgave me so fast , i really don't understand how shes like this...so innocent ... so nice .

nandini: manik , where are the others ... ( the door opened behind them and the rest fab 4 entered ) mukti and alya come near her and hold her hands ... dhruv (filled with anger against manik..) : nandini , trust me ur really something ..after watever happened u forgave manik..like seriously...

nandini was confused ...she thought for some time and she looked towards manik and asked : manik..tumne dhruv ko sab kuch bata diya (manik looks at her in a questioning manner : what..nandu )nandini : (whispering to manik) haa... tummne suna nahi ..dhruv ne kya poocha.. how he came to know about wat u did to me ...

manik was confused . he thought : whats wrong with nandini ... y she asking this question..but then he answered her... : arey nandu , what kind of a question is that , they all knew naa.. nandini : (confusingly ) they never knew naa what happened between us .

suddenly doctor comes in and asks everyone to go out and not to stress her more. everyone goes out.cabir couldn't understand wat just happened inside ..he went to manik ( who was very happy ) and said
Cabir: manik.. this girl never stops to amaze me...arey tummne uske saath monster jaisa behave kiya ... and she just forgave everything ...like seriously manik ...ur tooo lucky , bro...really ...i must say that ..(friendly punch on chest) par tumhe nahi lagta...isme something is fishy ... u know wat i mean rt??? manik : haan yaar i too felt it...something is not right . mukti and alya come to manik.. mukti: nandini naa...i tell u..wat is she ...she just forgot everything that happened with her ...really ...man...wow...if I was in her place i would have never ...ever forgiven u...got that...NEVER EVER... dhruv was still a bit pissed off ...but he was fine ...

as soon as doctor came outside , everyone went inside and they saw nandini looking at them ...

cabir: so sweet nandini , how are you feeling... are you okay.. Nandini : im fine Manik : we can actually see that ...(eyeing Nandini) Nandini: (looking at manik) ... manik ...woh...tumhara haath (interrupted by chacha, chachi and rishabh )murthys come there. chachi gives an angry look at manik .manik frees her hand and moves aside away from her ...

nandini is shocked at this gesture of chachii...and manik . she didn't have the slightest idea of wat was happening . manik left the room shortly without even talking to anyone . she could not understand wat was wrong. suddenly her head started paining badly . chachi asked her to sleep off .

nandini : (thinking) wat happened to manik.. y is chachi behaving so differently to him ...slowly she slept off...

manik stood outside crying and thinking..i'm sorry nandini ...i'm very sorry ...

precap:
manik confused Nandini in pain FAB5 and navya shocked...

I hope u liked this part...pls do tell me how u feel about it...ur comments really encourage me a lot...thank u...šŸ‘šŸ¼

Edited by shammuuu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omgg
is it smthn lik has she lost sm of her memory or wt
i hope evrythns f9
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It looked like Nandini lost her partial memory. Is it so?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Read all parts one go.
Hmmimpressive. .
outstanding dear. . Good job.

And now nandu is gazni. ...
Short term memory loss. ..
Good. .. interesting. .
really amazing work. . Keep it up.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
That was unwxpected... will Nandhu figure it all out I wonder...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hiii guys ...this is the next part of the story...
part 8:
manik was more than happy . he was really surprised at her innocence and behaviour...

at cabirs home ,

navya : cabir , yeh sab kuch...kya hogaya ... cabir (going near him) tumhe nahi lagta , nandini kuch zyada hi sweet hai...i mean itna sab kuch aur..., itni jaldi ...kaise (thinking of how she forgot things ) ... mahaan hai woh...

cabir : actually..madhubhala ...i think ur right this time , seriuosly

navya feeling proud , lifting her shoulder and tapping her back... cabir noticing all this..

cabir : hello, madhubalaa...hello ..kya hai

navya : nahi ... tum kya bol rahe the ..

cabir : haan...woh i was telling kii... nandini was behaving something weird...hai naa...but anyways i m happy that everything is finally good (thinking:otherwise i would have to work on it ...) [smiling]( thinking: now ill have to deal only with u ...but r u actually a problem...huh...leave it) and goes from there ..

in hospital ,

nandini : (to chachi) chachi, is everything alright ... aapko nahi lagta u were rude to manik... aap hi kehti thi naa ,he's like srk ..

chachi doesn't care at all she keeps doing her work without caring ...

nandini : ( holding her hands ) chachi...kuch hua hai kya ... y u ignoring him... i know kuch toh hua hai ... kya hua hai... something is wrong i guess.

chachi : nandu ... yeh tum pooch rahi ho(surprised )... tumne dekha nahi.. woh kaise behave kiya tumhare saath..(cupping her face in his hands ).meri beti ke saath (angrily) , oh meri phool jaisi nandu..

nandini was puzzled . she thought ..am i missing something...chachi kya bol rahi hai ... wat did he behave to me ... arey..wat he did to me was long back then... how did chachi come to know .. (she thought to herself)[haan..somebody is planing against us... i need to tell this to manik .]

nandini quickly picks up the phone and dials his number

on the side , manik is all excited to recieve the phone call...

manik : hey...nandini .. how are you ?

nandini: im fine and missing u(blushing)

manik : so ...(thinking of surprising her) ...k...bye

nandini : hello...manik ...(looking at the phone)...aiyyappa...he again hang up on me ..(angry cutely) [thinking] its good u hang up ... ill tell him wen i see him next time ...telling something like that to monster manik through phone is a very abd idea...(smiling thinking of him)

after sometime talking to chachi and spending time with rishabh she fell asleep

chachi ( slowly moving hands through nandu's hair) meri beti itni acchi aur bholii hai (thinking of all see saw in the mms ) ... phir bhi usne manik ko maaf kar diyaa.

chachi and rishabh leave from after she sleeps off..

just then manik enters the room ... he comes and kisses her forehead...she smilingly wakes up .. and holds his hands ..

nandini : manik ... one more please ...(showing her cheeks)

manik: mmm really...(raising his eyebrows) ..k

and he slowly gives her a small kiss on her cheeks . she then shows him her other side cheek...and asks him to kiss her there by keeping her finger there... manik continues to kiss...(bg: tu jo hai to main hoon...) he then holds her face in his hands and is about to kiss on her lips ...

precap :doctor comes and says to manik : retrograde amnesia
all are shocked .
I hope u liked this part...lots of excitement coming up...please do tell me ur comments and opinions ...thank u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely...Nandhu doesn't know but everyone else does... but hate that chachi don't like Manik seems wrong... anyway looking forward to more MANAN cuteness...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Yay I was right
Update asap i need to know more

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