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shammuuu

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hii guys ...this is a new fan fiction which came into my mind so thought of writing it ..I don't know if everyone will like it or not but please let me know whatever it is

part 1 :

manik is caught by the police and is taken away as Nandini gave the witness in favour of soha by answering that she is not sure whether he is involved in murder or not ... Nandini goes behind manik to explain to him but as usual manik is all angry and heart broken on the fact that she didn't support him wen he wanted to be with him the most...

Nandini : manik...manik ...pls listen to me once...ill explain everything..(crying very badly)

manik does not listen and leave from there..with the police...

soon she sees nyonika leaving from there too...

Nandini goes to nyonika and tells her that : Ma'am please save manik...he's angry with me ...I don't know why..he knows I never lie..but did I do any mistake ..you told me everything ...and I told the same way...then y this happened ma'am..

nyonika acting all innocent tell her that ... : Nandini im not sure wat happened...ill just check it out ..k..and she leaves acting very concerned .

all this time Nandini feels she did not do any wrong and she was completely confused ... she runs to navya...

in classroom,

navya: Nandini yeh tumne kya kiya...tum aise kaise bol sakthi ho...

Nandini : navya...mein ne kya kiya...I just told the truth na and moreover wat ma'am told me to do..i don't understand wat happened..

navya: kya...tum kya bol rahi ho...(looking at Nandini surprised)

Nandini : haa navya ... meinne sirf wahi kiya jo ma'am ne kaha...she told me by saying this he will be freed of all the charges...and she said that I had fainted and that that was the truth .

navya thinks that something is really fishy and she needs to talk to cabir...

in canteen

FAB5 is really disturbed ...

Alya : that loser Nandini...what the hell...how can she do such a thing guys

Mukti : ya..that behnjii...she ( getting really angry) I really feel like smashing her...how could she ...shes nuts or wat...we were doing so much to save him...and all spoiled because of her...(worried) I just hope manik is all right ...I really don't know wats going on with him...

in police station...

as soon as manik is about to enter the jail...nyonika enters there with mr. khurana and says stop...

nyonika...: inspector...im mrs. nyonika malhotra ...( attitude clearly shows off) im here to take my son...hes not going to enter in there (looking at the jail) ...and how dare you ( acting being all very concerned for manik )

mr. Khurana ( acting as if he was forced to take back the case as nyonika had pleaded him to do so as she was concerned for her son): I withdraw my case and I don't have any complaint against anyone and he leaves ..

before leaving..mr khurana looks at nyonika...signaling her that its done wat she wanted ...

manik walks out of the police station ... he was all completely heart broken ..he had tears in his eyes ...he was filled with anger and couldnot think of anything else...just that Nandini betrayed him...she broke his trust...

Nandini still sitting with navya thinks ( as she thinks she did right after telling the truth..as she believes that to be the truth and moreover she does not understand as she thinks she just did wat his mother asked her to do)

flash back...

nyonika...walking fast ...all concerned for manik...and comes to Nandini...

nyonika..: Nandini ...hi dear...how are you

Nandini : ma'am how is manik and wats going on ..

nyonika : I want a favour from you please..

Nandini : anything Ma'am ...

nyonika.: Nandini..i just saw this video ...(showing her the video edited) ... Nandini I think it happened because of manik( acting all heartbroken) I think this time even I cant save my son ( 😭)...( thinking for a moment and noticing Nandini) ..see Nandini...I talked to the lawyer and he said that if u'll tell him the truth then their is hope as hell do something like u know that self defence thing..etc...please tell him wat you saw in this video..please I request you...kk

Nandini was already confused and after hearing she was convinced that after saying this her love will be saved ...she decided to tell...

flashback ended...

Nandini :(thinking to herself) manik please listen to me once...ill forgive u for everything...I love u so much...just let me explain u everything..

as soon as Nandini come out of the room, she sees manik standing in the corridor with FAB 5 and she was convinced that wat she did was right and he was saved ...

she starts walking to manik...

fab 5 discuss to him about wat happened..

precap:

fab 5 and Nandini

Nandini and manik confrontation...

manik ignore Nandini..

guys I hope ull liked it...please do write to me ur any feeling about wat I have written...every comments will be welcomed...

Edited by shammuuu - 9 years ago

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Natashaaaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congo dear 4 new story its interesting but can u plz reunite manan soon.

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shammuuu

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 2:

Nandini was more than happy to see manik for she did not know what was going inside his mind .Nandini comes running to manik and holds his hand ..she is very happy..she is just about to say something ...suddenly

alya : you.. Nandini ..you still have the courage to come and stand in front of us..i really don't know how shameless you are .

Mukti : Nandini just go before I lose my temper and smash you

( Nandini all this time looks questioning and innocently towards them...she had tears in her eyes. She was heart broken ...she just wanted to tell them everything ...but ...she with tears in her eyes. Says )

Nandini : Manik ...y u being so rude to me ... U know naa I don't tell lies and see because of wat I said all your charges are freed naa...(content and having tears)...( according to her , as nyonika told charges were free because of wat she said...which was not true...but manik didn't know of anything between nyonika and Nandini..)

manik just pulls her from there and takes her to a corner...and says

manik: Ms Nandini murthy...thank you so much for whatever you have done...I don't want any more of your help..or anything.., Nandini...do you even know how it feels being betrayed by someone so closeu betrayed me ...wat do you think..i bloody murdered soha...(Nandini about to say something- manik holds her very close and tight...just shut up..today ill say , u'll listen...get it)

Nandini could not believe wat was going on...she looked at him feeling just numb...

Nandini : manik y u know naa wat happened?

manik :Nandini u told me once that ur ashamed of being associated with me...today I break all my relations with u...dare you even come near me...I HATE YOU...I HATE YOU FROM THE BOTTOM IOF MY HEART...

Nandini crying very badly...she looks at him as to she does not know wat happened. She thinks something has gone really wrong ...as she cant figure out why he was so angry wither even after she saved him..(according to her)

she sees manik walking away from her(looking at him tear eyed)...suddenly he comes back to her and says : Nandini murthy don't even think i'll just let you go...ill make you realise the exact pain of betraying me and fab5...ill make u feel like hell...youll see a real monster this time ..

Nandini ... doesnot know what to do...shes goes to navya..and tell her wat all happened ...

navya listens patiently and consoling her that everything will be fine soon...she takes her fone out and call cabir..cabir reaches there ..

navya : cabir , tumne suna Nandini kya bol rahi hai...

cabir : Nandini ...even I cant believe wat happened...tum yeh sab ...(looking puzzled)kyyaa kiyaa.

Nandini : par nyonika ma'am ne...

cabir :(interrupting her) stop...(as if he didn't get wat she said) who...

Nandini : nyonika ma'am

cabir : (looking serious) ..kyaa kaha ussne...

Nandini : she told me that ... if I say wat she told me... then manik will be free..she also showed me a video..and you also told me naa...( cabir looks questioningly)that he's very impulsive wen he is angry ?

cabir : do have the slightest idea wat kind of a misunderstanding has been caused...even I may be not able to help you this time ...

Nandini looks really worried and crying...

precap:

Nandini and nyonika ma'am

cabir helping Nandini

manik hates Nandini.

pls tell me wat you think about the update...any comments whatever is most welcome...😊

Edited by shammuuu - 10 years ago

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nara26

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow nice story continu soon and pm me pleas 😊 😳

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shammuuu

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Posted: 10 years ago

hii guys thank you for a beautiful response ...so heres the third part... im sorry I have to keep them separated so that manik knows her value in his life instead of just taking her for granted...but promise u, manan will be together soon

part 3:

At malhotra mansion ,

judaai from badlapur plays in the background...

manik is shown sitting outside his house near the pool and thinking of all his beautiful moments with nandini...he then thinks..." how can she do this to me ...I really don't know ...(thinking of her and wat she said to him ...Nandini: see ur freed because of wat I said...y u been so rude to me ) y did she say that...but suddenly he remembers how she betrayed him and he throws the glasses kept near him...he shouts and says that he hates Nandini...SUNA TUMMNE ...I HATE U NANDINI MURTHY...I HATE YOU ...I WILL SHOW WAT MANIK DOES TO A PERSON HE HATES ...(the same old monster manik look is back on his face )

in college:

cabir : Nandini wat have you done ...?? arey yaar do u even know about nyonika...what the hell..do you know who she is in the first place ...so...(thinking: so Nandini was trapped) now wat to do...he holds her tight...Nandini ...wat will we do...???

Nandini is all shocked ...she doesn't know how to react...yaa..she is maniks mom naa...(she asks cabir)...: pls tell me cabir naa..., wats wrong...is everything kk..im sorry but I didn't get you...plss tell me naa.

cabir..: Nandini, you should be sorry but not to me, but to urself...

Nandini : huh cabir ( bit confused) wat do u mean ,

cabir : see Nandini , nyonika is maniks mom...but she is not the kind of person u thot she is ...from childhood onwards we only know her to be interested in money and power...that's it ...yaar...do u even realise ... she used this situation to get rid of you from maniks life...do u know that...(thinking for a sec) haa...now I know y she was showing so much concern for him in front of you...just to get you trapped ..

Nandini is all heart broken after hearing this from cabir...navya holds Nandini as she was about to breakdown..

cabir : Nandini...nandu...are you ok..???

Nandini :(crying very badly) : how can she do this to me...y..this happened...(judaai song from badlapur)

cabir tries to console her but she insists on meeting nyonika and leaves

Nandini walks through the corridor and suddenly collide with nyonika..

nyonika : hey..watch out...where the hell u think ur (suddenly looks at Nandini)...hii Nandini

Nandini :y did you do this ... ur his mom naa...how could you ... you convinced me to tell lies by telling its the truth... im asking y...

nyonika : who told you this..

Nandini :none of ur concern.. u told me its becoz I will tell that wat u asked me to tell...he was freed...but u lied to me

nyonika looking at her carelessly...ms.murthy ...do u even know who ur talking to ...and I confess whatever I did ...but can u prove it in front of manik...manik will never ever trust u...ms murthy ... anymore...(smiling in an evil manner) she just walks off

Nandini all heart broken thinks wat she will do now...she cries her heart out ..

Navya and cabir comes running... andtells her its k...(consolingly hugs her)

suddenly manik comes there ...

manik : cabir...I didn't know ...this commoner is more important than me to u...(then looking at Nandini withal his boiling anger)...well done miss murthy..pehle tumne jaise dhruv ko use kiya ( remembering how dhruv hit him because of her ) now u really using cabir...nice...great ...

cabir..: shut up manik..

manik : cabir : tumhe isse sympathy jataana hai to its k...don't try to even talk to me about it...FROM TODAY I DECLARE THAT I, MANIK MALHOTRA BREAKS ALL RELATION WITH MS. NANDINI MURTHY...

Nandini wanted to explain but he pushes her and ask her to get lost...

Nandini all heart broken goes to home...she cries her heart out...remembering wat all had happened and how she was fooled and wat manik just told her...she couldn't just bear the pain...she slowly cries to sleep...

next morning :

in college ...

Nandini comes to canteen and finds Fab 5 sitting there ... suddeny she hears announcement with cctv footage shown in canteen

its shown how Nandini breaks nyonika 's antique piece ...the voice continues...guys since she only does wats right ...don't you think she has to pay the right price for it ??

the people sitting in the corridor ..together says..YESSS...

Manik then takes the mic from her hand and asks her :(kind of polite..) so ms. murthy how are you willing to pay the price ...

Nandini was happy in one way as she was thinking that she can be his spot again and will get him back again this time

Nandini nods her head and tell him: i'm ready to do anything you ask me to...

manik : ( in a way of insult) loudly...she's willing to do anything ...wow...so...do one thing...pay it...25 lakhs..

Nandini looked at him wide eyed...

manik : sorry...poor nandu..I forgot ur financial status...u bloody cheap...(interrupted)

Nandini was all tear filled...she tells him: pls manik im listening to u ...doesn't mean u call me anything

manik: wow...look at her attitude ..(.turning to mukti.)..kya kare yaar iska ...do one thing she said naa she will do anything ...mukti keep her as our spot...Nandini is officially from now on FAB5 spot...

precap:

Nandini crying very badly

nyonika about to slap Nandini

cabir holding her hand ...

I just hope u guys like this part...whatever plss let me know ...thank u

Edited by shammuuu - 10 years ago

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chatrath5

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome n plz continue soon

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shammuuu

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Posted: 10 years ago

hiii guys...this is the 4th part of my story...

part 4:

everyone is very shocked hearing wat manik just said ...manik was very angry and was about to leave wen Nandini holds his hands and ask him : manik..do you really wantthis for me ...you actually mean wat u just said ...manik looked at her emotionally and said "yess" ...I really want this for you..i told u ...ill make your life hell...u willfind it impossible to even live here ...

Nandini is taken a back... she couldn't believe wat she just heard ...she was so hurt she wanted to end her life ...suddenly cabir ,dhruv and navya come to her and tell her that everything is going to be finre

manik without her knowing looks back with tears in his eyes ...he was so full of pain...it seemed he would just breakdown but he controlled...

Nandini sits there crying so badly...suddenly she gets up and tells them that she wants to meet nyonika..

she comes all angry to her and gets inside the cabin ...

Nandini: ma'am how cheap are you ... your so cheap , I can't explain it to u...sick lady

nyonika just got all stormed up and was about to slap her...: how dare you talk to me like that ,you. Suddenly cabir comes inside and holds her hand

cabir : hey... watch out ... k..cool lady...cool..( smiling) we know wat you were upto...so just let her go kk...u know naa ...the day manik finds out about u...ur finished lady..ur over ...

all leave from there ...nyonika thinks...Nandini I know my son if he has told he 'll make u see hell...then trust me it will hurt you badly...(evil smile)

in class room..

.manik is restless thinking of wat he just said to Nandini out there...but again his hatred fills his mind and he is all pissed off again . he gets up ad goes to the announcement room...

manik : ms. Nandini murthy..I mean FAB5 SPOT ...please come and meet me in the corridor ...

he then comes out and tells the poens to keep a table and chair ready ...

Nandini comes there ...

manik : (seeing Nandini) haa...tho spot...do ur first task... (thinking) u know wat actually ur very lucky...saying this he goes to the announcement room and ask all the poens and securities to assemble in the corridor ...he calls mukti..

manik.: mukti..u remember naa... who tumhara dare ...yaad hai isne complete nahi kiya tha...right .. so why don't we make her do it again...

all are surprised at this... and my dear alya ...you have our cam ready rt...(looking at cabir) since our cameraman is least bothered so...

mukthi :(all angry) hey u (looking at Nandini) come here ... desi look is played ... dance now... (manik just leaves from there)

Nandini is all heart broken and thinks: manik I know..i did a big mistake and as u said I betrayed you...but u also did somewat like this to me(remembering musicana nite and manik leaving her heart broken) ...I forgave u naa... I tried to explain it to u...but u...ur doing all this to me...ill never forgive you anymore...never ever...

announcement : ms.murthy is needed in principals office immediately...

Nandini crying goes from there... she walks into the office

Nandini :please may I comein sir

nyonika : its me dear...Nandini i'm glad u came

Nandini : now wat

nyonika : actually nothing (looking at principal) give it to her

Nandini opens the letter and reads ... she is taken a back

nyonika : so u got the message...I must say u really impress me ...now get lost and never evr try to even come back

Nandini:pls...don't do this ...wat will I do

nyonika :im sorry ... but manik asked me to do it...so...and now I don't want to see ur face ...just get lost...

Nandini : please ma'am...

nyonika ask principal to hold her hand and throw her out ..

as soon as she comes out she sees manik

Nandini: manik (pulling him aside ) manik...u really ending it naa...u hate me so much...I did a big mistake ... but ur not even ready to listen to my explanation ... wenever u did anything ...I always gave u a second chance naa ... this time(a bit angry ) i'm not..im leaving u..ill never come in front of you anymore ..how can I ..u expelled me naa ...thank you..just one more thing..will u be able to forget me that easily..

manik : yess...

Nandini couldn't take it anymore , she turns around and runs from there...she thinks :manik I wouldn't forgive u this time ..not anymore

suddenly Nandini trips and fall from the stairs...everybody are shocked ...dhruv and cabir comes running ...they see her fainted and bleeding .. dhruv carries her to the hospital

dhruv : to Nandini - open ur eyes ...Nandini..

cabir drives them to hospital along with navya...

precap:

cabir tells manik about nyonikaa

Nandini serious

manik heartbroken

pls guys ...anything just let me know...thank u somuch ...plss do comment...

Edited by shammuuu - 10 years ago