naa jeena tere bina - manan ff updated part 36 page 40 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hii...I just thought ill update it completely in two parts...finally manan will be together soon...so much of romance...emotions..etc coming up..

part5:
dhruv is carrying Nandini and comes inside the hospital...he doesn't know how to react...cabir and navya comes running behind...cabir comes to the doctor..
cabir..: doctor ...please aap kuch kijiye ...shes lost lot of blood...she fell from the stairs
doctor immediately asks the nurse to do the dressing and start of the treatement ..
all are worried ...
in college :
manik comes running down after hearing to the chaos.. manik come to the place and see blood ..he is unable to figure out what happened.. suddenely he hears a guy saying
arey wo jho manik ki gf hoa karti thi naa..uski toh badi accident hoa hai aaj..she fell from the stairs so badly ..I don't think she can make through it...itna blood bhi lost hoa..
manik was shocked ..it was like somebody just stole his life away .. he couldn't believe it...he went to the spot and screamed her name out...he didn't know wat happened... he asked the guy wer was she ...guy responded saying he doesn't know..
in hospital:
doctor comes out of the icu..cabir comes to the doctor
cabir: doctor ..how is she ?? she will be alright naa...
doctor : I cant say anything now..we are going too do some tests on her and also taking her for x ray and mri scan so pls fill complete the formalities from the reception... and the doctor left
cabir comes to navya : yaar wat all happened ? nandu will be alright naa?? ( tearfully)
dhruv : please cabir humara nandu is a fighter ...she will not give up...remember naa how she is from the beginning (remembering old times wen they wer fighting, the punch)
navya : haa sahi bol raha hai dhruv...cabir plese don't worry..
cabir being nostalgic... navya ..tumhe yaad hai ..that musicana night wen I was beaten by harshad ..I still remember how she cared for me... ...suddenly he remembered to call manik..
cabir : dhruv did u imform him ...
dhruv.. :yess I messaged everyone they will just reach..
manik is shown coming running...he comes and hugs cabir anddhruv..
navya: manik..tumne ek baar bhi suna...who kya kehna chahthi thi ..nahi naa...kya tum bol gaye tumne uske saath kya kya kiya hai...so much of hatred ...u know something .. (shouting) yeh sab tumhare maa ki vajah sehai...samjhe tum
manik is confused..he looks at cabir ...cabir explains him watever the doctor said and wat all must be done
manik: cabir ..yeh navya kya bol rahi thi...
cabir : manik ..u hear it rt bro...nyonika ma'am did all this just to separate u and Nandini...I don't know but iss baar u werereally rude on her...she was completely finished
manik all heart broken ... he just sat there crying like a small baby..he din't know wat to tell Nandini ... he regretted whatever he told her...
suddenly he sees the doctor coming out and asking them to take her to the operation theatre...
manik runs to the doctor ...
manik: doctor wat happened
doctor : im sorry but shes not responding ..we need to defibrillate her immediately...
doctor about to leave ...manik holds and asks him for the permission to meet her
doctor realises the pain in his eyes and lets him meet her...
manik goes near Nandini...he holds her hand.. her fingers were ice cold...he just suddenly hugs her..he puts his head on her chest...he asks her to get up...he sees shes not responding ...he was completely lifeless..he cals her but it seems shes not listening🥺
manik starts to cry loudly...nurse takes him outside ...he becomes very uncontrollable...he screams im sorry Nandini...how could I...im sorry...pls forgive me once more naa please ...ill never hurt u anymore ...please..
I gets a flashback of everything that happened ...(bg music : jo bheji thi dua plays from shangai)
he remembers how she told him that she will never see him again...he comes out of his dream and screams nooo...I will not let u leave me ..I cant live without u...I need you...plss...😭😭
doctors are trying a lot...all FAB5 come there...they come to know about Nandini and nyonikkaa...all are sad and regret to wat they did and told Nandini...manik thinks to himself :
he suddenly gets a glimpse in his mind wer Nandini tells him : manik y r u been rude at me ...see I told that's y ur freed of all charges naa...)realising that nyonika must have convinced her and she didn't know about nyonika...Nandini just knew that nyonika was my mom...shittt... wat did I do...how could I...iss baar bhi meinne sirf apne bhaare mein sochaa.
manik walks to cabir and tells him...cabir..yaar meine kya kar diya..Nandini had told me ...I didn't realise it at that time ...tear filled he holds cabirs hand and tell him...cabir I cant live without her yaar...wat did I do...I literally killed her yaar...mein use khonaa nahi chahthi...this time nyonika...she is really going to pay back for wat she did... ill forget shes related to me in anyways..if anything happens to my star...
after sometime doctor comes out and says hes fine...shes responding ...now we need to do some tests and procedure ... (looking at manik) tapping his shoulder...don't worry..just pray...she will be fine...
manik was relieved ... he had got his life back...he hugs the doctor and just leaves
manik: plstake care of my star...no more pain for her ...enough.. ill just be back...now nyonika here I come ...😡
in college...
nyonika: (talking to mr khurana )thank u...atlast that low life is out of space..how is soha..[ as soon as she ask this..manik reaches outside and listens to their conversation] is she fine??interrupted by maniks entry...
manik : (storming towards her) how could u...ur such a...because of u...my Nandini(he starts crying) and the realising...wat did u just ask...soha is alive ...y..u...😡
nyonika : do u really think I will answer u tht...just shut up and get lost
manik: this time u crossed all ur limits ...ill not forgive u...just wait and watch...and he leaves ..
manik is just lifeless...
precap:
Nandini opening eyes
theres lots coming...please do comment...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story plz continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
superb update...
update next part soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update
I cant see manan like this
Plzzz get them together
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update. update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love this... poor Nandhu, but atleast Manik knows all now...wonder how he will win her back...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How will he convince nandu? She was very hurt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hiii guys...thank you so much...for such a lovely response ... so this is the 5th part ...here it is...
part 6:
behind the music wing :
manik is all broken and is weeping very badly.
manik( thinking to himself) : wat did I do...shit...y wasn't I thinking straight ...shit...[ he starts remembering all the time he has hurt her ...] I should have listened to her ...[remembers her saying to him that whatever she said was for him ]... Nandini i'm so sorry...I know I hurt u many times [ remembering , Nandini: manik.can't I get a second chance ..manik can u forget me so easily ]{bg score: yeh dard e dil ki -yaariyan}...I can't even say sorry to u for wat I have done to u..please don't leave me Nandini...please ...he starts crying and just breaks down... [remembering Nandini in hospital...] oh shit ...I need to go...
manik is showing driving the car...bg: muskurane ki vajaah tum ho ...hes all disturbed ...
in hospital:
doctor comes out of the room and tells cabir to sign the form...cabir all worried; which form..doctor..is she fine..nothing will happen to her naa ...any complications
doctor tells him that since she fell from a large number of steps she has some fractures and she needs o have surgery as there is a blood clot behind her head so..[tapping on his shoulder ] don't worry ...trust me ...ill do my best ..k..
cabir : doctor...kuch bhi kijiye ..please save her ...please [holding doctors hand and pleading ]
chacha , chachi and rishabh come running ...they are all worried .. they didn't know how to react ... she comes to dhruv..
chachi :beta tum wahi ho naa...(crying ) beta kya hua Nandini ko...plss kuch bolo naa ...
dhruv(shocked) : chachi...woh..who..( he couldn't just talk..)( he thinks who informed them)...
chachi : arey..woh..woh ...kyaa..kuch bolo naa...meri nandu kaisi hai...
chacha just sits there crying ...with rishabh
chachi : (to everyone) koi to bolo naa...who zin...zinda...(crying with hands on her mouth)
cabir comes to her and hold her hand ...nahi chachi , aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...don't worry...woh theek ho jaayegii...k(assuring her with his eyes)
dhruv comes to chachi and sits near her ...: chachi ..hum aapko phone karne wale the but we didn't want to worry u..( doubtfully ) par chachi..how u came to know ... manik...??
chachi : who beta ..mere phone pe ek sms aaya showing her fall continued by a message that she was now here ... bte ..Nandini always talk about you ... tum uske sache dosth ho...aur wo( angry )
manik comes running to the hospital...he sees chachi there...he goes to her ...but surprisingly...she turns her face from him...manik is shocked ... chachi doesn't even care of him..she behaves very differently...she was crying bad
dhruv comes to manik : manik..this time u crossed all ur limit . kyun manik...kyun.. should I remind u of all the tortures u have done to her...(angry voice ) should I...and after wat ever u did to her, I have seen her forgiving u everything, everytime.. smiling ,smiling ...k..(nodding his head:yes) arey she did ...I wont say no...par itni badi sazaa..tum to usse pyaar karte te naa...phir yeh sab y... aaj Nandini ke saath jo bhi hua naa, its because of u alone ...she doesn't deserve this...its not that she didn't tell u...she told naa...she gave u a clue naa..that she was told to do this...then y...u did it on purpose ...u bloody tried to kill her, manik... (he pulls manik to the icu room window and shows him her in serious condition) [ restFAB3 tries to stop him ]...ab toh ur very happy naa...mil gayi thasalli...yaa torturing abhi bhi baakii hai...hai to bata do...(manik is listening to all this with a helpless, tear filled and pain filled face ) you know wat ...I tell u..Nandini ko toh naa aaj mar hi jana chahiye( suddenly listening to this manik becomes angry and slaps him and tells him to shut up)
manik :(pleading) dhruv please buddy...aise ...don't tell...please I need her ...(chachi interrupting)
chachi : y u need her...kyun... use phir roolaane ke liye...arey main toh soch thi ki tum uske shahrukh...par mein na galat thii..manik , beta mana tha na meinne tumhe ...tumhe ussey us public ke saamne nachvaane mein koi sharam nahi aayi..tumhe bura bhi nahi laga...uski izzat ka kya...unke sabke saamne...chiii...manik...(wiping her tears ) tum aajse Nandini se door raho...samje tum...(emotionally)tumhe pata hai , who meri beti hai aur meri betiko kuch bhi ho naa...mein woh dekh nahi sakthi...
manik is just heart broken ...he lost everything...
manik : chachi...please ek baar...let me explain...please..
chachi : tum jaao...manik...jaao yahan se ...( pushed him)
manik wanted to be with Nandini...cabir understands him...
cabir : manik, bro don't worry , mein baat karoonga dhruv aur chachi se...u stay out just for now...
manik leaves remembering Nandini asking for a chance (bg: muskurane ki) he thinks ...I want u..ill not leave u nor let u leave me ...
Nandini is taken to the operation theatre , all are worried and waiting outside
dhruv takes alyas hand and ask her not to worry as whatever she said and did was on maniks order so its k...don't feel bad (alya hugs him and ask ) Nandini will be fine naa...dhruv assures her ...
after waiting for long Nandini 's surgery is over ... all this time risabh is looking down but as soon as he sees dhruv..he gets the attack...dhruv goes away... cabir tell chachi to take him from there as maybe he can't handle the stress... he assures her that he will keep her updated... and that she doesn't need to worry as they all there ... chacha ,chachi and rishabh leave ...
doctor comes out and tell that the surgery was successful but nothing can be said without her coming out of the sedation and that she Is now out of danger ...cabir is happy and soon he tells FAB5 about it including manik..
after 3 hours Nandini opens her eyes ... first she sees manik standing in front of her (pleading)
precap:
nandini's reaction...
please whatever u feel be free to comment me ...thank u...
Edited by shammuuu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very good, I like your writing, while it's not perfect it's easy to understand (except the hindi part because i find it difficult to understand but thats just me 😳)
So I have a feeling that you might suprise us, I wont write what I am thinking, i will just wait if i guessed right or not 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hope nandini wud excuse manik
Cont soon dear

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