**story of my life **manan ff ( part 34)5/7 pg 138 - Page 46

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awsum update post the next one sooner ... loved manik and nyonika's convo😊

aweosme yr
loved nandini nyonika ocnvo

it was awsome...next part soon plz... 😊

ohho awsm part yaar loved it...
plz post nxt part as soon as possible

Awesome going...!! 👏

plzzz pm me if u can...!!

its was osm ...update next part soon

superb pls next part jaldi de dena

first of all A BIG THANK YOU.. ur ff is juz amazing.. i dun hv wordz to describe it..
i loved many thingz..
manan lovez nandini so much.. he knwz abt manik too..
all the fab4 are settled..
the new fab5 n the old fab5..
in sm scenez uh made me cry.. lyk the manan confrontation n soha kidnapping manan..
manan hv qualities of both nandini n manik..
i rly hate soha.. i dun evn lyk her face!!
awww.. manik brushed so many tymz juz coz soha kissed him..
gud to see nyonika getting along wid nandini.. c shared her feelingz wid her..
i hv juz 1 doubt.. manik forgot abt his nyt wid nandini.. sex.. hw cn sm1 forget his/her first sex?? ya fir manik sleepz wid a lot of galz?? kinda curious..
there is a lot of thing to comment but i cnt.. i read all the 20 chapz in 1 go..
yes.. i rmbr.. uh shud edit ur first page n add an index there.. itz rly difficult to check through all the pagez foh the chapz.. plz do it..
i hv 1 complaint too.. y didnt uh send me pm?? m already in ur buddy list.. uh hv send me pm foh ur another update (if i rmbr correctly) but nt dis 1..
plz continue soon.. i knw 12thiez hv hw much pressure.. juz cmpltd it n nw m relieved.. pheww... focus on ur studiez first..
n plz dun forget to pm me.. will b waiting..