**story of my life **manan ff ( part 34)5/7 pg 138 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awsm update
lovd it
cont soon
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#12
Very interesting start..
Pls continue soon..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Superb...it was mesmerising...continue soon...plz plz plz..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..
Suoerb
This is amazing..
Manan? Manan is manik nandu's son!?
Pls cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its quite interesting..
but i wish yeh manan humare MaNan ko unite karde.
and one more thing dont let nandu get married with other guy. it will hurt.
and manan will be an adopted child of nandu or any relative's.
i know i am thinking tooo much.😉
pm me next. and update asap
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its quite interesting👍🏼😉
Plz continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow I was literally helding my breath, it was really good
Poor nandu, manik you choose wrong 😡
You should have fought for your love
If dhruv says bell like a dog would you do it 😡
Very disappointed in you
Nandu of course loves you enough to let you choose dhruv

Nandu be strong and happy
Please pm me
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Wow!!!
Loved it!!!
Amazing concept!!!
Continue Soon!!!
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its so interesting epi I just loved it hey is manan the child of nandini and manik.plzzz update soon plzzz and pm mee
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys...thank u 😊 for ur lovely..comments..love u all...
Here we go ...for ur most awaited part...The confrontation

Chap 3
Manik and nandini reach their respective home...
Murthy villa
Nandini: Uff...manan he always troubles me...(she calls yo hospital(which owned by nandini...but Dr.rastana handle it) Dr..aaj apko hi sambhalana hoga sab ..u know na..manan uske frndz as rahe hai...so plzz
Dr.rastana:chill..nandu ..u and ur little monster...chalo thik hai...bye take care..
She goes and starts preparations for their party..
Kavya and Sameer and manan reach at home with his 2friends manayata..and Chirag
Manan: Mom!! We r here
Nandini: Don't scream...i m here. ...btw..u all freshen up and play.. I'll arrange snacks
Sameer: Aunty..we kept ur promise...we didn't bully anyone at SCHOOL!!!

They r playing outside

At Dhruv house...
Alya: Kaka...just tell Driver to pick Sameer andkavya up
Cabir : Arey..alya Manik aur main jata Hu..we all have fun
Manik:what?? ..plzz cabir
Cabir: Chal..na uske beautiful aunty dekte hai..come
Manik: Tu nahi sudrega

Murthy villa..
Sameer : Main washroom ja raha Hu
Nandini: Okay..
Kavya : Aunty ..may I help u in kitchen
Nandini: Ya sure
They walk towards kitchen
Kavya : Aunt...humare Patna Mein na..( she keeps on repeating the same..and nandini smiles remembering Navya)

Outside
Manbir reach over there
Manik : Arey yahi place ha na..Sameer ke beautiful aunty Ki
Cabir: Yahi toh ha..
They walk and see some children bullying someone
Manik: Ye..dekh..they are bullying some one..chal let's stop them yaar
Cabir: Yeh tu keh raha hai
And walk towards them
Manik : Seperating them...voh..boys..assey kiski KO bully nahi kartey..good boys assey nahi karte
( kid turns out to be manan..and his two friends)
Manan : Watch out dude
And the other boy runs
Manan: Look because of u I lost my spot( stomping his feet)
Cabir : Spot!!(and giggles)
Manik: Stop it cabir...kya hass raha hai
And manan stands on table beside Manik and pours bucket of water on him
Manik: What the???
Cabir: Shit
Manan: U have to pay for the loss...u r my spot now
Cabir towards Manik..slowly in his ear
Cabir: Yeh..tera beta toh nahi
Manik : Very funny!!(pointing finger towards manan) u have to pay for this
Cabir: Manik..chal chod ..beta u say sorry to him
Manan: Manan Murthy kiski KO sorry nahi kehta ..get that( same as manik's attitude)
Manik: U r finished..little monster ( and walk towards him)
And his two friends come between them to defend his
Manyata: Don't u dare touch ur friend..before touching him u have to cross us
Manik: Okay !! And walk towards him
Now manan comes between
Manan: Don't u dare touch them
Cabir is just simply watching them
Chirag pushes cabir in pool..
And splash colour on manik( as they have pool party)
Manan: Don't u mess wid FAB 5
Manik and cabir: FAB5!!
cabir: Yeh bhauthua...u catch them..lets show whose's FAB5
And they scatter and start running..manik runs behind manan
Nandini: Comes with cookie jar: Boy's..cookies
And manan goes behind her..hiding himself behind nandini
Nandini: Manan...!! ( and jar is about to fall and Manik catches as caught her fireflies)
And he gets up and shock to see nandini after six yrs )
Cabir: Manik!! Mar Gaya ya...kitna baghya..mujhe
But Manik is lost in nandini..they have eyelock
Cabir: Nandini!! ( breaks their eyelock)
Manan: Mom! U know them
And manbir r shocked
Cabir: Mom!!..beta..padosi ko aunt ko mom nahi kehte
Manan: Excuse!! She's my mom
Cabir: Seriously
Nandini looking at maniknods yes
Manik: U r married
Manan: Toh Mein kya aasman se tapka hai
Nandini: (starts laughing) ye..hal tumhara kis ne kiya
Manik: Ask ur son( giving angry vibes to manan)
Nandini: Say sorry to them..and u promised me u will not
Manan: Sorry...(in his ears)mom ne kaha..isliye
Nandini: Guys...tu bheeg Gaye ho..come change...
Cabir:. Change
Nandini: Give me ur clothes I'll dry them
Manik goes in nandini's room...and sees nandini and manan pic on wall
Actually Manik is curious to see her husband ...
Manik: Who's that idiot?... Koi pic bhi kahi
Precap: Manik invites nandini and new fab5 to dhruv's house...


Thank u guyzz for ur wonderful reply..

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