MaNan FF:'Love Keeps US Together' Thread 2 Link - PG 1

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Ananya Nair

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Posted: 10 years ago

#571

Wow...awesome..u jzt kept up with the suspense..

Loved the last part ..❤️😳

Update soon..

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Lovelife19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#572

sorry,sorry m late.. didn't checked the scarp.. how could i do this.. itna lovely update maine ab padha chi..chi..chi.. shame on me..!! now about update... aliya died in nandu's dream 😆.. such a lovely update.. through out felt lyk it is like realistic... Nandu's scardness, manik consoling her, shower scene.. every thing was perfect very nicely described... especially i liked thier convo after shower n last scene..!! thanx for the scrap n cont soon..

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divvi22

@divvi22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#573

Hahaha. Shocked seriously..
Dream!! Alya alive too good..

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khadupam

@khadupam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#574

Awesome wonderful
Wow
Continue soon

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azwa

@fireroad99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#575

he had guts

i just love it

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#576

hehe manik kissed her and nandu my sweet just be strong
please do continue
bye sumi

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aryapk1997

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Posted: 10 years ago

#577

yeee kiss everywhere 😆

i have read all the parts but wasn't able comment as i have been too busy with holiday planning ,exams ,projects nd well ya writing ma own ff.

BUT this ff has soo much in it ,

humour ,suspense,romance, thrill,nd offourse such shocks u give.

iam seriously loving the story nd ur crisp writing .

story is so endearing .

aliya nd her death 🤣.don't worry manik is there to do it

nandini tensed is soo cute .

the updates are fantastic nd u too

love u dear🤗

nd u too keep smiling it suits u tooo 😃

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BrishtiDREAMER

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Posted: 10 years ago

#578

AWSM AWSM AWSM...MANIKS FAMOUS SMIRK IS BACK...CONTIBUE SOON AND PLS PM ME DEAR...:-)

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#579

nandu shocked manik rock
wow
loved it
please do continue
bye sumi

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@..Mellifluous..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#580

Originally posted by: drnidsur
resss😳😳😳...first ..soo happy 😉
unres
srslyyy
i m damn happy that aliya isnt dead ! although she is already carrying her death wish now :p
i loved the suspense u created
n yes their romance , and the kiss ...sigh !
i came out after a mock exam and read this ...n it made my day !...thank u
now i m waiating for more suspense ( just dont kill us instead of aliya this time :p)
and lots of more romance btw them ...
n yeahhh...do complain to ur mom...god ur soo cute harika ...🤣🤗
cont soon

hehehhe thank yu so much...

am glad that u loved it..

it really means alot..

hehe thank yu..am cute.wowieee..thank yu so much..

will continue soon...😳😳