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Posted: 10 years ago
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Will do..
thanks for reading and commenting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
lovely prologue
interesting concept
manik loving his parents is surely
very different
plz update soon
if possible pm me
waiting for the story to get unfold
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: chair1992

I am curious as how your manik is going to be

He had his parents love which he doesn't have in the show
Do pm me 😃

hehe ..maybe he will be somewhat different...
Yeah !! He has parents love in this one !!
Thank yu...I hope I keep ur curiosity...
Thanks for reading n commenting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

i will call u haruuu if u dont mind
awesome prologue
1 question kaha se lati ho itna uniq idea hahaha update soon

hehehe no problem...u can call me haruuu...
Am glad ki u found it awesome..,
Hehhe...welll mujhe bhi patah nahin...😉😆
Anyways thaks for reasing n commenting yar..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

quite interesting!!

plz pm me when you update next :)

Thanks ...am glad ki u found it interesting...
Will pm yu when I'll update...
Thanks for reading n commenting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimarious

lovely prologue
interesting concept
manik loving his parents is surely
very different
plz update soon
if possible pm me
waiting for the story to get unfold

Thank yu for the lovely comment...
Am glad ki u found it lovely...
Yeah !! manik loving his parents n vice versa is surely dicferent...
Will defo pm yu...
Thanks for reading n commenting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hai allah ek neyi story shuru horahi he aur maine ise ab para 😲 shame on me chi chi chi...sorry for de delay 😭
awesome prolouge totally diff concept interesting 😊 loved it 😃 cont soon n if possib do pm me 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aminahin

Hai allah ek neyi story shuru horahi he aur maine ise ab para 😲 shame on me chi chi chi...sorry for de delay 😭
awesome prolouge totally diff concept interesting 😊 loved it 😃 cont soon n if possib do pm me 😳

hehehhe...koi baat nahin..aise bade bade shahron main ...aise choti choti baatein hoti rehti
Hain...😉😆
Anyways...thanks ..am glad ki u found it intersting n different n awesome,.,
Means alot..
Will pm yu...
Thanks for reading and commenting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept update soon n pm me if possible
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MaNan FF : "Love Keeps US Together"


~CHAPTER 1~

Maa !!! Papa !!! Manik shouted as their parents left the world.He started crying so badly.He sat near them and he cried over his fate.he is just a 15 yrs boy.Suddenly door flew open and police entered and took him aside and took their parents.Manik was shouting Maaa !! Papa !!!

Manik woke up from his sleep.He was sweating.He remembered his parents.They say time heals but it was wrong for him.Today is the day his parents died.Today is a dreadful and terrible day for him.He cant forget what happened today.Hewill never forget too.Manik wiped his tears and went to have a shower.He just stood under the shower for hours,remembering his parents and the time they spent with him.He cried over his fate.He came out and got ready.

He wore white shirt and blue denim jeans .He went down where his chacha and chachi are doing pooja.They are his family after their parents.Though they cant take his parents place he accepted them.Dhruv came and hugged him.[Lemme tell yu that dhruv is his cousin.His brother]His best buddy.He hugged in return.He sat down along with him.His friends are present.They are looking at him.

Manik is seeing his parents portrait and he remembered all the moments he spent with him.how his mother used to run behind him to make him eat.How his father used to catch him.how they wen on vacatons and enjoyed over there.How they supported him in everything,'At night how they used to tell stories and how he used to share everything every little thing with them.How they all used to cook together and have fun .His parents were not his parents only but his best friends too.He remembered how he used to irritate his papa by calling his mama DARLING!!! His papa used to become possessive saying that she is his wife !!! He smiled remembering his papa !!!

That smile changes into tears in instant.They were all USED TO BE.Now they are not.Now he is all alone.Though he has friends,chacha,chachi no one can take their place and no one can give him that love.His thoughts were interrupyed by priest saying that pooja has completed.He did all the things which are told by the priest and he left to his room.His friends understood that it will be good if they left him alone.SO,they all left .

Manik went to his room and opened his album and he went through all the photos.He brought it to his heart and hugged it and cried his heart out..

Mama I miss you..Papa Miss you so much.Why you guys left me in this world.Without you guys its empty.Everything is lifeless. Mama you say time heals everything but you are wrong.Nothing healed .The scar is fresh like it happened yesterday .I wont forgive you people for leaving me alone is this cruel world !!I wont forgive you..

His tears dried and his eyes are blood shot red and he remembered everything that night.How his parents died.Though everone said that their parents died in car crash and he just hallucinating all things because he was in shock after his parents dies but he remembered every little thing about that night.How his parents were killed by a person.He shot their parents.He will find out who did it.Only this reason is keeping him alive.He will rip that person apart.He promised his parents that night.

He is waiting when he will grow up and kill those bas***ds.Now he is 20 and he will turn 21 soon.He is searching about his dad works.He rememberd that his dad is on research on something.But he doesnt what is it about.He thought of discussing it with his chacha but he drpped the idea because his chacha will think that he still didnt get over their parents death.How can he get over.they are not some thing to get over they are his life,his breath.

He got up and kept his album in its place . He grabbed his phone and called Cabir with whom he can share everything.His bestest buddy !!He told him to meet him in XYZ place.


Next Chapter : CHAPTER 2
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I know this part is full of Manik.I want to show his love and pain.I hope it is good and I mad upto ur expectations.U cans hare ur views .Do comment ur views and thoughts.How u want Manik to be? I'll take ur views into account also.DO hit like and comment.Silent readers u tooo..:) :) Sorry for grammar mistakes.Am not a good writer..So,..sorry for any mistakes..

For PM/Scrap..Like the posts.

Love,
Harika..Keep Smiling..It looks good on yu..:D :)


Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 10 years ago

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