Manan ff- Let Me Love You updated NOTE on pg 73 - Page 29

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Posted: 10 years ago
Love the set upda... can't wait for drunk Nandhu...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aryapk1997

haan 😆 chillu ka volcanic eruption hone wala tha just miss


bhejdia pm me link... abto chillu nhi chillasakti mai bahar aagayi post se! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: N_Niya


bhejdia pm me link... abto chillu nhi chillasakti mai bahar aagayi post se! 😃

sab seriously iam pissed off by mtnl wale 2:30 baaaj gaye sale line clear Ho hi nhi rahi .iam off .nd tanx u doin so much promotion of my ff. Now iam scared that I may embrass u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arre.. aisa kabhi nhi ho sakta.. I know u r d best writer...
tu jo b likhegi..It'd b awesome as always...
bas kabhi kabhi tere net company wale paka dete hai.. jaise aaj hua... 😛
waiting waiiting for tomorrow..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: N_Niya

Arre.. aisa kabhi nhi ho sakta.. I know u r d best writer...
tu jo b likhegi..It'd b awesome as always...
bas kabhi kabhi tere net company wale paka dete hai.. jaise aaj hua... 😛
waiting waiiting for tomorrow..


Iam thinking about chillu 😆 bechaari ab soch rahi hogayi humra discussion better tha aleasy post notice toh Ho raha tha 😆 .chal I kno tujhe neend nhi aayegi iam going to sleep with manan dreams tat I may include in the ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
You always make us laugh.. it's really funny
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Originally posted by: vanivartika

You always make us laugh.. it's really funny


Thanx yaar I feels gud to know my ff r making people laugh
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Posted: 10 years ago

Awsome update ! 😉

I'm waiting for Drunky nandu 😆
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Manik-gives questioning look-really

Nd gets into the house

Manik goes into her room nd sees she is not there nd ten checks in the kitchen

Manik -bar main hi woh wahan kyun jaagayegi nd suddenly hears a loud sound *THUD*

Nandini laughing -idar giri mai udar giri jaane kaaha mai kidar giri

Manik-nandini wat the u

Nandini-alele dekho kaun aaya hai kanta ka manik baba,alya ka baby,bobby ka hotty aaaye aaye

Manik-r u drunk

Nandini-nhiii mai pooja kar rahi hoon bar mai

Manik-u r impossible getup

Nandini-idiot get up hi kar rahi hoon 1 ghante se ho hi nhi raha .

Manik-aaah maybe its becoz u r giri hui ladki

Nandini-tat y I call u idiot manik,its becoz iam so down to earth

Manik-tries to help her get up

Nandini-leave me mai apne pair par khadi hona chahti hoon

Manik-u r serious

Nandini-serious he thi iss liye itni peeli

Manik-I mean how do u manage haan har bar kaise

Nandini-shhh har BAR nhi yee mera phela BAR hai. i don't drink u kno.

chalo pakkana band karo I want to dance

Manik-wat !!

Nandini-kya what ganna lagaooo naa

Manik-y should i

Nandini-nhi nhi mai manglore se apni chachi ko bulauna gaana on karne ke chup chap on karo naa

Manik-ok fine nd ons the music system.

Nd the song plays

Woo..!

Pehla ta kudi ne Ludhiana vi ni tappeya si

Tappeya si..

Pehla ta kudi ne Ludhiana vi ni tappeya

Puchhe bina gharo baahr per vi ni rakheya

Jado di madam ji shehar vich aai

Bas party diya galla kar di rehndi eh

Kudi Saturday Saturday kardi rendi eh

Kudi Saturday Saturday kardi rendi eh

Nandini-shouts stop ye bhi koi gaana hota hai change the music

Hey u DJ come here

Manik -me DJ -kya hai

Nandini-ye phone lao nd selects a song ye connect karoo

Manik connects it nd the song plays

Kusaliya supraja ramaporva sandhya pravatete

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tzr57yL_5fQ

Manik-iss pe dance ye koi song

Nandini-manik MS subbulakshmi hai aawaz hai. wat song its

Manik-ye party song nhi hai nandini

Nandini-tumhe party song chahiye wait a min

Appadi podu podu aapadi podu kanale

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9RqBP_wQmkk

Manik-looks like seriously u want to dance with me on this song

Nandini-tumare saath kaun dance karaha hai u can't match up my standards u kno iam a classical bhartanatayam dancer

Manik-u r hopeless

Manik was about leave but the song changes nd manik turns

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sUmZvAafs3Y

Raat javaan mast samaan -

Aise mein honthon se honth mila

(nandini walks towards manik )

Jism tera aur ye adaa

Saansein sulagtii hain hosh kahaan

(Nd nandini ends up coming close nd takes his hand nd pulls him to the center )

Meri baahon mein aao zaraa

Meri dhaRkan mein samaao zaraa

Meri ulfat mein bikhar jaao

(nandini takes his hand nd keeps it on her waist nd manik just looks at her in awe nd pulls manik close)

Jalne do, bahakne do

Sun ye machalti raagini

Jaise teri adaa

Jazbaat ki ye mastiyaan

Teraa hi hai nashaa

Let me love u down, down, down

(he lifted her leg nd twirled around abut their eyes were glued to each other)

All night long, long, long

I wanna turn u on, on, on

ChaRhne do ye nashi

(And both swayed away into a sexy dance nd the distance between them decreasing each passing moment)

From your lips 2 your hips 2 your fingertips

I wanna kiss your body all over

(he turned her now back facing he pulled her from waist her back hit his chest nd he was exploding he further parted her hairs on her left shoulder nd he kissed on the crook of her neck nd her hand automatically went pulling his hairs)

From the goosebumps on your skin

Baby U don't have 2 say a word

Use your imagination

(Nd manik culdnot handle more of this bold nandini nd he knew if this dance continues this gonna end up in bed nd steps out into hall)

Manik-uff control is she out her sense not u .aise chalta raha toh u''ll end up popping her cherry .manik nooo ye khayal bhi mat la apne dimag mai .

Nandini-maanik kaha hooo tum

Manik -nandini chup chap chalo soojaate hai

Nandini-wat soojaate hai!! Saath mai naughty manikkk

Manik-I mean who (mentally kicks himself ) I wish ,I mean nhi tum apne kaamre aur mai apne kaamre mai

Nandini-makes a sad face-it would be so boring maaanik

Manik-just shutup nd drags her to her room nd closes her door nd goes to his room

Manik-beta control Krishna bachna shit Krishna toh mere type ka hai doosra wala kaun tha

-RAM hai arey help naa mai gir jaungi

Manik gets up in splits nd seeing nandini struggling at window he goes-not again

Nandini-shouts maaanik mai nd falls on the ground

Nd maanik rushes to check upon

Nandini-gir gayiii nd starts crying hwww chot lag gayiii

Manik-areyyy shhh stop crying (he picks her up puts her on the bed )

Nandini-aaah dard ho raha hai

Manik-kahan batao

Nandini-who who batana zaroori hai bhavanaowo ko samjho ,mujhe dard ho raha hai

Manik-understood she is throwing tantrums-kya chahiye tumhe

Nandini-40 thousand rupees

Manik-wat

Nandini-oops ye secret tha sssh kisi ko mat batana nd says mujhe kuch aur chahiye

Manik-kyaa

Nanddini-u stripping 😛

Manik's eyes popped out-wat!!!!!😲

Nandini-starts shouting -strip strip strip

Manik -mai nhi karne wala

Nandini-starts crying aaah dard ho raha hai

Manik"ssshh ok fine opens his first three button nd says happy

Nandini-maza nhi aaya😕 and goes near tears his shirt

Manik-now manik was scared -wat r u upto .

Nandini-tumara jeans bhi phadte hai aaah ye nhi phaat raha . kaichi scissors chahiye

Nandini-gets down off the bed nd searches the draw

Nd nandini get hold of the last thing manik would ever want her to see

Nandini-manik yeee kya dawai hai ye khane se dard chala jaayega.

Manik-wat the !!! sheez usse wapas rakhooo who who tumare liye nhi hai

Nandini-arey phir kya hai nd looks carefully areeey ye toh sunny leonne wala hai na coffe kahi bhi achiii lagti wala maaanikkk hwww

Manik-who girls hota hai ye boys wala hai

Nandini-boys wala maaanik tumhe kya pasand hai strawberry or coffee

Manik -coffee nd plz now keep tat inside

Nandini-ohhh toh strawberry alya ki pasand hogi

Manik-wat nooo alya nd I not like tat

Nandini-ohooo phir kanta hogi

Manik-wat the kantaaa I mean kuch bhi.listen aisa kuch nhi

Nandini-ofcourse u have done it

Manik-tumarii kafi expectations hai mere life ke bare mai to tell u miss I haven't done it yet ,yee maine apne kamine dosto ko dekhane e liye rakha as tey too think of me as ur thinking .

Nandini-I don't belive tum handsome, hoo hot hooo nd easily flirt karte ho nd pevert bhi hooo

Manik pulls nandini on to bed he is top on her-don't let me do it ok

Nandini looks confusingly with her doe eyes

Manik- tumhe patah bhi hai kitni mushkil se control kar raha hoon mai .tumhe patah mera maan kya kar raha hai to kiss you passionately till I smack off that lipstick from ur lips nd strip your kiss u r whole body nd mark u mine . nd want to see these eyes filled with love for mee

Nandini gulps down the saliva -I guess it would blue

Manik-wat!!!

Nandini-yours balls

Manik gets up nd was about leave

Nandini-rukooo plz I don't want to be alone

Manik turns nd sees her teary eyes

PRECAP

Nandini opening up

nd more action nd coming up guys

pool scene

niya ye le finally updated kal raat se roo hi thi naaa .

and guys i need comments for this update nd so tat i can write the next one better

likes toh chahiye hi greedy mee😃

Edited by aryapk1997 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahahahahahhaha...
Awesome update..
rofl... This ws soo funny..lol
Superb man.. Pls continue soon

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