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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: manan58

Wow..

Suoerb update
Stubborn cute manik.. Aww
Loved it
Cont soon

thanks dear
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: aavani

awesome 👏
pls continue soon...😊

thanks
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
thank god no sacrifice track nyccc update
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

thank god no sacrifice track nyccc update
plzzz update soon

thanks will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: kristii

Lovely update

Con. Soon

thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Waiting eagerly for possessive Manik, nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
great one please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

great one please do continue

bye sumi

thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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HII GUYS ...!!!!SORRY I AM LATE BUT FROM TODAY I WILL UPDATE DAILY ...HOPE U ALL LIKE THIS PART TOO LIKE PREVIOUS ONE ...! 😉 😛



...PART 5B...



I and cabir entered the party venue that is my very own mansion...every participated bands were there ...and to my surprise my very dear enemy HARSHAD was there ...its gonna be fun I thought.. fab 3 I mean dhruv alya mukti were already present there...me and cabir went there...we hugged each other but I was lost every one is there but the person I wanted the most to be there near me is still not here...MY SHINING STAR ...MY ANGEL ohh god where are u nandu...

"Tujhe kya hua ?where are u lost ?aise devdas Ki tarah kya kada h "asked mukti breaking my thoughts...

"Kuch nai ...nothing"I said in a low voice

"No kuch tho h tell me kya hua h u r so lost..."asked mukti concerned for me but still in a demanding voice...

"Arree meri CID officer kyu bacche Ki jaan le rahi h...bola na ussne kuch nai ...bechara thak gaya hoga...ganna ga ga ke ...haina manik"said cabir trying to defend me...

"Yeah "I said and mukti just smiled ...

Cabir started cracking some jokes which can be understanded by him and mukti only ...they were laughing and I saw alya and dhruv talking something and dhruv nodding like a innocent obedient child...I just shaked my headin disbelief...and started dialing nandinis number but suddenly I stopped...

I started feeling her around me ...near me ...my heart started beating fast ...as I saw her entering the party with navya and shahid ...I breath heavily as i saw her giggling with navya at some stupid joke crack by shahid ...suddenly our eyes met and that's it ...we were so lost that we didn't even heard what our friends were saying ...she smiled at me and I smiled back ...she asked through her eyes that " am I happy now" I just smiled and nodded at her ...

But ...but ...but do u all seriously think that our romance can continue without any disturbance...no na ...so the great duffer shahid dragged her and that drama queen navya with him to harshad...and I can understand by their face that harshad is saying sorry and my dear nandini and that madubala forgived him and navya hugged him ...and shahid showed a thumps up to nandini and she just gave a smile...

Can't this girl listen to me ...I have told her thousand times not to trust someone blindly but no she will never listen...she is just crazy man ...

Suddenly I turned at my right only to see mukti and cabir staring at navya and harshad...mukti I can understand but cabir what's wrong with him...I am gonna ask him soon ...

I saw harshad and navya going to dancefloor shahid asking a random girl...mukti and cabir joining the dancefloor with each other ...its high time manik go and ask her ...yes I will ask her for dance I thought and started walking towards her but then the next view in front of me literally boiled my blood ...Dhruv was asking nandini...my nandini for dance how dare he? I clutched the glass in my hand ...

I am sure nandini won't accept him...why will she no she won't ...I saw nandini staring at dhruv and his hand like she have seen an alien infront of her...now I am sure she won't accept it...I got happy ...
...NANDINIS POV...
OH NO dhruv ...ab mein kya karu oh god ...manik how will he feel no I can't accept his offer but its dhruv he is my best friend I just can't hurt him...and manik ka buddy h vo ...tho manik ko bura nai lagega ...I should accept it ...I am sure he will understand and I gave dhruv my hand smiling and I didn't dared to see maniks face because I know my monsters valcano is on verge to explode
...END OF NANDINIS POV...

WHAT?how could she just do this ?how could she accept him ...no but he is her friend so that's why she did this yes ..but she didn't even turned or looked at me ...she didn't even cared about what I am going through what I must be feeling.. ...no no manik don't think too much ..oh god...WHAT THE...?dhruv is holding her waist argh...and she look at her she is so comfortable huh ...(actually dhruv and nandini were is at least 20 cm away from each other but manik is manik, 😛 )

Argh for the first time I am feeling like killing dhruv how dare he ...cool manik cool just cool down nandini did accepted dhruv as dance partner because he is her friend but still how could she...

Suddenly my thoughts were broken by a pat on my shoulder I turned to see alya giving me her hand and asking me for dance...I was about to say no but I saw nandini staring at me and alya hmmm so my baby is jealous ...hmm..its time for some fun my angel ...TIT FOR TAT u know ...

I smirked at her and gave my hand to alya...so the GAME IS ON..

PRECAP

Manan dance ...
Nandini feeding manik 😳 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Wow.. Superb
Jelo manan.. Lol
😃😛
Awesome man
Cont soon..

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