Manan SS: A Story of love - {Scene 8 updated - Page 9}(01/05) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Aw super cute thnxxx for ur message
Loved this part was really scared after reading the last one
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Thanks dear , awesome update...do write more plz 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
wow loved it please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Awww... I love this. Each update gets better and better, loved the Fab 4 seeing Nandhu's Manik, so sweet... terrific job- looking forward to the next update. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Fabulous scenes
Update soon the next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Scene 6
Next Morning

Nandini is sleeping like a baby hugging Manik... The sun rays falls directly on her face which disturbs and she tries to hide her face in Manik's chest... this movement wakes up Manik. Manik smiles looking at the view in front on him.. The love of his life was in his arms, sleeping like a baby.. He could do anything to wake up to this sight every morning... He tried to block the sunlight by keeping his hands, But Nandini woke up.
Manik: Good Morning!
Nandini: Good morning Manik:)
Manik: You know you look like a doll while sleeping.. then how do u become a baby monster when ur awake haan? *smirking*
Nandini : What?! Monster main nahi Tum Ho (She says in anger and starts hitting him wid a pillow)
Manik gets up from the bed and runs and Nandini also gets up from the bed but she couldn't keep her foot on ground because of the wound so Manik stopped her.. Nandini then looks at the clock.
Nandini: OH SHIT! It's 9 o'clock! I am so late.. Pandit ji is not gonna spare me. Aiyoo Aiyappa!
Manik: What? You are not going anywhere.. are u mad! Ur badly injured.. u need rest.
Nandini: Manik, I have to go! Move.. Let me go.
Manik: NO! You aren't going!!
After a lot of convincing Manik agreed but on one condition, That even he would be wid her the whole time. Nandini had no choice but to agree. They then got ready and left wid Nandini ' clutches.

In college:

They got down from the car... Everyone were in a shock looking at Manik's care for Nandini.. as just few days back he hated her so much. Nandini walked wid her clutches while Manik was holding her waist for help. Nandini tried to stop him but she knew he wouldn't listen so she gave up.
Manik carried Nandini in the steps, When the reached her class's floor.. Manik realized he forgot his phone in the car.. Nandini told him to get it.. Manik tells it's okay but she tells him to go, Manik goes but tells Nandini to wait here. Nandini waits there, Just then Pandit and Druv walk by there...
Pandit: Oh so at last the queen is here.. Aren't you too early.. it's only 12 o'clock. (Said sarcasticly)
Nandini: So - sorry sir.. woh actual-
Before she could complete.. Pandit holds her arms tight and screams at her
Pandit: What do you think of yourself! Every single time only u will have a problem.. blah .. blah blah
It was hurting Nandini.. She got tears in her eyes. Just then someone held Pandit's hands and pushed them away. Yes.. it was Manik!
Manik: How dare you... HOW DARE YOU TOUCH HER!
He then carried Nandini in his arms and made her sit on one of the benched there and gave her water.
He then came back to Pandit and Druv. He holds Pandit's collar.
Manik: How dare you touch her!
Pandit: Who are you to tell me what to do and what not to!
Manik: I have all rights to! This is my college!
And then a fight ensues in between them.. Nandini comes to them with her clutches and holds Manik and says.
Nandini: Manik, Leave it.. Chalo mere sath.. Leave him.

To be continued
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
He was so sweet to her from the moment they woke up, and then finally Manik saw the way he treats her... can't wait to see what our Monster does next...terrific update!👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
wowww waise who wrote this
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
I am continuing 😳
Manik : How can he hurt you when he Saw u were in Pain , Is he really a pandit or duplicate of Soha?
Nandini ; Should we talk about him now? Leave na
Manik still in anger but leaves as Nandu tells him

They both go to Canteen
Manik : Nandini do u want ice cream?? It's hot and i am indeed feeling hot as ur infront of me
Nandini : Maaanniiik stop it and smiles
she asks him to bring choco Ice cream for her

Pandit eavesdropping their Convo
While Manik goes to get the ice cream , Pandit comes and sit before Nandini and gives her choco icecream
Nandini ; Sir ye kya hai? I dont want it
Pandit : I am sorry Nandini , i didnt meant to hurt , I was just thinking about the fusion concert , because i want it to be the best
Nandini ; It's ok sir , and i must have come in time even
Pandit : I dont know u were hurt and not able to Walk, if u have forgiven me take this ice cream
Nandini ; Sir , but

Pandit does some emotional song drama and Nandu takes the ice cream
She is waiting for Pandit to go as it is uneasy for her
but Pandit is looking at Nandu

Manik comes catching two ice creams like a lover boy, He see's Pandit and gets angry
Manik ; excuse me ? This is my seat
Pandit : Naam hai kya?
Manik bits his lip in anger and Say's
Manik : geezz..When u Sat in my seat, How do you expect me to sit there again?? huh? , come nandini let's go out ..some one is stalking us
Nandini looks to Manik
Manik takes ice cream from Nandu hand and throws it on the table and takes her from there
Pandit gets angry and hits the table and rest's on it and get's to know there is ice cream on it which got into his Face


To be continued
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Wow awesome update
Superb jst loved it
Cont soon😃

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