Manan SS: A Story of love - {Scene 8 updated - Page 9}(01/05) - Page 2

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Natashaaaaa thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
hope so yr aisa ho
I really wants this scene
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
I am continuing the Story
Scene 2 :
Manik rushed up to Mukti and Nandini and bet up the boys for misbehaving with them.Then the boys Ran away from there .
Manik asked Nandini is she is Ok
Nandini Then smiles and says she is Fine
All go to Mukti
Manik takes his Coat and gives it to Mukti, asking how is she and why she had taken a bold step without asking her Friends
All are worried For mukti that they Even forget that Nandini Was there with Them
After talking with mukti, they all share a group hug
Meanwhile someone from back pulls nandini with the person hand on her mouth and drug her with anesthesia and take her somewhere in Car
Then Cabir say's let's go and party as Mukti is back...!
while they are moving out Manik notices that Nandini is Missing and thinks she might have left
He calls and her finds that she have forgotten her phone...!

Now continue the Story 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
niceee continue kr nowww
I want this type of scene yr paro
and Annu Congo girl tune Jo scene update kiya show me v wohi dikhaye ga
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Posted: 10 years ago
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SCENE 3
(2 hours later)

Fab 5 except Dhruv are partying at Alya's place to divert their minds.
Suddenly Navya calls Cabir.
Cabir: Areee kya hain Madhubala!
Navya: Cabir, Nandini kaha hain?
Cabir: Nandini? Nandini left from the club 2 hours before itself.
Hearing Nandini's name, everyone look at Cabir and Cabir gives an I-Don't-Know expression. Manik just snatches the phone from Cabir.
Navya: KYA?! But she hasn't gone home yet... Chachi is very worried!
Manik: What?!
Navya: Manik?
Manik just cuts the call and runs out. Fab 3 follow him.

Okay that's scene 3. You guys carry it forward now😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Please continue soon ! ASAP !
loved it ! Awesome👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Heyye jaldi update Karo...ab control nai hota. ...u know I love this worried and caring manik...
Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Wow.. Awesome man
So chotu update..
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Scene 4

Manik runs to his car and drives to the same bar. Fab 3 follow him. After going there Manik screams Nandini.
Manik: NANDINI!!!
Fab 3 come behind him and all search for Nandini. When suddenly Manik spots few drops of blood and a small torn piece of Nandini's top. He gets shocked and tears start falling from his eyes. He screams Nandini. Fab 3 see him and come beside him.
Manik: NANDINI!!! (Crying)
Cabir: Manik.. Manik kya hua?
and then they see the piece of cloth in his hands. They also get worried. Cabir tries to calm Manik and then he suddenly remembers something.
Cabir: I am pretty sure this is Rocky's doings. Let's go to his hostel room.
Hearing that Manik runs to his car and is about to sit in the driver seat when Mukti stops him.
Mukti: Manik, you are not in the state to drive.. You sit and I will drive.
and then she forces Manik to sit in the passenger seat and she drives while Alya & Cabir also sit behind. The whole journey in the car felt like hell for Manik... He couldn't stop crying.. He kept thinking about Nandini and all their memories. Fab 3 tried to calm him down but in vain. At last they reached the boy's hostel, they were about to come in when Manik got a call... He was about to cut it when Alya said-
Alya: Manik don't! It may be Nandini, Take the call.
Listening to Nandini's name, He took the call and put it on speaker.
Manik: Hel-lo Nan-Nandini ( His voice breaking)
Caller: (He starts laughing evilly) So much love haan, You are right Mr. Manik Malhotra, You're life is with me only.
After that, the caller keeps the phone near Nandini and Nandini screams MANIK!!
Hearing that Manik broke down and screamed "NANDINI!!" Fab 3 were also extremely worried.
Caller: You hit me so much and threatened me right... Now it's time for payback Mr.Malhotra. But I'm nice so I will send you the address where we are... maybe you can see your love for one last time. ( He said all this in a very evil tone and smirking)
Before Manik could say anything the caller cut the call and sent the address. Fab 4 went to the car and this Manik drove... He drove extremely fast. After they reached the place, Manik ran in first while the others went from the back gate as planned by Cabir. After Manik went in.. He got shocked by the sight in front of his eyes... His shining star was badly hurt and tied to a chair. Nandini suddenly opened her eyes sensing Manik near her. They saw each other, both were crying hard. Before Manik could go and rescue Nandini, he heard a voice.
Rocky: Aww so much love for each other. Manik, Ur lucky yaar.. even after getting hurt so badly she kept saying Manik. (Smirking)
Rocky then went near Nandini with a bottle. Manik ran to them.
Manik: STOP ROCKKY!!! DON'T YOU DARE!
Rocky: Na na Manik, you hit me with a bottle only right.. Now it's ur turn to suffer.. and don't you dare come close.. If you come close.. ( He took out a knife and kept it near Nandini's throat)
Thankfully Cabir comes and holds Rocky from behind.. Manik comes and beats Rocky badly while Alya and Mukti go to Nandini.. they untie her and call Manik. The police come, catch Rocky and take him away. While Manik goes to Nandini and Nandini hugs Manik tight still crying.
Manik: Nan-Nandini.. Main agaya hoon na... Tumhe kuch nahi hoga.. I am there right.
Nandini faints. Manik holds her and takes her to the car.. Cabir drives and they go to the hospital.


To be continued



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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
What an update... wow! Hope Nandhu is okay and can't wait for the next cute MANAN moment... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
hmm ... looks like nobody think self smart enough to proceed ur story

Idea...

Nandini... struggles in hospital... she is not coming to senses

Rocky is bailed...

Manik cannot keep it together,,,,

and decides to attack Rocky again///

do as you wish😆

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