To hate or not to hate ..To love or not to love! update chap 4 Apr 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2 live like we're young

As nandini murthy adjusted her pale gold beaded dress she started at her reflection determinedly in the mirror as she repeated her mantra in her head' a woman needs a man to function like a fish needs a bicycle' .

With the gold dress clinging to her like second skin the strappy black rocker chick heels and her straight hair curled up for a change she knew she was a sight to behold but today all the dolling up wasn't for a guy well , wasn't for him.

It was all to remind herself of how sexy and desirable she was . So what if manik malhotra dint want her somebody else would ...

She had seen it in navya's eyes, the pity and the worry when dhruv had turned up onstage for a duet performance manik had assured her he would sing with her in.

For a split second her heart had logged itself in her throat momentarily taking away her speech forget any singing capabilities but as she laid eyes on her friend and saw the pity that was reflected back in them nandini knew it was time to take control.

And so after her and dhruv's performance she had seen the pandit ji received his and the judges compliments on their duet , taken her leave from him , dragged navya away from her usual bickering with cabir who nandini knew kept trying to stall her and dashed out of the collage as if her life depended on it all the while trying to evade manik malhotra who kept getting increasingly pissed due to her masterful avoidance tactics.

Navya had tried to talk to her but nandini had brightly suggested that they should go out with some of there school friends who were in town and party declaring that low pulsing beats , people presses up against each other and copious amounts of alcohol was exactly what they needed to celebrate nandini's performance .

Navya kept trying to broach Manik's topic until nandini had desperately pleaded with her that tonight she just needed to forget ,tomorrow they would talk .

Navya had finally agreed as nandini dolled up both of them in drool worthy , sexy outfits navya in black and herself in gold . Troubled curly hair and blood red lipsticks completed the man eater look.

They had landed up with the rest of the group in a huge dark bar with loud music and smoke machines but navya gulped uneasily as nandini ordered a round of tequila shots.

Even with her petite structure nandini knew how to handle her liquor but the one thing which drove her over the edge was tequila. When you mixed an upset nandini and tequila with over eager hormonal boys who stared at her like ravenous dogs waiting to sink their jaws into her the entire thing was sure to blow up in disaster.

Even now as nandini stared at her reflection in the mirror she was more than aware of not only sameer but several other guys who had been giving her the old eye.

But the problem was that none of them made her feel desired or sexy or even beautiful , no only manik made her feel like that .

It was , she sighed inwardly quite pathetic that even in a room full of people she had known since she was a child practically , she still felt alone, that even though almost every guy out there wanted her when manik never would because he loved his friends too much to ever truly be with her .

They would always come first for him... She chucked bitterly ...

"Hey nans are you sleeping in there? Come out already " her friend aisha hollered

Quickly touching up her lipstick nandini rejoined her friends on the dance floor as they threw back another round of shots

Suddenly aisha squealed "oh my effing God that is like our song you guys , remember your 18th nans we went crazy dancing to this song. Come on you guys for old times sake"

Drunk out of her mind in the dark pulsing Smokey club with the beats of the music loud enough that she couldn't even hear herself think it was easy to forget about all her problems and to push manik in a corner deep in her mind as she just closed her eyes ,enjoyed her buzz and grinded against some guy.

Said nameless guy's hand were gripping her hips as he nuzzled her neck . As the guy spun her around so that she was facing him nandini looked over his shoulder to meet a pair of dark , blazing eyes fixed on her which made a shiver run through nandini's body.

Manik malhotra was here.



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Well that 's that next we see manik as an active part of the story for the first time.


Warning: this story will have mature scenes and explicit language . Proceed with caution you have been warned. The characters are different and more what I would call realistic specially navy and nandini . The essence of all the characters and their relationships will remain the same .


Like and comment . I would love to hear what you guys think and how you would like the story to proceed alsi I'm open to criticism so bring it;)


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Edited by sugarOOhoney - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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itna chotu sa update that's not fair yr
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow.. Awesome n rocking update
Loved it.. Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Angry manik is definetly hot!!!
Please update asap 😃

I am a bit confused, was the concert about hope where manik choose dhruv?
Or do you have other plans?
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Wow.. loving Nandhu's attitude! Can't wait for her Monster's reaction to her look and attitude change, terrific update here ofcourse!👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Chapter 3 Toxic


He glared daggers at her across the floor jaw tensing and releasing repeatedly . The look on his face screamed murder and this particular look nandini was familiar with , she had just never imagined that it could ever be directed at her . It was always reserved for douches who well deserved it like those goons Rocky and his brother.

Suddenly manik broke away from the wall he had been leaning against and he was striding towards her , long angry strides . In her drunken haze a stray thought suddenly hit her , he walked like a cheetah , strong ,confident , powerful. Without even realizing it she mumbled "cheetah" ..
The guy whoever she was dancing looked at her and said
"you sayin' something babe ..." .

Before she could reply or tell him off for calling her babe she roughly ripped out of the guys hold only to be met with a pair of strong arms which supported her unsteady form firmly. "She" the voice of the owner of said arms snarled at the guy who nandini had been dancing with " is not your babe. And I would suggest that you get your disgusting hands and your equally filthy self out of here before I break every bone in your hands for touching her regardless of giving the lady nightmares " he spoke or rather spat the words at the other guy as if he was the filth on the roads spoiling manik malhotra's designer shoes.

The guy who looked rightfully spooked.raised his hands as if offering a peace treaty said"sorry man . I dint know she was taken. " Before he walked off the dance floor

Nestled comfortably in Manik's arms nandini chuckled as she heard the other guy speak . "Something funny?" Manik said bitterly . By now nandini had started full out giggling " not just funny... absolutely hilarious . He thinks I'm taken. And you need lessons on etiquette but then you are monster, my monster so I guess I can't expect anything else from you but still it's rude to interrupt and I was dancing , having fun you know ..." She trailed off.

"Dancing? If you like dancing so much then why don't you do that me? Instead you dig up some God forsaken scumbag " he swore under his breathe

nandini 's temper started to rise how dare he do all this and show his temper to her? Before she even realized it the flood gates opened "You want to know why I was with that guy? It's because he wanted me when you obviously don't . and you don't get the right to leave me and storm in here and go all cave man on me when all I'm doing is dancing with somebody . "

Manik snapped back at her his body tense and flushed against hers " you can accuse of doing a lot of things nandini but saying that I don't want you is such a big lie that no one , forget less me or even you for that matter of fact will ever believe it .

Nandini could hear the first strains of toxic's ( it's a great song:) seductive opening beats blaring across the speakers as manik pulled her tighter against his body his large hands spread across her hips . Moving slowly to the music against him she could feel every part of him .

Leaning down manik whispered his voice deeper and somehow huskier " is that proof enough for you?" Nandini could feel herself blushing from the root of her tips as she gulped ,took a deep breathe before steadying her voice
" the proof you gave at the fusion concert was more monumental than what you just gave me ..."
Impatiently manik cut her across " I know but nandini what was I supposed to do ? Dhruv is my brother practically ... you don't understand but he kept me hanging on all this time even before fab 5 was formed . " his voice was lower , softer " He 's not just my buddy , he's family nandini my only family practically who doesn't try to use me for their own benefit. And you asked me to choose between him and you"

"So is that your choice then? " nandini whispered her voice hoarse" That you're done ..." She trailed off

Manik sighed as he looked her in the eye and bent his face so that it was level with hers. This crazy woman would never be able to understand how psychotic she made him, how she had changed his world around " I don't think i will ever be done with you " He muttered so softly that nandini almost couldn't hear him over the din of the club.

Nandini could feel her buzz wearing off as she stared at manik " manik it was never my intention to make you choose between me and dhruv , you know. I mean it dint even matter to me whether or not we performed together at the concert. I guess I was just trying to decipher if i'll always come second for you, after fab 5 "

"Why do i have to choose in the first place? Their my friends I love them and you..." he trailed of running his hands through his hair unintentionally missing them up .

"And me ? " questioned nandini " me what manik ?"

As nandini waited for manik to answer her , she felt terribly drained , just tired and hopeless ." Manik I'm tired ok , all we've been doing for so many months is dancing around each other . One second you're cold and the other second you're hot . You're mood swings are giving me a whiplash , so manik If you have something to say to me now then tell me , if not then I'm done " her voice cracked at the end

"Really you're going to give up just because I dint perform at the fusion concer with you ? What is wrong with you ? " manic asked incredulously.

" this " hissed nandini "is not about the concert or dhruv . This is about where I stand in your life , where we stand in your list of priorities. I mean you still can't say it , can you ? You're trying to divert my attention by picking a fight with me. " She snorted bitterly, her eyes filling with tears " that a what we always do , fight ... so manik for the last time if you can't tell me then ..." She trailed of looking at him expectantly .

" nandini I ..." he sighed.

Nandini looked up at manik as she shook her head, tears rolling down her cheeks " you're still going to keep quite rant you ? Fine" she spat at him through her tears " i'm done manik . I'm so done ."

Manik was left staring at her back as she walked off the floor and away from him.


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Sorry for the confusion but basically the story is set in the future you can say when manic is not able to perform with nandini in the fusion concert and my interpretation of how they handle it ...


Please comment and write , tell me how what you think . You guys keep me going !!!

Buddy me for pms ...until then :)



Ps: toxic is this awesome easing originally by Britney spears but I don't like the original version.

The song used here when they're dancing is toxic the glee version performs day santana , Quinn and Brittany ... it's a great song , check it out you won't be disappointed...:)



Stay tune next chapter we see harshad for the First time in a completely new avatar as nandini murthy's bff... crazy right!! Read on

Edited by sugarOOhoney - 10 years ago
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Awesome...But Emotional update...😳
I want Love Confession...❤️
Please Update soon...!!
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Lolz...😆
Edited by PrettyAaShu - 10 years ago
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Wow.. True man..c'mon manik..
Superb
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik tell her or YOU will loose the best thing that EVER happened to you
I am completely on Nandus side
It Makes navya look much better now
Totally get her

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