To hate or not to hate ..To love or not to love! update chap 4 Apr 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi there all you beautiful people I'm sugar aka the stranger / New comer who nobody knows **grins sheepishly**

I'm a huge kaisi yeh yaariyan fan **obviously;) and I like to write ...also my favourite ice cream is cookies and cream or good old chocolate depends on my mood really

But before all you peeps run off thinking that I'm a crazy gal who needs medical help ( which I'm not crazy I mean not most of the time at least** winks** ) let me share my idea of a perfect Kaisi yeh yaariyan



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What craziness erupts when we put in a mix a super sassy nandini, an ignorant manik , a sweet dhruv, a queen bee called alia , a rocker chic mukti and everyone's favorite a meddlesome cabir accompanied by a blunt and fierce navya and defensive but genuine harshad ...chaos of course ...

A psychotic rollercoaster of drama , laughter and out of control hormones mixed with old friendships and new love ... keep your belts tight and fingers crossed;) cause darlin' this is one bumpy ride !!!!!


Warning: you have been warned this story will have mature scenes and explicit language and content . Proceed at your own risk .

Also the characters are going to be different specially the girls navya and nandini , they're fierce , mature not naive and they are not sorry ...

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PS : harshad is alia 's cousin brother and is not mean as shown in the show he . Also navya, nandini and harshad have been friends since school days ... navya is definitely not naive instead she's a blunt super cool girl



Sooo**looks down and shuffles feet awkwardly** love it hate it let me know ...but pretty please tell me who you are cause my buddy list is absolutely empty:(:(


PPS what's your favourite ice cream flavour??????

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Posted: 10 years ago
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welcome to crazy manan land... interesting...continue soon
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Welcome to the forum...I'm sure you'll have a blast...

This sounds great...can't wait to read it.😊

Hmmm... favorite icecream? Probably Heavenly Hash: it's got roasted almonds, chocolate chunks and marshmallow in chocolate ice cream- so a little bit of everything and just about perfect!🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome to the forum dear ! 🤗
Interestin start , hope u'll continue 😃
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Welcome dear.. Awesome.. Cont soon😃
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Chapter 1 Bad romance



Navya had always been a loner. She just wasn't into the whole social scene.she dint need big crowds or rowdy parties she was happy with a few intellectual people who weren't he'll bent on making a fool of themselves.

Naturally being a loner navya dint really care for a lot of people or what they thought of her but one of the people who actually mattered was nandini.

They had been school friends ,acquaintances really for 8 years . They had become firm friends only in 10th grade . Their friendship had shocked a lot of people the girls were so different yet so similar like opposite faces of the same coin.

Whereas nandini had always been more socially outgoing and gutsy ,navya always came across as insecure and even a little weird sometimes. Their personalities were reversed in reality to what they portrayed or what they came across as to other people .

Nandini had always been pessimistic when to came to finding the one her one true love. Whenever they had watched chick flicks she always.identified herself with the girl who got dumped or cheated on aka the girl who never had a happy ending .

even though navya wanted nothing but happiness for nandini and for her friend to find her Mr perfect she had never visualised manik malhotra as the man for the job

Navya had always foreseen nandini with an intellectual outgoing guy with a great sense of humor who was decently good looking and came from a middle class background.

I mean let's be practical right they were.perfectly nice and average girls who would hook up with average guys.

Instead her friends Mr perfect was a really Mr imperfect . Bad boy guitarist with problematic friends and enough money to feed a third world country basically the guy everybody warns you about .

She couldn't believe that nandini her very sensible friend nandini had actually for a guy that was so wrong for her.


When navya had tried to talk to nandini calmly about why she needed to get far far away from this guy nandini had actually gotten defensive accusing navya that she was being superficial and there was so much more to manik than his money and good looks.

Navya dint actually hate manik she just dint like him for nandini. Her only hope was that when nandini fell not if but when she fell navya would be able to break her fall so that the impact wouldn't break her.


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A/n: guys please don't hate on navya . She is not the show naive navya,she is practical , she drinks ,hurls abuses at people and she is fiercely protective .

Also I love manan with all my heart sorry for the manik bashing but trust me navya will come around.

Also a special shout out to RomComfan :your ice cream sounds Absolutely delicious !!!



Edited by sugarOOhoney - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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When I read the title I didnt know that this was going to be a story but I am glad I found it 😃
Navya the protecter seems like a great idea
Its nice to read from her pov becasue its mostly either manik or nandani

Have you considered doing an index?
Anyway great start 👏
Please pm me for an update but only if you can
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey it was nice
Welcome
I m also a newbie n sounds like v both r somehow similar in displaying our craziness BT know one know that we r d most smartest n cutest 😉
Hopefully v will catch out soon
Bye
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well, this is different... and yes I kind of get her worry... but will... can't wait for more, I still trust you!😛

And yes the ice cream is delicious, the marshmallows is all gooey... so good... you're making me crave it now... diets suck.. *sigh*🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome to the forum
The start is amazing
Continue soon 😊

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