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Dear...can u just put an Index...in ur 1st page with the Updates n page numbers...for readers convenience ...
nice update.
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Its awesome. ..
Cont. Soon😃
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awesome...loved manik's surprise for nandu...pls continue soon..take care...😊
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Loving all these updates... they are so cute in love...
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Chapter 19

They reach college and enter the canteen. Both of them has a sad expression on their faces as Mrs. Murthy left. Cabir comes to them.

Alya pointing at MaNan : guys Manik and nandini are here.

They all move towards MaNan.

Cabir : at last you both came. Kaha mar Gaye the?

Mukti : seriously yaar kabse we were waiting.

Manik signals Cabir and mukti to shut.

Cabir : nandu Tere chehre pe bara kyu baje hai?

Nandini sadly : mom again left.

Cabir even gets sad hearing this but shows as he is not so that he can cheer up nandini.

Cabir and manik hug Nandini seeing her so sad and the rest join them too.

Alya : chill Nandini she'll be back again kuch urgent kaam hoga.

Mukti : yea nandu chill hum sab hai na.

Dhruv : you know what Nandini I have an idea to cheer you up.

Nandini and the rest look at dhruv questionably.

Cabir : what do you mean by the idea.

Manik : haan bol.

Dhruv : aaj hum log break lete hai and song kal record karenge. Okay?

Manik : cool. But what break?

Dhruv : aaj him voh sab karenge Jo nandu ko pasand hai.

Cabir : yea that's a great idea.

Dhruv : go pack a bag of all your requirements and charge your phones

Nandini excited : okay

Dhruv : Manik tum sab k liye lunch Aur dinner le k aao and you know what you have to bring right?

Manik happily : right I know.

Dhruv : Cabir Tu mere saath chal we will get the tents and liquor.

Mukti : hum kya kare?

Alya : ya dhruv humko bhi kuch bolo.

Dhruv : you both go get your cars and a homemade cake. Okay?

Alya : okay done.

Dhruv : Navya you are gonna get us music okay?

Navya : count in me.

Manik : okay then we will all meet here in college in an hour.

All nod okay and leave.

Nandini : I'm so happy.

Manik : chalo I'll drop u home.

Nandu smiles : okay

They all leave.

Its been one hour and everyone are at college waiting for mukti and Alya

Nandini : Cabir where are we actually going?

Cabir : even I don't know.

Dhruv : chalo they are here.

Everyone puts their luggage and other stuff in the cars.

Alya : so kon konse gadi me ja raha hai cause I don't wanna drive.

Mukti : yea even I don't wanna drive.

Dhruv : that's okay Alya I'll drive your car and Cabir Tu mukti ki car drive ker.

Mukti, dhruv and Alya in mukti's car.
MaNan and cavya in alya's car.

Dhruv : Cabir meri gadi ko follow ker.

Cabir : okay Dhruv.

They start driving.

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Scene 1 mukti's car.

Mukti : Dhruv where are we going?

Dhruv : I've booked a resort type of place its all open vast place without any rooms n all we have tents and Manik got nandini's favorite pizza's for all of us. Umm and Cabir and I got some crunches and liquor for all.

Alya : wow Dhruv this is just gonna be a rocking and awesome party.

Mukti : seriously yaar Dhruv love you its such a good plan. I think I'm gonna have a lot of fun.

Dhruv : always my pleasure girls.

Alya : funny know why I don't get a date when I'm going out for weekends.

Dhruv : ohh don't worry even Mukti and I funny have date.

Alya : you are so good Dhruv.

As it is dhruv always attracted to her.

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Scene 2 alya's car.

Manik and nandini are on the back seat looking in each others eyes deeply in love.

Cabir : dude we are here too.

MaNan break their eye lock.

Manik : haan.

Cabir : what do you guys think? Where are we going any idea?

Nandini : when I don't know where is Dhruv taking us.

Manik : let's see bye don't worry we are gonna have a lot fun and maybe if we get chance we can tell them about us.

Cabir : yes that's a great idea.

Nandini : yes we'll try.

Navya : guys I've got all my favorite music hope we'll enjoy that.

Manik : that's great Navya.

Nandini : I'm so gonna enjoy.

Cabir : yes you will enjoy.

Manik and nandini smile looking at each other.

Enjoy the trip.

Chapter 20 - page 19
Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago
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wow..awesome update...so love birds outing...with friends...😉
pls continue soon..take care
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its awesome..
so they are on small trip..
keep updating😃
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Chapter 20

They all reach the place.

Everyone gets out of the cars.

Girls excitedly.

Mukti : looks like this place is gonna be.

Nandini goes to Dhruv and hugs him a thanks.

Nandini : thank you so much Dhruv. This is all so lovely.

Dhruv : yeh toh kuch nhi hai. So guys let's place out tents.

Boys start putting on the tents with the help of the girls.

Nandini used hammer but it fal down on her leg she shouts in pain. Manik gets all caring and runs towards her. Manik leaves the tent cloth and it falls on Alya and Dhruv. They get trapped in that and have an eye lock.

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Dhruv : are you okay Alya?

Alya breaks her sight : haan.

She then tries to move but falls on dhruv. They both fall down on the ground. Alya on top of Dhruv. They again share an eye lock.

Alya worried : are you okay?

Dhruv : yes I guess.

They both try to stand but the tent is to heavy and they can't get up. They be in that position.

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Manik still moving towards nandini.

Manik : nandini are you okay?

Nandini : yea I'm fine I just have to sit.

Manik looks around and finds that there is no place clean to sit as they just arrived.

Manik : wait I'll take you to the car.

Cabir : ya you better take her there.

Manik are you able to walk?

Nandini : ya I can (she tries to walk but is about to fall but Manik holds her)

Manik : here wait (he lifts her up and takes her to the car.

He makes her sit on the seat.

Nandini : ouch that hurts.

Manik worriedly : are you okay nandini.

Nandini : ya I think its just a muscle pull. Can you just twist my leg!

Manik scared : but that'll hurt u.

Nandini : ohh c'mon I'm dieing here just do it I will be relieved.

Manik nervously : okay.

He touches her leg and holds it and twists it.

Nandini loudly shouts in pain.

Manik worriedly : are you okay?

Nandini moving her leg : yes it got fine.

Manik : let's try to walk.

Nandini stands up and easily walks.

Nandini : yea my leg got normal again I can walk.

Manik gets relived and hugs her.

Nandini : in okay sweetie.

Manik : good. Chalo let's go and have lunch.

Nandini pecks on his lips : okay.

They go back and see Cavya and Mukti trying to pick that tent.

Manik : guys?

Navya : manik come na Alya Aur Dhruv uske neeche phase hai.

MaNan go to them and help them and they get the tent off them.

Everyone gets shock to see Alya and Dhruv like that but then help them to wake up.

Nandini worried : Dhruv tumhare haath me se khoon nikal raha hai come here.

Nandini drags him to the car and helps him stop the bleeding.

Nandini worried : are you okay?

Dhruv still in his thoughts : hmm.

Nandini : Dhruv?

Dhruv : I love her.

Nandini confused : love?

Dhruv : Alya.

Nandini gets happy : really?

Dhruv : yes.

Nandini hugs him : wow that's great. But how did you got know about your feelings?

Dhruv : abhi. When I was so close to her. I know I've always loved her from school but today I got to realize.

Nandini : that's so sweet. I think you should tell her.

Dhruv : no I don't know what she feels.

Nandini was about to say something but then Manik comes.

Manik : are you ok buddy?

Dhruv : yes.

Nandini : chalo let's have lunch.

Manik : haan.

They move towards the tents.

Hope you all enjoy.
Next update really for Dhulya fan.

Chapter 21 - page 21

Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome..loved it...😊
so another love story is going to start...dhruv and aliya...wow..😉
pls continue soon...😊
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Can you guys suggest me a new character for Mukti.😊
I don't like abhimanyu.😕
I'm still waiting😳

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