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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 15

Both cavya and MaNan are in the same ice cream place unknown from each others presence.

Cabir : tell me what you want in chocolate I'll get that.

Navya : anything u like.

Cabir smiles and goes to the counter.

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Manik : umm so which ice cream?

Nandini : chocolate.

Manik : I know but what in chocolate?

Nandini : any thing you like.

Manik smiles : okay.

Manik goes towards the counter.

Nandini sits at the table. Nandini sits and her back faces navya's back.

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Cabir is in the queue near the counter.

Manik is in the queue just after Cabir but is looking at the board of menu continuously unaware of cabir's presence.

Its cabir's turn to place the order he is about to speak up with his order when someone accidently puts their ice cream on manik.

Manik angrily : can't you see?

Cabir recognizes his voice and turns back he finds manik there with ice cream on his blazer .

Cabir : hey buddy.

Manik gets shocked : tum? Yaha?

Cabir passes some tissue papers to Manik so that he can clean his blazer.

Cabir : why are you so shocked can't I some here?

Manik nervously : ya u can!

Manik starts wiping the ice cream off his blazer.

Cabir : you don't normally eat ice cream! So what are you doing here?

Manik still busy in wiping off the ice cream speaks out.

Manik : that Nandini wanted to (he then just stops there).

Cabir : so Mr. Manik Malhotra is on a date with my lill sister and I don't know that?

Manik nervously starts laughing : no.. No its not a date its just two good friends who came to eat ice cream.

Cabir : like seriously? That's what people do on a date!

Manik : really?

Cabir confused and loud : What do u do on a date ?

Manik still nervous : that we... That..

Cabir : that we? What?

Manik : ohh just forget it I can't do it ! Yes we are on a date!

Cabir : there you go!

Manik sighs.

Cabir : so what's going on?

Manik just doesn't want to lie to Cabir any more!

Manik : come on let's talk about it sitting there with Navya and nandini.

Cabir : okay.

Manik gives his order. He takes the ice cream and they go to the table.

They reach the table side and Manik places his hand on Nandini's shoulder she turns and gets shocked to see Cabir with him.

Cabir teasingly : hi Nandu.

Nandini nervously : hi... Cabir.

Cabir : c'mon let's go to the next table Navya bhi hai.

Nandini shocked : Navya bhi hai?

Both Manik and Cabir stare at her with wide eyes.

Nandini nervously : I mean navya bhi hai. That's...that's good.

Cabir : so chalo.

Nandini stand ups and goes and sit beside Manik and Cabir sits beside Navya.

Navya : hi Nandini

Nandini : hi.

Navya teasingly : nice dress!

Nandini : umm thanks.

Cabir : Nandini why are you so much dressed I mean it's just ice cream place so u don't need to dress to come here.

Nandini gets blank.

Cabir : Nandini!

Nandini starts speaking nervously : that..I...haan...I wanted to take some beautiful pictures of me in this dress so after this we will go and take.

Manik whispers in her ear : stop talking.

Nandini : haan so that is why I am dressed.

Cabir not satisfied by her words : I see but for that you must have called a professional na?

Nandini nervously : no no its not that imp photo session just with phone n all.

Manik again whispers to her but loud this time : please stop talking.

Cabir : so why did you say Manik to dress up?

Nandini nervously : Manik? He is not dressed up he normally wears this type of clothes.

Manik for loud this time : for the mighty god sake stop talking!

Cabir generously : why are u lying to me?

Nandini turns to manik : why didn't to stop me from talking?

Manik loud : I did !

Navya bursts in laugh!

Umm I guess u guys like it

So plz comment.

Chapter 16 - page 15
Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
OMG! That's so cute... love this update, waiting for the next part...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Superb update..
Love Cabir and his way of making people speak...
Hehe Manik-Nandu were cute..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hahaha... So cute update..
Awesome
Cont soon
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It's such an amazing ff ! I just read all the reads n I can say u're doing a fab job
. Plz give me a PM as I don't want to miss any update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 16

MaNan and cavya are still in the ice cream place.

MaNan tell cavya ensuring about them.

Cabir : so what's the plan?

Manik and nandini look at each other.

Manik : plan yeh hai ki koi plan nhi hai.

Navya : like really? Are u kidding me?

Nandini : no we are serious.

Manik : ya she is right. We were gonna tell u both about our relationship tomorrow so that u can help us to tell others.

Cabir : that's good that u trust us but we have no plan how will we tell them?

Nandini : Cabir please we re really gonna need your help here.

Navya : hey nandini u don't need to please him he is like ur elder bro he will help u!

Cabir : ya u r my lill sister I will help u no doubt and more over the guy u r dating Is my bestest friend so there is know chance for me to not help u guys.

Nandini smiles at Cabir : thanks cabir. It really means a lot.

Cabir : u don't need to thank me.

All smile.

Mani : so nandini let's leave your mom must be waiting!

Cabir : wait what? Does she know about u two dating?

Manik smiles : ya!

Cabir happily : wow! That is done great news but how did that happen?

Nandini : its kind of a long story (she then stares at Manik giving looks) which even I don't know totally.

Manik gives nandini a please look.

Nandini : its okay manik!

Cabir : okay its late so I think we will carry on see u guys at college.

Nandini : ya sure!

Manik : Cabir thanks for not yelling at us and accepting us. It really means a lot

Cabir : ohh that's okay.

Nandini : really Cabir thank you so much

Nandini hugs Cabir and they all smile.

Cabir : by the way if u don't remember let me remind you that tomorrow you both have to record the song. So I will be at your house Nandini with everyone at 9.

Nandini : okay Cabir.

They all leave.
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Mukti is in the pub with some guy she likes from the college.

Mukti : so what do you do other than coming to college?

Guy : hang out with girls like u.

Mukti didn't take him seriously cause she thought he may be kidding.

She didn't know that he is cheap. So she went out with him.

Guy started touching her here n there.

Guy : so what do you do other than going to college?

Mukti kiddingly : hang out with guys like you.

Guy cheaply : ohh really? So show me what you do with guys like me.

Mukti took his hand of her and threw it away.

Mukti : mind your tongue Mr and don't u dare touch me.

Guy : why won't I touch u I am having fun.

He again tries to touch her but before he could touch her she slaps him.
He tried to molest her but however she managed to go out of the pub.

Outside the pub she started running crying hardly.

She was walking down the streets and suddenly saw a car coming. She got scared and because of that she fainted.

The guy came out of the car and looked on if she was hurt but fortunetly she wasn't hurt.

He took her in his arms and layed her down in the back seat.

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MaNan are on the door step of nandu's house.

Nandini pecks on manik's lips.

Nandini : it was the prettiest day of my life.

Manik : i'm glad I made you happy.

Nandini sexyly : you know what will make me more happy?

Manik : what?

Nandini : just forget it I want to save it for next time.

Manik naughtily comes towards her.

Manik : so Ms. Murthy was trying to get naughty?

Nandini naughtily : apne boyfriend k saath hi naughty banu gi na.

Manik naughtily : oh so boyfriend? I like it

Nandini naughtily : kya karu I have such a cute, smart, handsome and hot boyfriend.

Manik curls his arms around nandini's waist.

Manik naughtily: oh so you think I'm hot?

Nandini naughtily : no i think my boyfriend is hot. Tum toh mere friend ho.

Manik like a sad baby : what yaar Nandini. You can't do that okay!

Nandini laughs : okay sorry Mr. Manik Malhotra sorry. (She again starts laughing)

Manik : you!

Manik grabs her tight : don't try to be so smart.

Nandini : Manik Malhotra don't you know Nandini Murthy is already very smart.

Manik : oh really?

Manik leans down to kiss her and stops when Nandini closes her eyes.

He then laughs at her.

Nandini opens her eyes and feels embarrassed.

She again goes near him and kisses him deeply and runs in the house.

Nandini : I love you Mr. Manik Malhotra. Bye.

Manik smiles like a Romeo and leaves from there.

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Cavya are in the car near navya's house.

Navya : I really appreciate you accepting about Manik and Nandu.

Cabir : all thanks to you. Really thanks for telling me how to be.

Navya hugs him : aww Cabir u such a sweet heart.

Cabir loves her even more when she hugs him. He smells her hair like a lover boy.

Navya breaks the hug.

Navya : I think it's late and we have to record the song tomorrow.

Cabir : ya.

Navya comes out if the car and again bends down.

Navya : bye. Take care.

Cabir : bye.

Sorry for the late update.

Enjoy

Chapter 17 - page 16
Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update with very cute scenes
Plz update faster cant sleep without reading your update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww.. This ws a great update..
Awesome
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awesome ...loved it.pls continue soon...😊
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Awesome read all in one go loved it

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