fan fic part 9 updated pg 15 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome twist plz update soon loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
awesome..loved it...update soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Just read all parts now! It's awesome! Continue soon...can't wait to know what's I'll happen next! If possible do PM me and if you want I can PM you a fanfic I've been writing!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: eymane

Just read all parts now! It's awesome! Continue soon...can't wait to know what's I'll happen next! If possible do PM me and if you want I can PM you a fanfic I've been writing!

Thanks
and send me request for pm
sure pm fanfic to me I would love to read.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Its getting too interesting
Plz cont. Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
HI guys back with an update ...
well just wanna make somethings clear before I post.
1. I like to read comments so do comment.
2. I love reading suggestion so message me suggestion.
3.I usually post very late night because my entire day is occupied with studies.
4. For pm sent request.
5. PM me your fanfics of manan/ky2.
LAST BUT NOT LEAST.
I know I suck at romance it's my first attempt writing romance I do write stories but not romance , actually manan is first couple to make me in love with it or else me and love opposite. Honestly speaking I DON'T BELIEVE IN LOVE OR SOME BEAUTIFUL STORIES , But yeah manan has convinced me a bit but still...point of views depends ...SO sorry for that but I love to read books which mostly adventure.
One more thing I won't write intimate scene so...PLEASE DON'T SHOUT AT ME AFTER READING THE ROMANCE WHICH I AM ADDING IN THIS PART.
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PART 8 "Nandani"
She lifted her eyelids.
"You look beautiful when you blush"
"Mani.."
"What??? And I like that nick name "
She smiled.
"If our first born is girl I would name her manyia"
"Manyia ??"
She said frowning her brow.
"Manik and nadani so manyia product of true love"
" product of true love I like it .but I want boy"
"what about twins "
He said like he is trying to solve math sums.
"Twins"
"Yeah"
"Why??"
"You know you want baby boy and I want girl "
"It would be hard to look after twins"
"But it would be fun"
"Hmmm... manik I am very afraid"
"Afraid of what ???"
"Being mother , especially about all these months"
"I would be there for you nadani" He said taking her hands. "and it would be great honestly speaking"
He winked.
"Manik !!!"
She threw cushion on his face.
"Get up now I am going to help Ams"
"Wait did you told Ams ??"
"Not yet but I will"
"Okay and which color theme you want for baby shower??"
"Manik is it necessary to arrange baby shower ???"
"Yes it is"
"No!! We can celebrate alone"
"Yes we will but I want to celebrate in grand event , after all it's going to be our first born and I am very excited about it"
She smiled looking at him .
He leaned forward to kiss her.
Knock ...
"Not now"
She laughed and walked to open door
"Dinner is ready"
Servant informed.
...
At dinner all of them were very sleepy after a long day.
"So nadani did you continued your singing "
Tk asked.
"Not as such but just graduated from university"
"Oh I see , planing to do something"
"Not yet "
She replied in very formal tone.
"Oh"
"But sir we have excelled lot in music"
Cabir tried to change topic as he could see manik and nadani un comfortably exchanging looks.
"Yeah heard about it"
A small chit chat continued during dinner.
After dinner Ams asked them for tea but all of them refused insted went back to their room to sleep , Tk had left only Ams and nadani were left.
"Amms I have to tell you something"
She gained courage to tell her.
"Yes nadani"
"Amms I am .."
She stopped to tell her .
"I know"
Amms said .
"How do you know?"
"You are glowing"
She smiled and Ams hugged her.
"I am very happy for you"
She smiled again.
"You have to take a lot care of your self and yeah no more road tours and social works just rest at home and eat properly I will ask your aunt to check on you"
"Yeah and we are returning back earlier than scheduled Manik decided to return back as soon as he knew but I want to meet you so we increased for a bit of days"
"Nadani you know first time told me about manik I was very doubtful but your aunt convinced me and now I am happy I took right decision at that time Tk was very disappointed..."
"Ams why was Tk disappointed??"
She asked curiously .
"Because he had already asked me for your hand in marriage but I prefer your happiness"
"What??"
She got shocked.
"I didn't told you at that time"
What ??? thanks god manik does not know about this or else he would be annoyed I would tell him later. It dose matter any more not now when we are now connected into a beautiful and un breakable bond .No one can tear us apart.
She smiled at her own thought and then yawned.
"Ams I am sleepy now "
She said placing empty coffee mug on table.
"Okay Good night"
"Good night"
...
She walked quietly in to room and saw him sleeping carelessly Room was freezing she felt cold she looked for AC remote . Than spread curtains over window . Switched on lamp light and covered him with blanket .
"Oh god where is remote"
She looked back and forth.
She was shivering by know and slowly turned things upside down to find it.
When she could not find she crawled into blanket and felt asleep .
...
When he woke up around 3 am and looked her who was bending like a small child to cover herself from cold.
Old habit why can't she wake me and ask for remote but no she can't because she don't want to disturb my peaceful sleep
He switched of power button and spread blanket over her . Hairs covering her face and sleeping quietly .
She is gorgeous .
He thought
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Nandu is so caring 😃
Typical Manik, he of course wants a big celebration (I want to read it 😃)

TK that guy is forever lost in OUR Nandu 😡
Hopefully there will be a punch 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
It's a short yet sweet and simple update...very nice and I'm sure Manik will find out later about tk asking Nandu hand in marriage and that's what cause probs between them no? Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
wonderful update
u just nailed it
update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Loved it awesome update cont soon

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