Manan FF: Lets fall in love **Discontinued**

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lissy16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

hey where are you...
continue soon

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Shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

hey everyone I m busy with my exams. but promise I will update after 5 June

love u all :)

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Natashaaaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

anddd yaaa all the parth 4 ur exammm sisss

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Shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Natashaaa
shreyuuu epilogue to de deee

I can't write anything now a days dear.

stupid exams :(

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Shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Natashaaa
anddd yaaa all the parth 4 ur exammm sisss

hehehe... u mean all the best ?

thanks :)

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Natashaaaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: shreya_preets

hehehe... u mean all the best ?

thanks :)

yesss :D
exam ke baddd de dena

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--Kkkhushiii--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Amazing story

Love the friendship btwn MaNan

Update soon

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Anwesha 'Saisha' Rajak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

well.. umm.. to b vry frank m nt lyking ur story.. manikz character actually..
uh hv made manik all baddie.. gang fightz, bloodshed, smoking n drinking.. all the bad habitz dat a petson cud hv.. n yes sex too wid a new gal evry nyt..
hvin sex is nt a prblm.. but nt only as need..
uh hv showed hw manik is all alone n datz y he has turned baddie.. but instead uh cud hv given his character a lil twist..
nandini is okay.. nt a prblm at all..
nandiniz mom.. i forgot her name.. in which century c is living!! nandiniz dad supportz her.. then y cudnt c?? 1 shud hv trust on their child..
sorry m critizing ur story.. i read the 8 partz in 1 go n didnt lykd it..
thank uh foh the story..