Manan FF: Lets fall in love **Discontinued** - Page 20

When u r gng to update??????u said aftr 5 june bt u didnt...nt fair😭...plzz update na...

hey update it & plzz send pm...

Hey we all r watin for ur update plse update sooon

Hey shreya satin for new update

Originally posted by: Saisha77

well.. umm.. to b vry frank m nt lyking ur story.. manikz character actually..
uh hv made manik all baddie.. gang fightz, bloodshed, smoking n drinking.. all the bad habitz dat a petson cud hv.. n yes sex too wid a new gal evry nyt..
hvin sex is nt a prblm.. but nt only as need..
uh hv showed hw manik is all alone n datz y he has turned baddie.. but instead uh cud hv given his character a lil twist..
nandini is okay.. nt a prblm at all..
nandiniz mom.. i forgot her name.. in which century c is living!! nandiniz dad supportz her.. then y cudnt c?? 1 shud hv trust on their child..
sorry m critizing ur story.. i read the 8 partz in 1 go n didnt lykd it..
thank uh foh the story..

hey I respect your honest opinion but this is my story n my imagination. can't u see you r the only one who is not liking this otherwise everyone praising my story. BTW my question is what do u want? do u want me to stop writing or change it. well I m not going to do any of them because I have very nice readers who loves it.
its 2015 and these thing are normal for boys specially who lives in big cities so I don't think my actor's character is wrong. in KYY manik is different n I love him I just wanna show him different here. if someone has bad habits doesn't mean he is a bad guy. if u can see good things about him how he loves his friends and supportive for them.
talking about nandu mother so she is over protective n I given her intro in starting why she is like this.

hey my lovely readers my exams got postponed to 17 I m so very sorry but I promise after that I will give u back to back updates :)

love u all

another question anyone else who agrees with saisha77?

Its ur story and the characters are ur kids u knw them the bst
Mould them the way u like
And yes will be waiting for back to back updates 😃

Ps : I am loving the story

Originally posted by: pooh2015

Its ur story and the characters are ur kids u knw them the bst
Mould them the way u like
And yes will be waiting for back to back updates 😃

Ps : I am loving the story

thank you so much dear :)

shreya write it on ur own flow n don't listen to others its amazing n manik is also good n so far body need emmm its ok to do once jeyada mt krwa dena :)
amazing n awesome story cont soon

Originally posted by: mehjaben_nahin

shreya write it on ur own flow n don't listen to others its amazing n manik is also good n so far body need emmm its ok to do once jeyada mt krwa dena :)
amazing n awesome story cont soon

he he thanks
don't worry about that now when Nandini is here she will change him for sure ;)