BEST FRIENDS FOREVER.. MaNanBir FF ( UPDATED PART 37 /pg143) 8/5 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey ...
i m really loving ur story ...
when were mananbir not <3
really looking fwd to ur updates 😊
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RECAP-
Nandini feeling jealous of Manik Aliya closeness.
Nandini Aliya confrontation.


PART 8

Next morning my home

"Good morning monster"
Manik - "Ummm"
" Get up kumvkaran. Aur kitna soye ga? It's already 8. "
Manik - " 5 mnt aur plz"

"Aaiyaapa yeh larka kab sudhrega. ???"
" Maanik get up 5 mnts is over. Late ho jayega yaar." I seized his comforter to uncover him.

Manik tried hard to open his eyes . Rubbing his eyes he finally got up from bed and hugged and wished me "Good morning Mugambi. "

"Mugambi!!!subha subha kuch to achcha bola kar monster. By d way how's your headache. ?"

Manik - " looongg gone. I am Perfect now. And all credit goes to...to...to Rose mom. " he replied to irritate me.

"Achcha. ? Mom .? Okk. Fine. Chor mujhe and go n freshen up. "

"Maaanik tu utha Bachcha? Breakfast is ready come fast. ?" Mom shouted from kitchen.

"Go and jaldi se nahale. your clothes r there only. Okk. "

Manik -" Heyyy Mugambo!!!" He sarcastically replied and entered into bathroom.

After that we had our breakfast and left for school.

IN SCHOOL

I saw Aliya and mukti were discussing about something.
I could sense Aliya s anger towards me. And it was quite justifiable . But what I did for my best friend and I don't think I ve done any thing wrong.

------- Nandini pov ---------
Sayed kal kuch jyada hi rude jo gayi thi main. But why wouldn't I? Aree my best friend was sick and in spite of that she wanted to full fill her silly demands over his sickness. "
Aaiyaapa these silly girlfriends are na I am telling you hopeless.
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"Hey guys" I approached towards them. It looked like Aliya has already complained about me.
"Look Aliya! ! I am sorry. I behaved rude with u. Sorry naa. .."

Though she was not so convinced with apology but being formal she accepted with a fake fade smile " it's ok Nandini. I can understand. "

Manik - " hello girls "
then his words towards Aliya " Hey Aliya.. look I am sorry for not answering your call last night. Actually I had a bad headache and selpt so early. "

Aliya - " It's ok baby . How r u now. ?" And came forward to hug him.

Manik smartly skipped the hug and said " Perfect. U know Rose mom's massage and Nandu ' s black coffee can cure any kind of headache in a minute. "

Listing again Manik 's 'Nandu jaap' Aliya 's nose and ears became red in anger. But jealousy would be the better word to describe her facial expressions that time.
And being jealous her next stroke was "If it was cured so fast then why did not u answer my calls baby.?

But Manik being so casual, carefree and irritated with her taunt replied " I told you na I slept. Nandu say her na. Even Nandu made me sleep. "

---- pov ------
Clean bold. Aaiyaapa clean bold. Manik.. . .M anik my monster get ready to go out of the boundary. tu to gaya baby. Your Vodafone puppy will soon turn into a barking street dog.
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" Aare leave na. Who called ..who didn't received are all yesterday's matter. Past tense. And we should leave the past and live in present. hain na. " I tried to rescue my BFF from her third nitrogen bomb.

In this mean time teacher came and started his lectures.
I sighed and thanked Aaiyaapa for that damage control.
Classes went well. And it was my C.S. and Manik ' s music period. So bidding bye to each other we moved towards our respective classes.
In music class ,, Aliya tried to get little cozy with him but Manik excused himself.

After that we had our chemistry lab period for last two hours.

In Chemistry Lab

Our lab attender allotted us some unknown chemical salts (powder) which we had to identify through experiment.

As per roll number Me Cabir Dhruv and Navya were in one group and Manik , Aliya ,Mukti ,Abhi were in another group.

----------POV-------
meet Abhimanyu Thakkar. - a tall fair handsome and nice guy who has only two craze. One is electronic gazettes and other is Mukti Vardhan. He likes Mukti a lot but has no guts to express his feelings. Mukti also has some feelings for him but she has hidden it behind her tom boy tag.
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So we all started our experiment as per groups.
As my buddy Cabir and Navya were absent so only me and Dhruv were doing our experiment.

I was quite good in science so my group mates took advantage of it doing nothing leaving the whole experiment on my strong shoulder.
I couldn't deny but I really felt proud when someone appreciate my work even the other groups members asked me for help.
Trust me in the chem and physics lab you could hear two words very often these are " Nandini Help" and I happily actually proudly helped them.
But I had my one reason to help them and that was "practice makes perfect" so helping them I was making me perfect.


So experiment started. I took U tube and started pouring the unknown salt in it. In a sudden mistake some of the powder entered my eyes. and it started itching.
"Aaa" I gasped in irritation and tears fell down from eyes.

Dhruv - " Nandini what happened. ?" Then he realised " Ohh shit. That chemical entered into you eyes. ?"
Nandini - " Dhruv it's itching "
Dhruv - " let me help you"

He hold my eye lids smoothly with his fingers tip and started blowing air in my eyes through his mouth.

"Are you ok? " Dhruv asked me.
" yaa little bit"
Dhruv - " let's go and wash your eyes. "
And we went to the nearest sink and he helped me to wash my eyes. I felt relaxed after washing my eyes and thanked him with a big thankful smile and got back to our works.

The whole scenery was keenly observed by one pair of eyes.

"Manik now we ve to mix some hydrocarbon components with it. " Mukti told manik.
" Ummm what mukti? " Manik replied with confused tone.
Mukti - " kya what ? Suna nehi tune sir ne avi kaha to mix the solution with hydrocarbons. So raha tha kya. ?"
"Ohh ...haan. ...nehi. ..actually. ..yaa...let's do it. " Manik then shook his head to bring back to reality.

After a while Abhi asked me to help them with their experiment. Me and Dhruv had already completed our experiment and happily found sodium chloride and bagged chemistry sir's appreciations.

So I stretched towards them . When I was busy doing their experiment Manik promptly asked " What was going there some time back. ?"

Nandini-"What? Where ? "
Manik-" where means ? I said what was going on there with you and that dhruv? "
Nandini - "Ohh that .. o actually na..." but I was stopped by
Dhruv who was calling me to help him in assignment.
So without answering back to him I simply proceeded to help Dhruv.

----Manik Pov----
What the hell man!!! Aub mujhse jyada yeh dhruv important ho gaya iske liye. Aur yeh dhruv kar kya raha tha Nandu k sath wahan?
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Abruptly we heard a noise of glass breaking and we noticed some broken glass pieces on the floor.
" Manik kya kia tune ? Tune beaker kun tor dia ?" Mukti started scolding Manik.

"Manik!!! so irresponsible you are. Next time onward I will not excuse you." Our lab teacher also admonished him for wasting lab properties.

"Baby what happened? Are you alright. ?" Aliya tried to mild him keeping her hand on his shoulder.

Mean while bell rang and Manik jerked her hand of his shoulder and giving a stern glare to me walked out of the lab making me full utterly demented about what had happened...

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So guys this is for now. and thanks for liking my fiction. Pardon for grammatical and typos mistakes. suggestion and critics are welcome. stay tune for next...😊
Edited by musicialtie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fire is on both sides!! Nandu - manik both jealous!! 😆 😆 😃 oh what funnn

Awesome... Continue soon
Edited by shrutiavm - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awsm update
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
😉I ws soo waiting fr ur update.. Like literally
I m soo happy.. Kehte h na.. Ag dono side a barabar lgi h.. Dhuan bh barabar nikal aa rh..
I m so happy.. It ws an awesome update ..
Soo gud
Jst loved it..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow
manik ko bhi pta chal gaya ki jealousy kya hoti hai and I am enjoying this
Arre yaar yeh mukti yaha par bhi manik ko daanth rahi hai very bad
Awsm update
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG!!!! what an amazing update!
I wanna hug u music!
but taking my hug back..bcoz it was so bloody SHORT!!!
I want another one!..please please please!!!...*pleading touching ur feet virtually* 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was EPIC :) so jealousy is present on both the sides ;) nice nice!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Now its a fair war in love
Both will fight for their loved ones
Wonderful writing
Keep continuing
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: N_Niya

OMG!!!! what an amazing update!
I wanna hug u music!
but taking my hug back..bcoz it was so bloody SHORT!!!
I want another one!..please please please!!!...*pleading touching ur feet virtually* 😭


ohhh Nia 🤗 u... and sorry for chotu sa update. but i ll for sure make it for u in d next update on TOMORROW itself😊 love

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