MANAN-FF He is the storm of my life PART-31 updated pg110 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
hawww manan shower scene thanks 4 pm dear wat yr again cliffhanger update soon na
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Originally posted by: Natashaaa

hawww manan shower scene thanks 4 pm dear wat yr again cliffhanger update soon na

l😆 i be expert at hanging people here
Natashaaaaa thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh nooo yr that's not fair
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Posted: 10 years ago
cont soon
i read all in one go
intersting
cute nok jhok yr
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Posted: 10 years ago
wen u gona post
da next update???
cant wait !!!!
awsum wrk 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow ...awesome update..👏
continue soon ...
can't wait long..
and thanx for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago

Manik rushed and picked up the phone it was manan's parents.

cabir started searching wat manik is hidin and ofcourse his jaan se pyaari pendrive

NANdini was super scared she knew if cabir knew that she and manik r alone at house he wuld publish it like global news at the school

CABIR- kutta kahi ka pendrive apne paas rakhe tadpa raha hai

Nandini heard it and jerked -W*F pendrive was in her hand

MANIK (on phone and keeping check on cabir'smovement) ok mom.mmm

Cabir was about to open the washroom

MANIK jumped on him nd closed his eyes from behind

MANIK- haahaa kaun hai bata pehchaan kaun

CABIR-saale pagal hai kya pureee ghar mein tu akela hai

MANIK-right cabir maa intelligent bouy luv u

CABIR-tere lakshan kuch sahi nhi lag rahe mujhe

CABIR was about to turn but manik pulled him into a hug

MANIK-tu apne bhai ke gale nhi lagega

CABIR-tu yeda hogaya sanki kahi pendrive dekhne tu exicted hogaya be dur haat meri izzat pe haath dal raha hai mai jaa raha hoon pendrive kal le loonga

MANIK-jaaa naa ree

CABIR-ladka hoon mai pendrive wali samjh rakha hai mujhe

CABIR went nandini came out laughin and manik jumped on the bed took a *sigh* of relief

MANIK-mom dad are stuck in agra kal 12 baaje ko hii roads khule gaye

NANDINI-wat

MANIK-yup u sleep here in mom dad's room mai next room mai hoon

NANDINI-kal school?

MANIK-haan toh aaj wala uniform phen lena aur spray mar lena

NANDINI- wat uniform only aur abhi cheez

MANIK-aur kya cheez and realized ohh woh mom ka pehn lena

NANDINI-manikkk get lost its already 10 wid cabir ka tamasha

MANIK went to sleep and both off sudden phone rang manik picked it up half drowsy

MANIK's MOM-u haven't wake up school

MANIK- saw the time r ushed byeee mom busy

MANIK-rushed to next to check on nandini she was still sleeping and manik tried to ake her here it goes kick!!!! Maink bloody hell irritated took the jug and dumped it on her face

NANdini -jerked up wat the pagal hai kya

MANIK- 10 min mai ready ho jao school hai

NANDINI runs n washroom and keeps shoutin grrr no brush and daant manjhan and she opens the tap to find cold water

MANIK's ROOM

NANDINI-manik room mai garam pani nhi aar raha

MANIK-haan waha geyser kaam nhi karta

NANDINI and manik looks at maniks washroom both rush into it

NANDINI-mai ladies first

MANIK-tumhe hot waater ki kya zaaroot tum khud hi hona itni hot mai toh cool hoon toh mujhe zarorat hogay

NANDINI-just goo na manik

MANIK-ghar kis ka hai

NANDINI-cement ka go

MANIK starts pushing each and manik unknowly presses the shower

NANDINI and manik both r under shower nandini goes she was about to slip that manik pulls her from her waist .they were really close manik touches nandini's face with the other hand and nandini freezes

On his touch she lifts her head up *eyelock* manik moves towards her lips nandini closes her eyes.

MANIK was about to kiss

MANIKK BABA tiffin table par rakhaa hai

NANDINI opens her eyes nd pushes manik away both were drenched

MANIK- tum yaha lelo bath iam in next room

NANDINI - staring at the floor

LOL -NO PRECAP

sorry for the delay actually busy wid college hit like if u liked the chapters and thanks to all who comments its really encouraging for me to write

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Posted: 10 years ago
Yepieesss u updated and cabir ki cheesy lines aur manan ka shower scene but it's choti update very bad aur ha u write very well cont soon and awsm update 👏 and ha u r ssuchh a cliff hanger very bad ha
Edited by Dhariya_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
sooo hot manan's shower scene.again a cliffhanger.girl u really test my Patience .plz next part update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

sooo hot manan's shower scene.again a cliffhanger.girl u really test my Patience .plz next part update soon

lol😆 that be the USP of my ff yaa will now start the next part😃

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