OS:Happy Holi Manik----Part 2 updated - Page 12

Originally posted by: aavani

wow...part 2 was superb...amazing...loved it...especially the last scene...awww so cute manan covering with red dupatta...u penned it beautifully...pls do write more OS like this...❤️

thanks a lot for the pm dear...
take care🤗

Thanq Avani
Will surely try to write more

hi..

Originally posted by: vandanamenon

Good one. looks like screenplay of Monday's episode. I enjoyed ur earlier ff also. keep writing 👏

Ohh thanq so much
hope we get something like this😊

Originally posted by: kristii

hi..

m new to the forum cum silent reader..

i hv read almost most of urs work..

loved all your works...i m oviously fan of urs..

n this one was also awsome as always...

Thanq Kristi

n welcome to the forum

Originally posted by: kresham

yaa I noticed that u r missing from forum...but y r u not active...

but i m touched that u came for reading my os...thanq somuch

Hey kritika. ...wow girl. ...This ts is so good yar. ...Every line manik told banding was so wonderful. ...It was very touching. ...

👏👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: sana.1990

ya dear i have been busy exams job so was away from the forum ...but ur OS made me come .. lovedd it

the part2 manik drunk and nandini scenes too lovee.. made my sunday worth it ...

u will always shine for me i really want this line again in the show ... u made me feel the episode is going on ..

u are an amazing writer...and u should write more..love to read it ...😳🤗

Thanq Sana🤗

I ll try to write more

Originally posted by: shravya.kr

Hey kritika. ...wow girl. ...This ts is so good yar. ...Every line manik told banding was so wonderful. ...It was very touching. ...

a very meaningful ts as well...u perfectly wrote maniks fears so well. ...loved it ...u always rock girl. ...Thanks for writing. ...😊

Thanq Shravya

Originally posted by: mydiva

👏

loveddd it :) the 2nd part is eveeen more awesome...

Thank u for such a lovely OS 👍🏼

-Mini

Thanq somuch Mini