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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harinisriram39

Mera lamba comment chalagaya net coonection ki waha se :'( Will try to write it all again.

Really loved the second part. And ofcourse MaNan convo. Like how Mukti took back Abhi to hospital.
Ha... Dhrulya ko dekh ke Cabir ka saara nasha utargaya hoga. Good atleast three people remained sober to handle their friends and lo Nandu got Manik - reminds me of their mud fight where Nandu gets to spy on Manik :-).
Haaa drunk Manik again and he speaks her mind out. I really loved the ground rules. esp where he tells her that she should not leave him even if he pushes her away. So like a chota bachcha, our Manik. Now Nandu should also set some ground rules once Manik gets sober. Par bande ko kuch yaad kahan rehta hai. Good that Nandu got to know what is in his mind and she would never ever give up hope whatevet he tells her next. I really loved where he holds her dupatta and plays with her bangles. Hope they show something like this in the show. Sach mein show wala feel aagaya. Can imagine Cavya's dialogues and Navya signalling Nandini not to drink.
Thank you so much for this OS esp MaNan convo. Not expecting much from the show.

Good you named it as OS. Warna serial gossip wale isko bhi apne prediction list mein lagaa dete :D.

Thank you once again.

Aww Harini...thanq somuch for pointing out the important point
I was waititng for someone to point out that playing with bangles scene but no one did
then i thought i cudnt pen it down properly
But see u did it...
I wanted this to end on good n positive note so kept everyone with their partners n dint took the actual essence of the characters like i did for keeping Nandini,Navya ,Nandini n Abhi kept sober ...

So thanq for pointing out the imp points in OS
n Yes they already took some point from first part n made an article also ...i posted it in the mrng
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dont stop at the right scene haan next time...I wont spare you then😆
Anyway its nice...Wish to have beyond OS in the show😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb Kriti !! Enjoyed reading both the parts . I wish this happens in tomorrow's episode and Loved the red dupatta's significance . 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: poonz26

Os was very good hope we same story in the episode specially the last part where the red dupaata covers them very romantic

thanq n hope so
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my god
The os was amazing
Loved it
Wish this could have happened in the show also 😉
It was written beautifully
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Edna_Philip

Dont stop at the right scene haan next time...I wont spare you then😆

Anyway its nice...Wish to have beyond OS in the show😉

i was expecting this reply from y...as u asked for a romantic manan scene...

to tell u frankly I can't write more than this...

don't know how much time it took for me for that last scene... but when I saw ur reply I thought u will definitely cum up with this reply...

but thanks n m glad that u liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sal_aphrodite

Superb Kriti !! Enjoyed reading both the parts . I wish this happens in tomorrow's episode and Loved the red dupatta's significance . 👍🏼

thanq sal...

as I was expecting this from show... from the time niti posted the pics...me n priyanka were discussing abt they shud definitely show some signicance abt bangles n dupatta...
but i guess will they or not
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: snehal.sharma

Oh my god
The os was amazing
Loved it
Wish this could have happened in the show also 😉
It was written beautifully
Thanks for the pm 😊

thanq somuch...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...part 2 was superb...amazing...loved it...especially the last scene...awww so cute manan covering with red dupatta...u penned it beautifully...pls do write more OS like this...❤️

thanks a lot for the pm dear...
take care🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good one. looks like screenplay of Monday's episode. I enjoyed ur earlier ff also. keep writing 👏

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