MaNan Two-Shot: Armas y Rosas (complete) - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey..its awesome..
i donno why bt i liked maniks POV more thn nandu..may be m biased to manik😆
it was really sweet..n those woman hatred vale thoughts n feeling for nandu ..was lovely combination..
loved it😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
U left me speechless girl! This was AH-MAZIN!👏 Loving the updates! And dont at all expect us to be disappointed of it! This one is really worth reading! Actually the best on Manan I've ever read! (Though I love many other shots too but believe me this one is MIND-BOGGLING😆)!!!!
Update the nxt part soon dear!👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
jst read 2nd update n tht ws simply WOW...i wish u had continued this..will u plz?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
And now this is fabulous work!
Really amazing!
I love the eloquence in your language. Your choice of words is fascinating; stringed together in such a nice way.
It really helps build the flow of the work. Not to mention, it's very important in establishing the characters thoughts, considering none of this was dialogue.

Aaah, I wish.. Oh I wish I could write like this.
Honestly beautiful!
One of the best pieces of work I've read!
I would love to read more from such a talented writer :D
So please do!!!!! (:

Lots of love
Hinal <3

PS. Thank you for the PM :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
wow!!! awesome update...well done !⭐️😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
BELLE!!
idhar aa for so many hugs!!!

I LOVE U FOR THIS!🤗
It felt so nice to read it too..
And while I cannot say for all men, I can say that this one is sensitive and inquisitive for sure :D

Sorry for late reply!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Amazing update!!!!
Loved the way you have described their journey of love...from their hatred to conflict to realization to acceptance

Loved it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Okay.
OKAY.
Excuse me while I go learn to BREATHE.
*runs away, sticks head under shower, screams and jumps, hyperventilates*
*runs back all professionally*
You, my girl, are professional. Do not lie. It is not POSSIBLE for an amateur to write so brilliantly.
THIS. IS. PERFECTION.
AT. ITS. FINEST.
I am stunned by the way your words just seem to meld into one another, like you aren't even trying, but the result is perfect anyway.
I have never been so pleased with a fiction. THIS is writing.
*bows head*
*slow clap*
*dies*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wao.. belle... d way u described manik's journey was amazing...
n hatss off to ur vocablory
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks to all the members who commented! I loved reading your replies! :). :D
Made my days really!


This was the end of the TS.
Thank you for reading!
If you are, by any chance, expecting a reply from me, I'm very sorry but that won't be happening. :)



Signing off...
Edited by Ribelle_IshRa - 10 years ago

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