Passionate fireflies (A Manan ff) Part 3-Pg 5

Hey people.. Have been reading quite a few ffs these days.. Manan fever you know... Toh socha.. Even I'll write one.. My story.. Of manan.. As of now.. This is going to be from nandini's pov..

Part 1 : The very first meet

Nandini: Dhruv! Kahan hai tu? Meri flight ko land hoke 3 ghante ho gaye hain.. Hai kahan tu?

Dhruv: i know nandini! I know! I'm soo sorry.. Tujhe toh pata hai na.. Shaadi wale ghar mein hazaar kaam hote hain.. And this my dear.. Is my wedding..

Nandini: but 3 hours? Aur kitna time lega yaar? US se india.. Itni lambi flight.. And tu mujhe aur wait kara yahan par..

Dhruv: right there nandu.. Mukti aayi hai tujhe lene... My cousin.. You do know her right?

Just then a tall girl taps her shoulder.. Mukti!
Mukti: nandini?
Nandini: mukti! Finally you're here! Let's go! (To Dhruv) yes, I'm finally coming to you dhruvii... I'll see you

In the car..
Mukti: nandini.. I just have pick someone up.. I hope that's cool with you..
Nandini: oh, yes! Absolutely!

And with that.. Nandini opens up her book...

Nandini Moorthy is 22 year old sweet bubbly girl doing her masters in the US... She's here.. In india for Dhruv.. Her best friend's wedding.. And and our nandini loves to read.. Books are her best friends!

Mukti: ah! Here he is!
Nandini looks up to see who this stranger is... And she sees a tall, very good looking guy walking towards the car.. Her heart just skips a beat.. She just kept on staring at him.. Admiring him..
Mukti: nandini? You mind sitting at the back?
And her trail of thoughts were broken..
Nandini: ya sure!

She gets out of the car.. Again stunned at the looks of this absolutely gorgeous stranger that is now standing so close to her.. For a second she thought he stopped too.. She could not be sure.. Nandini was never used to guys looking at her like that.. This was new to her..
She smiled at him.. She didn't know why.. But she did.. Only to see a blank reaction from the opposite side.. Just as she was about to feel guilty for doing that.. Her handsome stranger returned the smile...
He held the back door open for her.. And she hopped into the back seat.. Blushing..
Nandini: absolutely good looking + chivalrous (she whispered to herself)

The guy: mukti... Thankx for picking me up yaa.. Aaj bhi late hota toh Aliya kachcha chaba jati mujhe!
Mukti: anyday buddy! By the way this is nandini... And nandini.. This is manik..
Manik: nandini.. Hey..
Giving her the warmest smile he could..
Nandini: hi manik

And the rest of the ride.. Nandini could not stop blushing.. For no particular reason.. She did not have the guts to look up and look at him... She was not sure if she could get her eyes off him.. Was not very easy for her the last time!
Manik on the other hand.. Was also stealing glances at nandini whenever he could... They had this instant connection..
Their very first meet...


Oky guys... This is it... Lemme know how ya'll think it is... And if ya'll want me to continue or not?!

wow awsm start

Good starting. Instant conmection..ya kismat connection..
Looking forward fr the next part.
Please PM me if possible when u update. :))

thank you guyss... yes.. i'll be continuing soon... 😃 😃😃

awsome start...seems interesting...pls continue soon dear...😊

Originally posted by: payal_diya

Good starting. Instant conmection..ya kismat connection..
Looking forward fr the next part.
Please PM me if possible when u update. :))

this was nice ...lovely start :)

this is something different yet similar ... manan yahan bhi ek dusre se dur nahi reh skte... nice start .. continue soon ... and PM me if possible...

i loved the begining
too differnet
cont sooon

Okay people... I'm here with the next part.. Firstly.. Thank you soo much for all the comments.. Ya'll are very encouraging! Enjoy the update! :D

Part 2 :

After like an hour of mukti's continuous ranting.. And manik and nandini's sealing glances of each other.. They finally reached dhruv's place.
Dhruv: nandini! Aa hi gayi tu!
Nandini: hanji! Aa hi gayi! Teri shaadi kaise miss karti? (She gave him a big hug) Aliya? Kahan hai?
Aliya: right here babes. You look as gorgeous as ever! (She says as she hugs nandini)
Nandini: whoa! A compliment like that.. Coming from the fashionista.. Thank you beautiful!
While all this was on.. Manik and mukti were busy with their own discussions.. Mukti had a few questions for manik! ;)

Mukti: oye hero! Kya chal raha tha?
Manik: kya chal raha tha?(unable to get mukti.. As he was busy admiring nandini)
Mukti: car mein.. Tere aur nandini k beech? Kya chal raha tha?
(On hearing nandini's name.. Manik got alarmed)
Manik: kya bol rahi hai? Kuch bhi toh nahi.. Aaj pehli baat mila hu.. Kya ho sakta hai?
Mukti: blonde hum Aliya ko bulate hain.. Mujhe nahi.. Main saara rasta tujhse baat kar rahi thi.. Aur teri toh aankhon hi aankhon mein baatein chalu thi
Manik: aisa kuch bhi nahi hai meri maa! Tu jaanti hai mujhe..
Mukti: jaanti hu tabhi keh rahi hu na.. Tujhe aise dekha nahi kabhi pehle. Par tu bol raha hai toh maan leti hu.. But, i have my eyes on you! ;) (and with that she leavs)
Manik: is ladki se bach k rehna padegaa.

Nandini (in her room): mujhe freshen up hona hai.. And i just can't figure this geyser out.. Kisi ko help karne k liye bulati hu
Nandini: mukti.. Plz help me out with the geyser na.. Mujhe shower lena hai.. And cold water.. I just can't bare it..!
Mukti: haan.. Ek min.. (To manik) manik.. Nandini ki help karde plz.. Mujhe Aliya bula rahi thi.. (She winks at manik and leaves)
Manik: mukti (but before he could even finish his sentence.. She was out of there) Come nandini.. Let me help you..
Each time he takes her name, nandini's heart skips a beat!
Nandini: umm.. Sure

The walk to nandini's room.. Was very awkward.. They didn't speak to each other..
Nandini(to herself) : how can someone be this gorgeous.. This perfect? (But the she realized what she was thinking) ssshhh nandini.. Tu ye sab nahi sochti hai.. Haan.. Par ye.. He intimidates me! (She was checking him out all this while) soo hot!
Manik: huh? Tumne kuch kaha?
Nandini: haan? Nahi toh! Kuch bhi nahi..
Manik: so, what do you do? US mein?
Nandini: masters.. In literature..
Manik: wow! Nice!
Nandini: tum?
Manik: family business.. Same old!
(They reached the bathroom.. Manik.. Fidgeting with the shower.. He was confused himself :P Nandini was admiring him all this while.. She just dint mind him taking so much of time. Standing close to him.. She was just staring at him)
Nandini(to herself) : i wonder what it would be to touch him.. That face.. (She brought her hand.. Towards his face..)
Manik: done.. This is the knob.. Isko bas aise turn karna aur
(And she touches his face.. He, surprised at this sudden gesture of hers.. Turned to face her.. She came closer to him. He.. Gazing into those eyes of hers he forgot what he was here for.. He forgot everything.. Slowly he started to bring his lips towards hers.. His one hand was still on the knob.. While with the other free hand.. He pulled her closer to himself.. And their lips met.. He kissed her and she kissed him back.. It was a slow.. Very passionate kiss that they shared.. Manik wanted to pull her closer.. But before he could do that.. He unintentionally turned the shower on.. And they were snapped back into their senses.. Nandini.. Just when she realized what just happened.. She took a step back and turned.. She didn't know what to tell him.. Or how to even look at him..
Here, manik was going through the same things)
Manik: i think Dhruv needs me (and he rushes out of her room)



That's part 2 for you guys! Their first kiss.. That's what the name of this part was supposed to be.. But i didn't want to give it away pehle hi.. So no name! :P Lemme know how you like it.. And if i should continue it or not?