Passionate fireflies (A Manan ff) Part 3-Pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Thank you soo much dearies! Sorry.. Have been a lil busy with college and all.. But will be updating soon! Thankx for all the lovely comments! :) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Lol! So you started it with lust!! 😉 Bold huh... Haha! But a good one. Please continue soon... It's interesting. Curious to know how they move on now!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Hello guys.. Back with part 3.. Thank you for all the comments.. Enjoy part3:

Part 3:

While taking shower all nandini could think about was manik..that face.. His eyes.. His lips.. The kiss..
Oh shit nandini! What were you even thinking?! Aaj hi mili hai tu usse.. Vo kya soch raha hoga tere baare mein! But.. Wait.. He also kissed me.. I was not the only one.. (Touching her lips.. Blushing..) par.. Did it even mean anything to him?! Like it did to me.. Oh god! This is soo confusing! (She turns the shower off.. Taps herself dry.. Wraps the towel around herself and come out of the bathroom only to see manik sitting on the bed.. Waiting impatiently..
Nandini: manikkk!! (Shocked! She screams)
Manik: (taken aback.. Realizing what was going on) oh shit! (Covers both his eyes with his hands and turns) I'm soo sorry nandini
Nandini: manik! Are you crazy?! Tumhe pata nahi hai kisi ladki k room mein aise nahi aate hain?!(holding her towel tight)
Manik:I'm soo sorry nandini.. I didn't mean to(turning to face her)
Nandini: NO! Don't turn!!
Manik: (closing his eyes tight) yaa yaa! I think i should go! (And he leaves)
Nandini rushes to close the door. Once closed.. She turns and laughing at the little encounter of theirs.. She somehow found it funny.. And cute.. The way manik closed his eyes.. "I think he wanted to say something. That's why he was here. Never mind.. I'll catch up with him.. Too much of manik for now!"

"Manik! What the hell were you thinking?! Firstly you kiss this girl you've just met.. And then on top of that you end up in her room. What were you even thinking.. Kya soch rahi hogi vo! Oh god! I dun want her to think anything bad about me! I need to talk to someone about this! This is too much for me." He dials a number.. "Cabir! I need you here at dhruv's place, now! "

Manik tells Cabir his entire story.. Cabir is one fellow.. Who understands him better than anyone else.
Cabir: what? (With his shocked expression) yar, tujhe ek din akela kya chod diya,tu toh itna aage nikal gaya!( laughing at Manik)
Manik: has mat! Teri help chahiye.. Mujhe nahi chahiye ki vo mere baare kuch aisa waisa soche.
Cabir: aisa waisa? Tune usko pehle hi din.. Matlab, milne k kuch hi ghanto mein kiss kar diya.. Aur tu expect kar raha hai vo aisa Vaisa na soche? Kaise bhai mere? Kaise?
Manik: mujhe nahi pata.. Main kaise bataun usko what it meant to me!
Cabir: dude.. I think u should take it a lil slow.. Aaj hi mile ho.. Thoda time do isko..
Manik: hmm.. I think ur right.
Cabir: chal.. Jake dekhe in humare dulhe raja kya kar rahe hain.. Aaj Sangeet hai uska..
Manik: ya.. Chal..


Oky people.. Part 3! Do leave your comments on how u like it! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
yaar what's this...ittu chhotu sa update!! u're making me frustrated now.. 🥱
BTW.. chhotu tha but aag ko hawa zaroor de gaya.. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
fantastic update 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: N_Niya

yaar what's this...ittu chhotu sa update!! u're making me frustrated now.. 🥱
BTW.. chhotu tha but aag ko hawa zaroor de gaya.. 😃



Hehe.. I know chottu tha... Have been busy ya.. But I'll surely make up for this! :P :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Seriously itna chotu sa update..!! But cute one...
Next time lamba update dena please..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
cutesa ... chotu sa update... loved it
pls continue soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
awsome ...pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Itna chota update 🤔

But it was cute.. like how they both are so worried abt what the other person would think ..

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