From the Kiss to the Punch - A MaNan OS - Page 4

its so good!

" He groaned.
And he could not control it anymore. He
pulled her close, so close that there was no
space for air to pass between them. Fisting
his hand in her hair, he swooped down to
kiss her. Her hands automatically came
around his neck and she kissed back with
equal fervour. He smiled at her reaction.
Nandini Moorthy. Always guarded, ever so
innocent, was kissing him like an
experienced lover." i want this!

Please do write more manan os

This was the last one? Is there more? Did you write more on MaNan? Did you? DID YOU? *looks hopefully*

RESERVED😲

editing.

OMG
OMG
OMG
OMG
WHY ON EARTH DID I NOT READ IT EARLY? LIKE WHY ON EARTH DID I FREAKING NOT SEE THIS EARLIER? LIKE DLKSMLKMCF LIKE DKLSMFLKM GOD DAMN THIS THIS THIS!!

Okay waiting for my emotions to come in control COS DAMN THIS IS LIKE HEAVEN.

POOL. DAMN IT POOOL!! POOOL! LIKE POOL!
ZEE DID I SAY I LOVE YOU? WELL I'M SAYING IT NOW.
WHAT IS THIS? This is one of my most favorite manan WORK TO DATE! THIS IS SO GOOD, CONTINUE ;( i want more, i could kill for more of this! This is epic okay? you're epic.

So firstly the writing is flawless, you're so good with the flow of words and emotions and you gave both Manik and Nandini their set of emotions and their depictions were so on the mark and equally thought of, I loved Nandini's monologue and inner thoughts, DAMN SO ON SPOT for the OS and then Manik's <33 EEE.

LET ME SAY I LOVE THE TENSION AND SETTING OF IT. COS POOL
And because it made me all eager and go all eee what's going to happen now AND I LOVED EVERY SINGLE WORD AND I CAN'T BELIEVE IT ENDED! I love as Nandini's sitting alone at the pool, her turmoil and emotions are depicted so beautifully and there's that breathless anticipation for Manik's arrival and then his side and you don't disappoint and then the confrontation IS LOVEEE AND EEE ALDKSADLGH She always turns him on doesn't she?🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 THAT'S LIKE A GIVEN🤣🤣 THAT WAS SO HOT *___* I love how subtly and beautifully you described the sexual tension, how he was so aware of her and how the struggle was legit, and the tension was thick and i couldn't wait to see how it'll become the kiss and the punch and then they were in the pool.
DAMN MY FAVORITE PLACE TO BE WHEN IT COMES TO THE TWO!!!!
And HE KISSED HER! AJKSDSKDJ THAT WAS HOT OKAY? :$ Pool kiss. I died or what? GUSHES LIKE A FAWAAARA!!

I NEED MORE :(
and then Manik being Manik he said that🤣 like a legit gadhaa he is, so overwhelmed and scared, I LOVE THIS PART :')) and Nandini punched him, she should've kneed him too🤣 IT WAS SO FUNNY, I CRACKED UP🤣🤣🤣

omg no this isn't fair. This ended, it can't add. I want more. PLEASH PLEASH!

THIS IS PERFECT AND IT HAS EVERYTHING! Anticipation, a quality of thrill, breathless romance, hotness, epicness🤣
I WANT MORE
MORE

AND EE ZEEE YOU'RE SO GOOD YOU BETTER WRITE MORE MAN!! LIKE WHERE ARE MORE OSES? AND MORE POOL OSES? GIVE ME NOW. I DESERVE!! And now let me bookmark this one because I LOVE THIS ONE! it's so good :')) I LOVE YOU AND I BE SO PROUD OF YOU <3

Rida😳

Zee I read it one more time and I still get shiver down my spine. These two can give u feels anywhere and in any place and trust u to write something like this. And it become all the more hot, sexy and beautiful at the same time.
Because while all those moment u didnt forget to write about the hurt and pain.

Good job Zee.

Krayyy - Pool pe Pool.

@Rida You fangirling over my OS?? My life is complete. 🥳

hehe it's awesome..

its amazing

Your most popular OS. You and especially Jaggs must be really happy😃

It's a treat to read this. Love reading it.😳