Bring it on Day 2! - The mind vs the heart - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Oyshee...

exactly my point! nandini needs to get back to her confident self...i know she's shattered inside now... she herself cant believe what she did to manik...

but she needs to buck up... and that too soon! nandini needs to tell him that no matter what manik does or says, she's not going anywhere and they clearly are not, and can never be, done! the end? not happening dude!

I reckon she'll get there. I mean today she was able to atleast somewhat talk to him and she knew what she needed to say. The past few days otherwise just had been tears and more tears. But the story is progressing. Today she doesn't know that some of his comments or actions are intentional... it's just a matter of a few days and all she needs is that one clue that reassures her that no he can't live without her. Just like he's in the dilemma of whether to listen to the mind or heart... she's also confused whether to believe the logical reasoning or emotional reasoning. After all she has been a science student all her life 😆 but dw... so far, the heart has continued to overpower the mind for the both of them and the day this cloud of doubt flies away, we'll have a manan relationship which will be unbreakable!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneet05

so beautifully written ...wow...just love it...keep writing ...it makes us happy🤗

thanks sweets! Really kind of you :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well put again 👏
His last look conveyed it all...the love, hope and passion. Manik is all heart ❤️

Kudos to Parth for being able to tug at the heartstrings with just a look. 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Amazing..amazing ..amazing. Your depiction of Manik is always perfect. You breakdown his actions..his feelings and everything to the T.


He can walk away but he can't stay away.
This battle between his heart and mind is one which the heart will ultimately win as we all know..But even today we could see how his heart seemed to have the winning edge...Whenever she touched him, the touch went deep down to his soul...how he fought to shake her touch away when he desperately wanted to hold on to her...but instead..he is holding on the betrayal but that grip is slowly loosening..

The library scene where he visibly fought to keep from remembering the memories she spoke of..but could do nothing as his heart welcomed the memories...those memories were the moments that made them fall in love...how can they forget them?
How can he forget her ?

He can't..she is engrained into his very existence..He tried to so hard to convince himself and her...The Haan. Such a lie. The lie was proven when he walked away from her sight but still stood there to watch her till the last second...The scene broke my heart

Like Nandini says : If it doesn't hurt...it isn't love

This Hurt is Their Love for now...soon they will heal...forgive..and become stronger.

-Reya <3

haha honestly sometimes I'm not too sure if I can depict Manan and their love correctly... but dayum, you can really understand my mindset and thought process so thankyou for that! Couldn't agree with you more. Honestly speaking I actually quite like this whole track. As they say, sometimes the fear of losing the one who you love can help you realize their love and importance. And this is exactly the realization they both will soon come across. The fear was evident in both their eyes in the last 2 days so definitely we're starting to see the glimpse of a bright light at the end of this dark, daunting tunnel
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Posted: 10 years ago
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haha honestly sometimes I'm not too sure if I can depict Manan and their love correctly... but dayum, you can really understand my mindset and thought process so thankyou for that! Couldn't agree with you more. Honestly speaking I actually quite like this whole track. As they say, sometimes the fear of losing the one who you love can help you realize their love and importance. And this is exactly the realization they both will soon come across. The fear was evident in both their eyes in the last 2 days so definitely we're starting to see the glimpse of a bright light at the end of this dark, daunting tunnel

Manan are a complicated duo to begin with..honestly i don't think they even fully understand themselves but you do a great job...i quite enjoy your analysis and look forward to them so you keep figuring Manan out for us..lol

You know what..i am loving this track too ! I am such a sadist at heart...i love me some angst..i feel the love becomes so much more powerful when we have to fight for someone...
You are right..the fear is definitely evident for both of them...I feel as thou Nandu should fight for Manik...find her inner strength to fight for Manik like he wants her to..

It's gonna be bumpy ride to their reunion but i am definitely ready !

-Reya <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Manan are a complicated duo to begin with..honestly i don't think they even fully understand themselves but you do a great job...i quite enjoy your analysis and look forward to them so you keep figuring Manan out for us..lol

You know what..i am loving this track too ! I am such a sadist at heart...i love me some angst..i feel the love becomes so much more powerful when we have to fight for someone...
You are right..the fear is definitely evident for both of them...I feel as thou Nandu should fight for Manik...find her inner strength to fight for Manik like he wants her to..

It's gonna be bumpy ride to their reunion but i am definitely ready !

-Reya <3

haha I'll try my best at it! Cheers for believing in me :D It's going to take quite a lot of days though but I'm ready for day 3 already ;) that's really cute... and tbh I feel the strength in a relationship that such startling and disheartening experiences bring within a relationship, escalates the purity, love and trust in a relationship forever. So a love story which has faced those initial obstacles and overcome them, comes out to be the strongest. An unbreakable love story. An eternal love story.
You are so correct... they definitely are... but there love is so beautiful that it'll all be worth fighting for. Same here... the passion is yet missing and will only comes once she can start believing in the fact that she is the only one for him. I feel she still lacks that somewhere in herself. Possibly the weigh of her guilt is overpowering her heart too much at this stage. She is confident that he loves her unconditionally which is a positive trust factor but she needs to bring that trust factor for herself in herself too. I reckon somewhere in the back of her mind, she isn't fully convinced that their love has the potential to face and overcome any obstacle in ife. She still believes somewhere on her mind that they can only give pain to each other. It might be just a mild thought, but the doubt is certainly there. The day she gains that confidence, that there is noone else for him except herself, we'll see that fiery, edgy and stubborn nandini who we're all waiting for. The one who won't be taking any of his "yes's" or "no's" as an answer and will fight with him, for him.
Certainly going to be a bumpy ride but as long as we'll get to see the both of them on the screem together, it'll be a treat to watch :D

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twinkle10


haha I'll try my best at it! Cheers for believing in me :D It's going to take quite a lot of days though but I'm ready for day 3 already ;) that's really cute... and tbh I feel the strength in a relationship that such startling and disheartening experiences bring within a relationship, escalates the purity, love and trust in a relationship forever. So a love story which has faced those initial obstacles and overcome them, comes out to be the strongest. An unbreakable love story. An eternal love story.
You are so correct... they definitely are... but there love is so beautiful that it'll all be worth fighting for. Same here... the passion is yet missing and will only comes once she can start believing in the fact that she is the only one for him. I feel she still lacks that somewhere in herself. Possibly the weigh of her guilt is overpowering her heart too much at this stage. She is confident that he loves her unconditionally which is a positive trust factor but she needs to bring that trust factor for herself in herself too. I reckon somewhere in the back of her mind, she isn't fully convinced that their love has the potential to face and overcome any obstacle in ife. She still believes somewhere on her mind that they can only give pain to each other. It might be just a mild thought, but the doubt is certainly there. The day she gains that confidence, that there is noone else for him except herself, we'll see that fiery, edgy and stubborn nandini who we're all waiting for. The one who won't be taking any of his "yes's" or "no's" as an answer and will fight with him, for him.

Certainly going to be a bumpy ride but as long as we'll get to see the both of them on the screem together, it'll be a treat to watch :D

Technically it's only been one day in their life and already you see Manik magnetizing ( i believe this is a word..lol) towards Nandini..but for us...their one day is so many days..lol

@bold...those words my dear are so so beautiful...you have a writer in you..i love the way you wrote those words...
You are absolutely correct...When Manik fought for Nandini and wanted her back...he did with confidence...took extreme measures ( kipnapped her) but that's Manik for us: Extreme with everything, should be his love or hatred. Nandini has to pick up on his extreme streak to get through to him..
Acknowledge her mistake..get past the guilt and get her guy back with his mindset...
And Nandini hersefl says..if it;s doesn't hurt, it isn't love then why does deep down still believe they only give each other pain..Pain is part of love...we give our loved ones pain but we are the only ones that can heal them too.
But yeah...nandini got buck up and release her inner sherni-ness

-Reya <3

P.s I saw on your other post you call yourself 'A' so i guess that's what i call you ( btw, are you a pretty little liars fan ? :P )
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Technically it's only been one day in their life and already you see Manik magnetizing ( i believe this is a word..lol) towards Nandini..but for us...their one day is so many days..lol

@bold...those words my dear are so so beautiful...you have a writer in you..i love the way you wrote those words...
You are absolutely correct...When Manik fought for Nandini and wanted her back...he did with confidence...took extreme measures ( kipnapped her) but that's Manik for us: Extreme with everything, should be his love or hatred. Nandini has to pick up on his extreme streak to get through to him..
Acknowledge her mistake..get past the guilt and get her guy back with his mindset...
And Nandini hersefl says..if it;s doesn't hurt, it isn't love then why does deep down still believe they only give each other pain..Pain is part of love...we give our loved ones pain but we are the only ones that can heal them too.
But yeah...nandini got buck up and release her inner sherni-ness

-Reya <3

P.s I saw on your other post you call yourself 'A' so i guess that's what i call you ( btw, are you a pretty little liars fan ? :P )
Lol omg you're absolutely correct on the bit about it being so many days for us already and like only half a day for them. And don't forget their night time is still yet to come and they get through just as much of the story during the night segment as during the day :P hahaha

That's so sweet of you... thankyou heaps! But seriously there are so many amazing writers on this forum - including yourself - so I still wouldn't consider myself to be the greatest. Man those days were so exciting to watch, because his acting was absolutely heart-winning and the way he got her back in his life is a way that would be every girl's dream. It was an almost to or die situation for our manik haha. Gosh the way you explained the correlation between love and pain was so beautiful and so true. Pain, sacrifice, tears are all other words for love. And see the beauty of it... we connotate the colour red to be associated with love, passion and intensity. At the same time love is the emotion of the heart and the heart is red too. Similarly, pain is associated with love and many say when we're in pain, it's almost like our heart is on fire and/or is bleeding. And what do we know.. not only is blood red in colour but even fire which signifies heat and passion, can be symbolised using the use of warm colours ie red! (Lol don't even know if that made sense haha

Hahah yess... that's coz my name starts with an A :D
omg never realized that coincidence lol... I am, I am! Love Azra and Aria! But unfortunately I haven't been able to watch that show past season 2. Once uni started, I just got so busy with extra curricular activities and in the minimal leisure time I get, I usually write stories or blogs or I'm at work lol

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twinkle10

Lol omg you're absolutely correct on the bit about it being so many days for us already and like only half a day for them. And don't forget their night time is still yet to come and they get through just as much of the story during the night segment as during the day :P hahaha

That's so sweet of you... thankyou heaps! But seriously there are so many amazing writers on this forum - including yourself - so I still wouldn't consider myself to be the greatest. Man those days were so exciting to watch, because his acting was absolutely heart-winning and the way he got her back in his life is a way that would be every girl's dream. It was an almost to or die situation for our manik haha. Gosh the way you explained the correlation between love and pain was so beautiful and so true. Pain, sacrifice, tears are all other words for love. And see the beauty of it... we connotate the colour red to be associated with love, passion and intensity. At the same time love is the emotion of the heart and the heart is red too. Similarly, pain is associated with love and many say when we're in pain, it's almost like our heart is on fire and/or is bleeding. And what do we know.. not only is blood red in colour but even fire which signifies heat and passion, can be symbolised using the use of warm colours ie red! (Lol don't even know if that made sense haha

Hahah yess... that's coz my name starts with an A :D
omg never realized that coincidence lol... I am, I am! Love Azra and Aria! But unfortunately I haven't been able to watch that show past season 2. Once uni started, I just got so busy with extra curricular activities and in the minimal leisure time I get, I usually write stories or blogs or I'm at work lol

that's so true girl girl...at this rate..their day will end by the time our next week ends...i kinda don't want that...they should take a 1 week leap or such like they did with manik's injury and Fab 5 went underground for a week...i feel if they show some time passing...it can be manik's cooling period and he can shown softening towards Nandini. But let's see..if this fusion concert if it happens will brings loads of drama our way.

Those were the golden days indeed when Manik stopped at nothing to win back Nandini..was actually watching old episodes instead of studying ( shh..don't tell my mommy)

@ red...you definitly made sense girl..we symbolize our world..our feelings with colors...they hold major signifance in our life...and you are right...Red is the colour of love, passion and pain too..

lol...how do you know i am a good writer ? you haven't read any of my stories :P

Nice to meet you A 😉..did they ever find out who A was in that show ? I am not a big fan of that show..my sister was massively obsessed with it so i know the gist of the story..lol

-Reya <3

p.s what stories have you written ? i mean, have you posted any ?
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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

that's so true girl girl...at this rate..their day will end by the time our next week ends...i kinda don't want that...they should take a 1 week leap or such like they did with manik's injury and Fab 5 went underground for a week...i feel if they show some time passing...it can be manik's cooling period and he can shown softening towards Nandini. But let's see..if this fusion concert if it happens will brings loads of drama our way.


Those were the golden days indeed when Manik stopped at nothing to win back Nandini..was actually watching old episodes instead of studying ( shh..don't tell my mommy)

@ red...you definitly made sense girl..we symbolize our world..our feelings with colors...they hold major signifance in our life...and you are right...Red is the colour of love, passion and pain too..

lol...how do you know i am a good writer ? you haven't read any of my stories :P

Nice to meet you A 😉..did they ever find out who A was in that show ? I am not a big fan of that show..my sister was massively obsessed with it so i know the gist of the story..lol

-Reya <3

p.s what stories have you written ? i mean, have you posted any ?

Haha nice to meet you too! :D Couldn't agree more on that... they need to show the passing of some time now. I guess her lurking around him too much is another reason why he isn't able to calm down to some extent. Whilst it's necessary that she reminds him of her importance in his life, but the begging for forgiveness and tears have to stop now. Even a single line confrontation like "Manik Malhotra you can't just walk away like this and end it so easily. We will be back together and that's a Nandini Moorthy promise" is powerful enough to shake his grounds and start the melting process. It's high time she simulates the saying that actions speak louder than words. Lol me too... which episode you on? I just finished watching their musicana performances haha and dw your secret is safe with me 😉 LOL
Haha well now that we're starting to get to know each other I will definitely be exploring your stories and having a read of them but being a writer myself, I don't have to read paragraphs or pages of your writing to recognise the depth of your talent. Sometimes even a line is enough to recognise that the other person is a natural writer too and that's the case with you :D

Oh okay okay haha that's like my brother constantly updating me about the TV series Suits. lol Nah i think they still haven't figured it out yet lolol They're close though apparently I heard. I used to like 3-4 years back but only ever posted 2 stories. But not on this forum, that was totally separate. As for now,, nah I usually don't post my stories anywhere. I have a book where I pretty much just spend time writing them and keep on re-drafting them till I'm happy with them and send it off to some of the local newspapers in my region or my uni newspaper for publishing. What about you? Do you only publish them here or other blogs/websites too?

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