Bring it on Day 2! - The mind vs the heart - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

29

Views

3.6k

Users

11

Likes

81

Frequent Posters

maankigeet4ever thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: twinkle10


Haha nice to meet you too! :D Couldn't agree more on that... they need to show the passing of some time now. I guess her lurking around him too much is another reason why he isn't able to calm down to some extent. Whilst it's necessary that she reminds him of her importance in his life, but the begging for forgiveness and tears have to stop now. Even a single line confrontation like "Manik Malhotra you can't just walk away like this and end it so easily. We will be back together and that's a Nandini Moorthy promise" is powerful enough to shake his grounds and start the melting process. It's high time she simulates the saying that actions speak louder than words. Lol me too... which episode you on? I just finished watching their musicana performances haha and dw your secret is safe with me 😉 LOL

Haha well now that we're starting to get to know each other I will definitely be exploring your stories and having a read of them but being a writer myself, I don't have to read paragraphs or pages of your writing to recognise the depth of your talent. Sometimes even a line is enough to recognise that the other person is a natural writer too and that's the case with you :D

Oh okay okay haha that's like my brother constantly updating me about the TV series Suits. lol Nah i think they still haven't figured it out yet lolol They're close though apparently I heard. I used to like 3-4 years back but only ever posted 2 stories. But not on this forum, that was totally separate. As for now,, nah I usually don't post my stories anywhere. I have a book where I pretty much just spend time writing them and keep on re-drafting them till I'm happy with them and send it off to some of the local newspapers in my region or my uni newspaper for publishing. What about you? Do you only publish them here or other blogs/websites too?

Calling out to the KY2 team...you have a new dialogue writer people ! @bold..it would be totally kickass if Nandini would actually say something like this
see..it's a two-edged sword for nandu here because if she wouldn't hover around Manik or she wouldn't try to talk to Manik...I feel as thou he would more hurt that she isn't even putting in any effort..so either way she will face the wrath of Manik Maltorta that's why i want a mini leap. Listen to us Nandu...get your mojo back girl before your day 1 ends..lol

I kinda did a Manan marathon over my reading week from uni...starting from Musicana to the hospital scenes ( These two days are actually one my favs from the show...damn...how Manik broke her heart but he was so broken himself..and the hospital scenes..sighs...i love them more when they are separated but still so desperately in love with each other..yeah, that's the sadist in me talking.

What have you posted ? I wanna read them even if they are not on IF. Do you have writing aspirations ? If so, you should definitely pursue them...you have talent my girl !
I have written on IF for a while now...actually wrote a piece on Manan too :P I write in a book too...loads of thoughts and thoughts that sometimes extent into a story..but so far, i am only a IF-writer 😳

My sister watches suits too..lol..and the only thing i know about that show is a guy named Harvey..haha

- Reya <3
twinkle10 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Calling out to the KY2 team...you have a new dialogue writer people ! @bold..it would be totally kickass if Nandini would actually say something like this
see..it's a two-edged sword for nandu here because if she wouldn't hover around Manik or she wouldn't try to talk to Manik...I feel as thou he would more hurt that she isn't even putting in any effort..so either way she will face the wrath of Manik Maltorta that's why i want a mini leap. Listen to us Nandu...get your mojo back girl before your day 1 ends..lol

I kinda did a Manan marathon over my reading week from uni...starting from Musicana to the hospital scenes ( These two days are actually one my favs from the show...damn...how Manik broke her heart but he was so broken himself..and the hospital scenes..sighs...i love them more when they are separated but still so desperately in love with each other..yeah, that's the sadist in me talking.

What have you posted ? I wanna read them even if they are not on IF. Do you have writing aspirations ? If so, you should definitely pursue them...you have talent my girl !
I have written on IF for a while now...actually wrote a piece on Manan too :P I write in a book too...loads of thoughts and thoughts that sometimes extent into a story..but so far, i am only a IF-writer 😳

My sister watches suits too..lol..and the only thing i know about that show is a guy named Harvey..haha

- Reya <3
Bahahaha you and I should write an episodic plot for kyy and send it off to the writers :P
woahh.. dude look at you explain their relationship and bond and you tell me that I write well. Man you're the one who's depiction always seems to be the most accurate. The mini leap is a must in my opinion too.. otherwise I fear we're merely going to get through one night and one day this coming week and I'll already be on like my day 8 analysis lol

Aah those scenes are mesmerisng. I was watching that scene after her musicana performance when she's inside that little canopy and he's outside and he knows she's crying and hence he tries to wipe her tears from outside... and then she leans onto his shoulder from the inside. Such a beautiful scene. <3 It's so true how the sparkle, pain and tears in our eyes can often express even the emotions that sometimes we can't express in words. And those exactly are the moments that make you fall in love with such characters and such love stories. Such a beautiful thought you've expressed there. Their struggle with themselves at times to stay away from each other, at times to fight for each others' happiness and at times to selflessly sacrifice their happiness for the other person. This clarifies that they share a destined soul-to-soul love. A love that doesn't speak the longing of wanting each other but it significantly speaks the longing of needing each other.

Umm I started to write a saga but never got around to finishing it, and I've posted a short story. That's about it really. I hardly write any sagas or long novels now, most my writing is either short stories or articles. Haha I'm warning you beforehand hand,they're pretty basic pieces of writing. What about I pm you the link to that website?
Omgg... Where's this piece on manan? Link it to me? Haha can't wait to read it :D Fair enough... wbu? Are you more of the short stories or a saga person? And seriously you're so talented, you should consider publishing your pieces too. There's so many opportunities on the net and even in local magazines and newspapers. And who knows one day your piece may land up on some publication house's editor's desk! ;)

Loool... same. Hi-5 :P I seriously don't recall anything else about that show. Haha
pia.raha thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#23
woooww,.i just love the way u portray every feeling!!!!!! specially the last part where u wrote that if for once she had turned bakc she would have relaised that manik is always with her as her shadow!!!!!
twinkle10 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: pia.raha

woooww,.i just love the way u portray every feeling!!!!!! specially the last part where u wrote that if for once she had turned bakc she would have relaised that manik is always with her as her shadow!!!!!

Aww thankyou soo much! Appreciate the comment :) Indeed it was a beautiful... she would be able to see how much her tears affect him.
maankigeet4ever thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: twinkle10

Bahahaha you and I should write an episodic plot for kyy and send it off to the writers :P

woahh.. dude look at you explain their relationship and bond and you tell me that I write well. Man you're the one who's depiction always seems to be the most accurate. The mini leap is a must in my opinion too.. otherwise I fear we're merely going to get through one night and one day this coming week and I'll already be on like my day 8 analysis lol

Aah those scenes are mesmerisng. I was watching that scene after her musicana performance when she's inside that little canopy and he's outside and he knows she's crying and hence he tries to wipe her tears from outside... and then she leans onto his shoulder from the inside. Such a beautiful scene. <3 It's so true how the sparkle, pain and tears in our eyes can often express even the emotions that sometimes we can't express in words. And those exactly are the moments that make you fall in love with such characters and such love stories. Such a beautiful thought you've expressed there. Their struggle with themselves at times to stay away from each other, at times to fight for each others' happiness and at times to selflessly sacrifice their happiness for the other person. This clarifies that they share a destined soul-to-soul love. A love that doesn't speak the longing of wanting each other but it significantly speaks the longing of needing each other.

Umm I started to write a saga but never got around to finishing it, and I've posted a short story. That's about it really. I hardly write any sagas or long novels now, most my writing is either short stories or articles. Haha I'm warning you beforehand hand,they're pretty basic pieces of writing. What about I pm you the link to that website?
Omgg... Where's this piece on manan? Link it to me? Haha can't wait to read it :D Fair enough... wbu? Are you more of the short stories or a saga person? And seriously you're so talented, you should consider publishing your pieces too. There's so many opportunities on the net and even in local magazines and newspapers. And who knows one day your piece may land up on some publication house's editor's desk! ;)

Loool... same. Hi-5 :P I seriously don't recall anything else about that show. Haha

Let's conclude that we are both awesome and praise each other as much as we want 😉
Seriously thou...i would love to write something together..we can play with a idea and see if we get anything out of it...
Tomorrow is day 3 already and i am ready for your analysis 😃
Okay that musicana scene is by far one of my absolute favourite...whenever i watch it...my eyes tear up at how much they need each other..desipte it all..even after he purposely broke her heart...how he tried to wipe the tears he couldn't see..and how easily she leaned into him knowing deep down that he was comforting her...at that point..i knew how deep the love they both weren't even aware of ran between them...like you said..a soul to soul connection... where they need each other to survive...
When people speak of not being able to breathe without the other person..that's how our Manan are. They are each other's oxygen...each other's reason for being...each other's balm..They are just each other's person ( Grey's anatomy reference)

I write short stories..have a novel idea i keep developing but haven't gotten around to writing but maybe one day i will actually write a novel i promised i will..
I will send you a PM for the Manan piece and i want the link for your writing

- Reya <3
twinkle10 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Let's conclude that we are both awesome and praise each other as much as we want 😉

Seriously thou...i would love to write something together..we can play with a idea and see if we get anything out of it...
Tomorrow is day 3 already and i am ready for your analysis 😃
Okay that musicana scene is by far one of my absolute favourite...whenever i watch it...my eyes tear up at how much they need each other..desipte it all..even after he purposely broke her heart...how he tried to wipe the tears he couldn't see..and how easily she leaned into him knowing deep down that he was comforting her...at that point..i knew how deep the love they both weren't even aware of ran between them...like you said..a soul to soul connection... where they need each other to survive...
When people speak of not being able to breathe without the other person..that's how our Manan are. They are each other's oxygen...each other's reason for being...each other's balm..They are just each other's person ( Grey's anatomy reference)

I write short stories..have a novel idea i keep developing but haven't gotten around to writing but maybe one day i will actually write a novel i promised i will..
I will send you a PM for the Manan piece and i want the link for your writing

- Reya <3

Done deal! we shall definitely narrate a piece together sometime in the near future :D
Hifah thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Thanks for writing .well written post.
twinkle10 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: fawadbae

Thanks for writing .well written post.

Aww.. you're welcome and thankyou for the compliment!
twinkle10 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: shibz

Hey.. that is beautifully put..😃 Felt good reading..

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully you didn't get bored with the rest of my thread lol
twinkle10 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: sonia_1

Well put again 👏

His last look conveyed it all...the love, hope and passion. Manik is all heart ❤️

Kudos to Parth for being able to tug at the heartstrings with just a look. 👏

I have no absolutely devastating idea how I missed this post of yours. I'm extremely sorry Well we've definitely come a looong way from this episode but I guess some things never change. And that's the superb acting of both the main leads of the show.
Totally stole my heart away last night! <3

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".