MANAN FF: Hate to Love You: SE 1: Finale: Seg 2(24) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Brilliant u are like me a rmotkn fool by the way I loved it write more pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
amazing part...loved it...u penned it beautifully...👏
would love to read more...so pls continue soon...waiting for manan meeting after 8 yrs...
thanks a lot for the pm
take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Read all parts
Its amazing
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Good work girl!!! 👏 Interesting flow of imagination and situations!!! Very entertaining conversation between the characters 👏👏... Especially Nandini and Cabir... Loved their bonding and comfort level very much!!! And yeah Navya too... Hope you aren't inclined towards a romantic angle between Cabir-Navya... That would be unexpected and unfitting too... But liked their special bonding otherwise! 😃
Yet to enjoy Manik-Nandini! 😉 Waiting to see how things unfold for them! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
lovely dear
i totally loved your fic..
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Amazing! I want the next part to continue as the precap but we can have a little bit of flashback into it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Since I am happily mind blown with emotions today with the treats of todays episode I wanted to give you a nice part today...but I ended up writing this piece (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4316623/ky2-emotional-encounter-1-a-more-insight-into-the-coconut-heart) and the story delayed. ...don't know when I will finish... but I would like two give you a spoiler promo...as treat from my imagination...

Spoiler promo

Scene...Cabir and Navya sitting together against the wallside of bed...

Back ground song... "Humdard from Ek Villain"

Navya: And I pray ke hum dono ko ek dusre pyar ho jay... kisi aur se tumhe pyar ho aur tum mujhe chod do...I don't want

Cabir: After doing so much..you want me to love you...so greedy ho tum

Navya: (pecks his lips... and Cabir responses) ab wo hi to khali baaki hain zindegi main

Cabir makes her lie...and leans over

Cabir: Ek husband ki saari kaam hi to karwatiho my wife... pyar bhi chahiya? It's not compulsory you know...let's stick to the basics

They start making out

Navya: Main tumhe kabhi pura khush nehi karsakti na...

Cabir: Ok I love you khush...

Navya: Ye Bakwaas wala I love you apni paas rakho...

Manik and Nandini push and pull scene...

...

dream on

only for stalkers...no PM

Edited by Manan_aRMAAN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ok WOW
now thats amazing
loved cabira and navya
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
loved your ff... awesome work... continue soon.. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note: So you guys already understood that I am crazy...and soon you may find me turning "Schizo" I love all the appreciation to this writing and other ones.specially...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4316623/ky2-emotional-encounter-1-a-more-insight-into-the-coconut-heart...most of you already read...it is my all time fav...😛...if you do some publicity ...better...🤡...
Serious Note: As I did too much of promo my writing got really big...so I will post in two smaller parts...this is for getting more comments..🤓..seriously...

Dreamer's Note: I know many read for the story progress...I promise I won't disappoint myself 😈 with that... as you know I am so musical... I keep listening to the songs in story and even singing them loud when I imagine ...

I know you have so many posts to read in IF and so less time...also your life outside...but I will add the video links to songs from now...hard work fro my side...you enjoy or ignore...

And to my lovely friends who don't get all Hindi but work hard to read it with love...I am adding a lyrics English translation link...

To the hard work...enjoy and live...(Manik wala smirks)


----Part 9A------

SPACE

Cabir gets a call...

Cabir: Ya Manilk...sure...

Navya: Bulaya kya

Cabir: Yup...(calls Nandini)...we are going to Manik's room...sure...(to Navya )and your cousin brother told me to call her...sorry...him after the meeting with Manik

Navya: "Him" koi garbar maat karna...

{Editor's Note: The scene...Nandini sittings in Sofa in Manik's office...as I precapped...I don't want that anymore...so edited...trust me it's for the best}

They sign the contracts...Navya is supposed to start from 9 am tomorrow and Cabir will come after his radio show

From there Nandini goes to academy...CaVya goes their place

Nandini keeps herself busy for the rest of the day...with students and also singing for herself... gives TK a visit...and goes back home...

CaVya's Apartment

Navya calls

Navya: Are you sure aaj tum akele rahooge?

Nandini: Haa...mujhe kuch paperworks tha...tum log rehte to baate karne kaa maan kaarta...(Nandini lies)

Navya: There is a bad news...Manik called... haame 7 am pe jaane ko kaha ...morning he said 9...or kaha cousin ko zaroor laana...with his personal papers...he wants you to appoint as my interns with proper papers... ...maine kaha the papers are back at his home...he said okay...he will manage...kahi Manik ko shaak to nehi hua na?

Nandini: Accha kaha tumne... 7am at college...(is it a hint?) don't worry it will be fine..

Navya: paar plan

Nandini: Plan karke saab kuch haam control nehi karsaakte...I know my destiny...ab koi bhi raha mujhe chunna pare...mujhe uspe jaake hi rukna hain ...(she sounds cold)...good night...I'll pick you tomorrow

Call cuts

Navya: Good Night is not gonna happen...I am really worried for her...she been through so much uskeliye...fir bhi usike paas a gayi...kitna bishwaas

Cabir and Navya sitting together against the wallside of bed...

Cabir: They have been always so complicated... I remember manik saying about Nandini that "nothing is simple in her life..." and I indicated Manik that you are the biggest example of somthing not simple ...look at them now...

Navya: And look at us...I pray they get together plus happy soon...saath me to sirf...

Cabir: trust me dear ...hum dono dil ke haare jab jina sikhli...unko bhi sikha denge...look we are such a good team...saath me kitni saare wars ko face ki...

Navya: Team...but I pray ke hum dono ko ek dusre pyar ho jay... kisi aur se tumhe pyar ho aur tum mujhe chod do...I don't want

Cabir: After doing so much... for you... want me to love you...so greedy ho tum

Navya: (pecks his lips... and Cabir responses) ab wo hi to khali baaki hain zindegi main ...aur iska kya maatlab hua...maine tumhaare liye kuch nahi kiya na...

Cabir makes her lie...and leans over

Cabir: Ek husband ki saari kaam hi to karwatiho my wife... pyar bhi chahiya? It's not compolsury you know...let's stick to the basics

They start making out

Navya: Main tumhe kabhi pura khush nehi karsakti na...

Cabir: Ok I love you and I am so happy...khush...

Navya: Ye Bakwaas wala I love you apni paas rakho...

She Takes Cabir's Tshirt off

Cabir gets over her and...

[u can continue your imagination but will give you mine]

Knock Knock...

Cabir throws her away...without any regret

Navya ...not today...

Cabir puts back her T shirt quickly and opens the door

Cabir: What happened meri jaan

Roshni: Dad... I had a nightmare...can't sleep anymore

Cabir picks her up...

Cabir: What a coincidence...ma bhi to nightmare me tha...imagine I saw your mom there

Navya act angry...but feels happiness inside...hopes he always stays this ill-mannered

Roshni: I told you not to pick on her

Cabir: Sorry ... As you say my princess

Roshni: Ok I order you to sing for me...

Cabir: starts "twinkle twinkle little star"

Roshni: No I am not a baby...sernede for the princess...

Cabir: Like that...but tell your mom to join and play guitar too

Roshni: mom

Navya comes with her guitar...Cabir tells her the song...

He goes on his knees ... holds Roshni's hand

Navya starts playing the guitar ...Cabir sings and dance with his princess...hi humdard

[Must play: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7tElHNHLSKYwww.youtube.com/watch?v=FJ55SHCzt88

Engilnsh translation of lyrics: https://www.bollymeaning.com/2014/07/jo-tu-mera-hamdard-humdard-hai-lyrics.html ]

Pal, do pal, ki hi kyun hai zindagi Iss, pyar, ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi
Toh khuda se maang lun Mohalat main ik nayi
Rehna hai bas yahaan Ab door tujhse jaana nahi
Jo tu mera humdard hai Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai Jo tu mera humdard hai

Roshni...kisses Cabirs cheeks...she is very happy...cabir picks her and take towards bed

Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri Mujhko inhi se ummeed mili
Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan Inme hi hai sadaa hifaazat meri
Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin
Jo tu mera Humdard hai Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai Jo tu mera Humdard hai

Teri dhadkano se hai zindagi meri Khwahishein teri ab duaaein meri

Kitna anokha bandhan hai ye Teri meri jaan jo ek hui
Lotunga yahaan tere paas main haan Waada hai mera mar bhi jaaun kahin
Jo tu mera humdard hai Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai Jo tu mera humdard hai


Roshni falls into sleep in his arms

hmmm.. humdard hai hmmm.. humdard hai

hmmm.. humdard hai hmmm.. humdard hai...

Navya leaves the guitar... she finds both of them sleeping peacefully

Navya thinks... I know he is not romantic with me... I know all our desires cannot be fulfilled but yet I feel luckiest that I have him in my life ...And I grant the painful past that I had to go through for this moment of love between the two most important people in my life ...There is no comparison to this happiness... I pray that he never comes to a situation that he has to choose between Roshni and someone else...

Navya kisses forheads of both ...

Nandini on her apartment

Cutting Navya's call...thinks...

Sorry Navya for lying...I have to focus...I am loosing it...I have to clear my head...

Nandini's living room has some new staffs now...Nandini is in new avatar...


...


Wait for the next...sooon...after enough comments

Edited by Manan_aRMAAN - 10 years ago

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