KY2 Emotional Encounter: 1: A more insight into the coconut heart

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For the Record: Based on Kaisi Yeh Yaariyaan Feb 23, 2015

KY2 Emotional Encounter: 1: A more insight into the coconut heart

I cherished the moment of love...what a artwork to watch...withdrawal of their separation made my heart sing... suddenly I realized I got a piece of that puzzle I was looking for...the mysterious Monster heart...that was found so hard to recreate in writing..

according to her...the Monster heart's like coconut...hard to crack...but so soft inside...it was hard to hurt again...but it was not even easy to heal the damage that was already done...they give me today why the sweet water supposed to be inside that coconut shell dried up... this piece of puzzle shows why this heart is so affected by betrayal..

it was not born with The Shell, but developed, layer by layer with the encounters of deceitful actions, as it was exposed to broken expectations ... and the expectations were broken by his very own mother... his first beauty ...his first protector... the heart felt alone ...it grew up the shell for self defense... it stopped expecting from the beauty...love for her turned into war...she was his enemy now... so that it hurts no more

Then came the healer, the second beauty in his life, who saw beyond that shell...revived the sweet water...made it wet again...but to her ignorance about its past... she did not realize she made it vulnerable again... it started to taste sweet again... started to expect and be expected from again but this time only from her... his new found beauty, the hurt found a shelter...felt safe ...stopped caring about its vulnerabilities ...

But to her misfortune she was played by his old enemy... the never healing old wound opened and pained more than ever...and the heart could not take it... it despised her ignorance, for lacking the insight the understanding he expected...it regretted for expecting again to a beauty...it wanted the shell back
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very well written ! ...the coconut heart is slowly acceptin no one is perfect 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that is beautifully put.. I can feel Manik's pain a little more now..
Keep writing... :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful post
u wrote it so perfectly
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👏👏Such perfect and soulful understanding of a hurt soul. Writers like you make me regret my lack of time and i miss out on such poignant pieces of writings. You have gifted a new dimension to the MaNan story...they say old wounds are the most difficult to heal...some bleeding through the fabric of life...keep writing...gorgeous indeed!!
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Originally posted by: eveline

👏👏Such perfect and soulful understanding of a hurt soul. Writers like you make me regret my lack of time and i miss out on such poignant pieces of writings. You have gifted a new dimension to the MaNan story...they say old wounds are the most difficult to heal...some bleeding through the fabric of life...keep writing...gorgeous indeed!!


The writing did not take time...but I watched the Manik openning up scene about 7 times today...😲and realization came out...but I got some peace to know manik more which will last always...rather than ending up to this piece of writing that will be shit in after max two days... but I want more crazy like me to realize...those who missed the point in joy of proximity scene ...

but don't have that much followers like you... as I am here as a writer than silent reader only for two weeks...doing my publicity still 😃...but cannot do that too much too as I have limited post😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very well written
u potrayed amotions too correctly
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg totally loved loved this interestin yet very true fact abt Manik's current haal-e-dil..!! BANG ON post dear...!! keep wriitn..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Actually awesome piece ...I can feel indepth of Manik pain vulnerability now...after reading this...may be she got played by old enemy that totally shattered him...Seriously such a beautiful writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written 👏
Heart...easily torn, not easily mended. Manik continues to bleed from the unhealed wounds of his past.

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