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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow lovely update
Loved it
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PART 5

RECAP: Dhruv and Aliya's love confession

MaNan's Romantic date

Mukti and Abhi spend their valentine's day in the hospital

Cabir is in his room. Navya knocks the door and tells"darwaza kholo" Cabir opens the door and annoyingly says"Kya hai.. Kya chaiye tumhe ab? Navya gets upset and goes out and at the same time cabir holds her hand and says" umm. I am sorry. Wo mai thoda upset tha"

Navya : Kya hua ? Humse share karoge to tumhe acha lgega.

Cabir: hmmm.. come in .

Meanwhile, Manik says" what? Then why did u lie about it ? Nandini looks down and without making any eye contact says"Kuch nahi manik..wo bas" and manik thought that something is wrong with her. He says "Tum khud bata rahi ho ya mai apne tarike se pata lagau" Nandini tells him the whole story of Mr. khuarana.

Manik cups her face and says: Nandini, You should have told it to me na. And how could you even think about leaving me? Don't you trust me?

Nandini: I trust you manik ad I am so sorry. I should have told you but I was scared. Mujhe nahi chahiye tha ki mere wajhse fab 5 itni badi opportunity chodd de.

Manik: Actually Mujhe bhi soha ke intensions ke bare me pata chal gaya tha. Maine khuarana ke sath deal kar li thi.(He tells her the whole story)

Nandini: What? MANIK..(Manik interrupts)

Manik: shhh..Bate chupane se problems badhti hai. SO . Promise me that you won't hide anything from me ever again. I also promise you that I also won't hide anything from you.

Nandini smiles at him and then hugs manik and says: Nandini promise.

Meanwhile, Navya goes inside and sits down near the bed taking its support.Cabir also sits beside her. Cabir was drinking beer. Navya was looking at him so he asked " Tumhe bhi chahiye kya? Navya makes a face and said" No thank you."They don't speak anything and then navya breaks the silence.

Navya: To btao kya hua hai?

Cabir with a sad face: wo ..mai..kuch nahi bas raghav ko miss kar raha tha..

Navya: hmm.. jis se hum pyaar krte hai aur wo hume chodd ke chala jata hai tab kaisa lgta hai yeh hum achese jante hai...

Cabir: Hmm.. Chodo ye sab.. Jo hua wo hogya..It's better to leave the past in the past. It's life.Log aate jate rehte hai. Hume sab problems ko face karna chahiye.

Navya: Tum theek bol rahe ho. But boht mushkil hai ye karna. Hum to sabse bade bewakoof hai jo harshad jaise ladke se pyaar kar baithe.( She silently starts weeping)

Cabir notices it and gives her a side hug trying to console her.

On the other side Aliya and dhruv are having the best time of their lives. They have dinner and then they dance with each other with soft music playing in the background.Then Dhruv says he will drop aliya . After reaching aliya's house they both are standing in front of the door looking at each other. Aliya hugs her tightly which turns into a passionate kiss. Aliya breaks the kiss and holds dhruv's hand and takes her to her bedroom. Dhruv cups her face and they start kissing .While kissing they fall on the bed and they start making out..

On the other side, Manik and Nandini are sitting on a bench hugging each other looking at the stars. Manik then gets up and says that " Nandini it's time for you to go home. Come I'll drop you"

Nandini hugs Manik tightly and says: No manik. I don't want this night to end. Mujhe nai jana ghar.

Manik: But chachi(Nandini interrupts)

Nandini: Maine chachi ko bola hai ki aaj mai navya ke sath rukne wali hu. So don't worry.

Nandini comes closer to manik's face,keeps her hands on his shoulders. Manik is smiling and brings her closer and keeps his hands on her waist.He kisses nandini's forehead. Nandini starts blushing and at the same time Manik lifts her in his arms and starts walking.

Nandini: Yeh kya kar rahe ho manik? Where are we going?

Manik doesn't say anything and takes her to a room and keeps her on the bed. Manik takes his black blazer off and drops it on the floor.Manik and Nandini both look at each other.Manik also sits on the bed and goes closer to nandini. Manik touches her lips with his fingers and then cups her face and goes closer to her lips.They both were so close that they could feel each other's breathes. Nandini closed her eyes and Manik softly started kissing her lips. Nandini dugs her nails in his hair and starts kissing his lips passionately.While kissing they both lie on the bed and manik is on top of nandini. She opens her eyes and looks at manik. Manik smiles at her and then starts kissing her cheeks and goes near her neck and sucks her neck passionately. Then he looks at nandini and thinks that she is uncomfortable so he backs off but nandini holds his hand. She nodded as if saying that she doesn't want him to leave.She pulls manik close to her.Nandini tries to unbutton manik's shirt and then throws it on the floor and Manik starts pulling her dress's strap down and kissed her shoulders. They again fall on the bed and start kissing each other passionately closing their eyes.Manik takes off nandini's dress and throws it on the floor and they both make out passionately .They both get lost in their own world forgetting everything. They both spend the whole night together.

PRECAP: Nandini wakes up with her head lying on manik's chest

Mukti sneaks out of the hospital

Cavya and Dhruliya scenes

Edited by chai_008 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsm update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome update...loved it...u penned manan romance beautifully...pls continue soon...take care😊
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PART 6

RECAP: MaNan spend the night together

Cavya and Dhruliya scenes

Early morning with the birds chirping and the sun rays falling on the face of Nandini wake her. Her head is lying on Manik's chest and manik is holding her tightly in his arms.Nandini looks at Manik and starts blushing thinking about yesterday. She tries to get up without disturbing Manik but she couldn't. Manik asks her in a low voice" Why are you moving? Let me sleep na." Nandini gets up and wraps a blanket around her and says" Manik subah hogyi hai and it's already late.We have to go to college."Manik pulls her back and hugs her tightly and says "What a beautiful morning!" Listening to this Nandini starts blushing and sweetly says"hmm"

Then Manik looks at her and cups her face and gives a peck on her lips. Nandini smiles at him and then says" Chalo ab get ready. We are getting late" Manik makes a puppy face and says" NO..I don't want to go" Nandini says" Manik.." She is about to tell something but Manik interrupts" Accha okay now don't start with your lecture again. I'll get ready"Nandini smiles and says" Good boy" She starts laughing and Manik pull her again on the bed and starts tickling her.

Meanwhile, Abhi wakes up and goes near mukti who is sleeping on the couch. He thinks" SO BEAUTIFUL" At the same time Mukti wakes up and realizes that abhi is staring at her and smiles. Abhi tries to explain " Umm. Wo mai..."But mukti keeps her finger on his lips and says"shhh". You don't need to explain" and hugs her. Abhi breaks the hug and says" Mukti you need to leave. Kisine tumhe yaha dekh liya to problem hojayegi" Mukti says" Okay..Then I'll leave. But you please takes care ha" Abhi says" Ya sure." Mukti gives a peck on Abhi's cheeks and leaves. Abhi starts blushing.

On the other hand, Cabir and Navya are sleeping on the same bed.Navya wakes up and turns to the other side and seeing Cabir she screems loudly. Cabir wakes up with a shock and seeing Navya beside her he also screems.Navya says" Tum humare bed pe kya kar rahe ho?" Cabir says " Mai tumhare bed pe nahi tum mere bed pe ho. This is my house" Navya makes a face. And Cabir says" Chalo niklo yaha se" Navya says" Huhhh... Ja rahe hai hum" .Navya leaves angrily.

Meanwhile, Nandini and Manik both are laughing lying on the bed. Then Nandini gets up and says" Now it's too late. Ready hoke college jate hai" Manik agrees with her and texts fab5 -Meet me at the music room at 10 AM sharp.After some time Manik and Nandini leave from there and reach college.Cabir and Mukti reach the music room on time. Dhruv and Aliya also join them. They all are waiting for Manik. Manik parks his car,gets out of the car and pulls the door for Nandini. Everyone is staring at them. Nandini is embarrassed. Manik keeps his hand on her waist and pulls her closer and they start walking.Nandini says" Yeh kya kar rahe ho Manik. Sab dekh rahe hai" Manik says" I don't care. Waise bhi fab5 know about us. And now u r officially my girlfriend. So don't worry" Nandini is very happy listening to the word girlfriend but she says" But Manik.." Manik interrupts and says" But kya ha?" Manik gets angry and pulls her inside a classroom and pins her to the wall and goes closer to Nandini and says" Nai ho gf. Huh?" Nandini says" Calm down Manik. Don't get angry" and gives a peck on his lips and starts blushing. Manik smiles and suddenly realizes it's 10:30and he had to reach at 10 in the music room. So they both go towards the music room. Meanwhile,everyone is angry at Manik as they have been waiting for 30 minutes.At the same time Manik enters the music room and holds the door for Nandini. They both enter the music room and everyone stares at them.

Cabir: Lo aagye love birds.

Manik: Sorry guys. I am late .You know traffic.

Mukti:It's ohky but yeh bata tune hum sab ko yaha kyu bulaya hai.

Dhruv: Ya buddy. Kuch urgent tha kya?

Manik: Umm. Guys I wanted to tell something. I and Nandini. We are together now.(And puts his hand on Nandini's waist.Nandini is blushing)

Cabir: Ohhoo ..(He hugs Manik and smiles at Nandini)

Dhruv also hugs Manik and says" Congrats Buddy". Mukti is also happy but shows that shez angry. Manik goes near mukti and says" Mukti.." Mukti interrupts and gives a punch on his shoulder slowly and then hugs him. Manik is very happy. Then he looks at Aliya and Aliya says" I also don't have any problem" Manik smiles at her and Dhruv is very happy hearing this and gives a sweet smile to Aliya. Cabir says "this calls for a celebration. What say guys?" Everyone agrees and decide to meet at Manik's place tonight..

Manik: Guys. I know we have lost the album. But this is not the end. We will get many opportunities like this. So don't worry.

Everyone agrees but Nandini is sad and she says"I am sorry. Wo meri wajhse."Cabir interrupts

Cabir: Nandini tumhari wajahse kuch nahi hua hai. Sab soha ki galati hai. So stop blaming yourself.

Manik: Ya. He is right Nandini. ( He smiles at nandini and Nandini also smiles)So guys today I am in the mood for jamming. Who's up for it?

This brings a smiles on everyone's face and everyone agrees.Nandini says" Ok then.. I'll leave"But mukti stops her and says" Wait na. You can be here." Nandini agrees and looks at Manik who is very happy. They both smile looking at each other.

Mukti: Hey nandini, I have an idea .Why don't you join us.

Nandini: What? No no.. How can I?

Aliya: Mukti is right Nandini . You have a sweet voice.We all can sing together. What say guys?

Everyone agrees. But nandini is nervous. Manik smiles at her signaling that it's ohky. You can do it. Nandini smiles at Manik. They start the song:

Nandini starts singing looking at Manik

Uljhi si baatein dil
Mujhse bhi baantein
To mehar.. mehar.. meherbaniya
(Meher.. meher.. meherbaniya)
Khud hi samajh ke mujhe samjha de
To mehar.. mehar.. meherbaniya
(Meher.. meher.. meherbaniya)

Manik goes near Nandini and sings

Ho meherbani jo dil de zubaani
Keh de wo jo na kabhi kaha hai

Aise Tera Main.. Jaise Mera Tu
Aise Tera Main.. Jaise Mera Tu..

Nandini sings while looking into Manik's eyes
Milte rahe jo aise hi dono
Lag na jaaye ishq ki nazar
Aye dil farebi, tham sa gaya kyun
Aisi waisi baat soch kar

Dhruv sings and smiles at Aliya

Bas mein na mere ab ye raha hai
Tujh pe aake dil ye jo ruka hai

Aise tera main.. jaise mera tu
Aise tera main.. Jaise mera tu
Jaise Mera Tu..
Aye.. oo.. ee..
Na na.. yea..

Nandini-

(Mehar.. mehar.. meherbani ho)

Fariyad karti phir yaad karti
Sochti hoon tumko baar baar
Na chahatein hain, par chaahte kyun
Tumko yunhi mere aas paas

Manik takes a round around nandini and sings

Kuch bhi nahi hai
Kuch phir bhi hai
Tumse milke dil ko ye laga hai

Manik and Nandini together


Aise tera main.. jaise mera tu
Aise tera main.. Jaise mera tu
Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)
Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)
Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)
Hoo hoo.. (jaise mera tu)
Meher.. meher.. meherbaniyan
Jaise mera tu..
Jaise mera tu!


At the end Manik and Nandini are lost in each other's eyes. They are brought out of the trance when the principal suddenly comes inside the room and starts shouting at them.

PRECAP: Principal of the college scolds fab5 and Nandini

Nandini tries to get the album back for fab5

Sorry for the long update. I hope you guys enjoy it.😊😊😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...awsome update..loved it...manan awww...so cute..😉
loved the bonding b/w fab4 &nandu...😊
pls continue soon...
take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 7

RECAP: Manik tells fab5 that Nandini is her girlfriend

Fab5 and Nandini sing a song together

Principal of the college enters music room

Nandini and Manik are lost into each other's eyes. They are brought out of the trance when the principal comes in the music room and starts shouting at them.

Principal: Manik Malhotra. You are finally here. Maine tumse kaha tha ki manik aajaye tab fab5 mujhe mere cabin mai chahiye. And Nandini what are you doing here. Because of you fab5 lost the album. And Manik tum performance chodke bhaag gaye. I am so disappointed in you.

Manik shouts: Listen you.(Nandini hold his hand and nods her head)

Cabir: We are sorry sir. But Nandini's life was in danger. That's why Manik .

Principal: Shut up. I don't need any explanation. Tum sab ki wajahse SPACE ki reputation kharab hogyi.(He leaves from there)

Everyone is so upset . No one epeaks anything and Mukti breaks the silence.

Mukti: W*F! Abhi we were so happy and now because of him album ke bare me sochke sab ka mood kharab hogya.

Manik: Guys chill. Don't worry.

Manik looks at Nandini who is weeping silently. Nandini is looking down and Manik comes near her and cups her face. He wipes her tears and softly says" Nandini, don't cry. Tumne kuch nahi kiya hai" She doesn't stop crying and hugs Manik tightly and says" I am sorry Manik..I am sorry" Everyone is upset to see Nandini like this. Cabir, Mukti, Aliya and Dhruv join the hug covering Manik and Nandini. Everyone breaks the hug and the find Nandini still crying.Everyone tries to convince her but still she is sad and runs away from there as she is feeling very guilty. Manik shouts" Nandini" But she doesn't stop.

Mukti: Guys. She is feeling very guilty I guess.Usko lag raha hai ki sab usne kiya hai.

Aliya: Ya mukti is right. I think we should find her and try to cheer her up.

Cabir and Dhruv : Ya let's go.

Manik also agrees and they leave from there to find Nandini. Manik is so sad so he couldn't think where she could be. They check everywhere possible but couldn't find her.

Cabir: Manik! Tu kaha khoya hai? Nandini ko dhund na hai..

Manik suddenly realizes that she could be behind the music block.

Manik: Oh yes! How can I forget! I know where she is. Let's go.

Dhruv: But kaha yeh to bata?

Manik: Behind the music block.

Manik runs to the music block and everyone follows him.After they reach they see Nandini sitting on the steps and she is crying. Cabir says" let's go there" But Manik says"Nahi.Wait. Mai jata hu . You guys wait here".Manik goes near Nandini and sits beside her and holds her hand. Nandini says" Manik" But Manik keeps his finger on her lips and says" Shh. You don't need to apologise. It's not your fault." Nandini doesn't say anything and leans her head on Manik's shoulder and Manik holds her tightly. Fab4 were watching. Cabir is smiling and Dhruv is shocked to see Manik like this. All Mukti and Aliya could say was" AWW"Then Cabir says "let's leave and give them some privacy" Everyone agrees and leaves from there.Meanwhile, Manik breaks their hug and cups her face and says" Nandini, I can't see you sad. So please forget everything and smile.Please for me" This brings a smile on her face and she says" I love you Manik" Manik smiles and kisses her forehead and says" I love you too" They both smile looking at each other. Then Manik says let's go back. Everyone is worried about you. They head towards the Music room. While going Nandini think" Aiyappa, Mai kya karoon? I have to do something. Kaise bhi ye Album mujhe fab5 ko wapis dilana hai. Please help me Aiyappa" They reach the music room. Everyone is smiling looking at this adorable couple.

Manik: What?Aise kya dekh rahe ho sab?

Cabir: Nothing yaar. Chill. Nandini ji aap thik ho?

Nandini: Ya cabir. I am fine. I was just feeling guilty but now I am fine.( She thinks about the video where Soha is trying to kill her and suddenly she realizes she can use it and this brings a wide smile on her face)

Cabir: Wah. Manik ka jadoo chal gaya.

Manik: Cabir!

Mukti: Guys yeh sab chodo. Aaj Manik ke ghar pe jana hai. It's party time.

Everyone gets excited. But Nandini is in her thoughts and doesn't pay attention to what they are saying. She tells to everyone that she has some work at home and she will be back soon and leaves from there.

Nandini goes to her home to take that CD in which Soha is trying to kill her and then she goes to meet Mr. khurana. The receptionist doesn't allow her to go inside but she somehow sneaks in while the receptionist is busy talking with someone else. She enters Mr. Khurana's office.

Mr. Khuarana: What the hell! How dare you come inside my office?

Nandini: Mr. Khurana, Aapki beti ne jo mere sath kiya uske wajahse fab5 ko album nahi mili. This is not fair.

Mr. Khurana: It's none of your business. So please get out or else I'll call the security to kick you out.

Nandini: Please give fab5 a chance. They deserve it.

Mr. Khurana: Ab tum mujhe bataogi ki mujhe kya karna hai.

Nandini thinks that she should not blackmail him b'coz it's not right but then thinks about fab5 who have been so nice to her and then she thinks about Manik and makes her mind to do it for him.

Nandini shows Mr. Khurana the CD and says: Isme proof hai ki Soha tried to kill me. Fab5 ko ek chance do nahi to I'll leak this video and then your reputation.(MR. Khurana interrupts)

Mr. Khurana: How dare you? Tum( He stops and thinks that it's about his reputation and fab5 are really good )

Nandini: So kya socha aapne?

Mr. Khurana: okay. Done. I'll give them a second chance.Tomorrow itself I'll tell your principal about the album.

Nandini: Thank you so much and leaves from there happily. But also feels guilty for doing this but again she thinks" It's about their future. Itna to mai kar hi sakti hu"

On the other side,Manik and fab5 are in the canteen. Everyone is teasing Manik. Manik says" Yeh Nandini kaha reh gayi?" At the same time Nandini enters the canteen and Cabir says" Lo aagyi . Speak of the devil" Manik gives a look to Cabir and says" Angel"Everyone laughs and Nandini joins them and says" Hi" to everyone and sits beside Manik.

Manik: Where were you? Itna time kyu lag gaya?

Nandini: Maine bola na ghar pe kuch kam tha . Sorry thoda late hogaya"

Aliya: Chuck it Manik! Let's discuss about tonight.

Nandini: Umm. I don't think Chachi allow karegi. Kal bhi mai ghar nahi gayi. And aaj firse party. She won't allow.

Mukti: Ghar nahi gayi matlab? Where were you ?

Nandini and Manik both look at each other and everyone notices it.

Nandini: Wo mai..

Cabir and Mukti get the hint that they both were together last night and they start laughing .Nandini is embarrassed and Manik notices it so he tells" Nandini,don't worry .Mai tumhe pick karne aaunga and I'll convince Chachi"

Nandini says"But Manik." Manik interrupts " Don't worry. Tumhe pata hai na how impressed she is with me?"At the same time Navya joins them. Mukti tells her to join them for the party and she agrees.

PRECAP: Manik comes to pick Nandini and convinces Chachi

Party at Manik's house

Dhruv and Aliya's secret comes out

😊😊😊😊

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awsm update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon
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waoo amazingg really lovely updates ,,,
continue soon
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awsome update...loved it ...pls continue soon...take care😊

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