MaNan Forever(important note on page 11)

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Hey people..This is my first attempt for writting a FF on Ky2..i am not that imaginative ..but in d case of MaNan I love to think and write interesting stories..So my story starts from the day when nandini comes to college and she saw nyonika talking with the press..I hope you all like it 😊

INDEX:
PART 1: page 1
PART 2: page 1
PART 3: page 1
PART 4: page 3
PART 5: page 3
PART 6: page 4
PART 7: page 5
PART 8: page 6
PART 9: page 7
PART 10: page 8
PART 11: page 10


PART ONE
Nandini: Ye aise kyu behave kar rahi hai..Y isn't she defending Manik..how can she do this !
(After some time She recieves a gift from Manik ..earrings and a pink note saying that tonight when we meet they will twinkle in your ears like the stars..She starts blushing and at the same time nyonika comes there)
Nyonika: Omg! not you again..what are you doing here?
Nandini : Mam aap aisa q kar rahi hai..manik ne kch nai kiya n you are just saying no comments..you should defend him na..
Nyonika : i dont need your advice..Mai mere bete ko achi tarah janti hu..he can do anything in anger.Come i ll show you something so that you believe me.
(She shows the edited video )
Nandini : Manik aisa nai kr skta ..plss aap(Nyonika interrupts)
Nyonika : Oh shut up! you better stay out of this matter and let me handle this my way..now get out
(Nandini goes out and remembers about the video again and suddenly she realises that something was wrong with it and tries to call cabir but he doesn't pick up)
Nandini to herself : Aiyappa pls help me..Mai kya karu..Muje pta h ki Manik ko gussa aata h par wo aisa kbi nahi karega. .and suddenly she bumps into mukti .
Mukti : W*F! can't u see! Ab kya chahiye tumhe!
Nandini : mukti pls help me..do u knw wer cabir is? i am trying to call him but hez not picking up.
Mukti: Wo q tumhara call uthayega huh?
Nandini : Plss mukti can we keep our problems aside..Muje manik ko bachana hai..n i need your help..its for manik..for him pls help me
Mukti : ok..bolo kya kam hai..
Nandini :(She tells the whole story of nyonika ) i think something was wrong with it..Soha ko jab manik ne push kiya tb uske hath me kch nai tha and jab wo gir gyi tb uske hath me ek rod tha..
Mukti : So now wat can we do ?
Nandini : umm..We need a hacker..an expert who can hack anythn..so that we can get the whole video..so do you know someone?
Mukti : umm..let me think ..oh yess a friend of mine is a hacker we can take his help..his name is rohit mehra..I ll call him
Nandini : Great.!

At the canteen
Cabir : aree yar wat the hell is this..ab news pe bhi manik k bare me bta rahe hai..
Aliya : seriously...This is bullshit..ye sab uss nandini ki wajahse hua h.
Dhruv : Aliya stop blaming nandini...issme uski kya galati hai?
Aliya : Whatever i dnt give a shit and goes away
Cabir : Whats wrong with her..
Dhruv : Leave it cabir...we should think abt hw to save manik
Cabir : yaa ..(Cabir chks his cel and sees 10 missed cals from nandni and cals her)
Nandini : Cabir wer r u?
Cabir : Mai aur dhruv canteen me hai..wo actually..nandini interupts
Nandini : ye sb chodo...Come to the security room right away
Cabir and dhruv reach there and mukti explains evrything to them
( Rohit is trying to hack the cctv cams)

Precap : Rohit is successful in hacking
Evryone help Manik

Thank you for reading..i hope you all like it


PART 2

Recap: Nandini takes mukti's help to save manik

Aliya is pissed off.

Cabir and dhruv also join nandini and mukti

Mukti in an angry tone : hey rohit make it fast man! We don't have time..

Cabir: ohh meri lady bheem..chill evrythng will be alright.

(Meanwhile navya comes there and gives nandini a gift by manik)

Nandini: Navya yeh tumhe kaha se mila.?

Navya: Wo hum bahar the aur peon tumhe dhund raha tha yeh gift dene ke liye..to humne us se kaha ki hum nandini ko de denge. Kholo jaldi..TUMHARE MANIK ne bheja hai.

Nandini is blushing while everyone is staring at her. Nandini opens it and finds a red colored dress . It was a vry beautifull red gown with a black shiny belt attached to it and finds a pink note saying just 8 hrs left..She keeps that dress in the bag and tells rohit to make it fast.

Rohit: I have hacked it..Lets see what can we find.

(He checks all the footages and finds the footage of the store room. He starts the video and tells everyone to watch it)

Mukti: Omg! This soha is a total psycho.How can she do this!

Evryone is shocked seeing what soha had done to nandini..Navya feels nauseous and runs out to the washroom and nandini also runs out to check on her. After nandini goes out everyone again starts watching the video and there they find manik shouting I LOVE NANDINI...SUNA TUMNE I LOVE NANDINI..Everyone is shocked and surprised seeing the intensity in manik's voice and eyes..The way he said clearly states that he loves her so much that he could take a bullet for nandini.Meanwhile Manik is thinking about the moments spent with nandini and starts blushing and says "jst some hours nandini and then nothing can keep us apart, nothing!"

Cabir: He really loves nandini.

Mujti: YA.. I can see that.But isn't it wierd .I mean Manik and Nandini..

Cabir: Mukti pyaar hojata hai.Usme dekhte nahi hai ki kon hai kya krta hai.

Dhruv: YA cabir is right. I know i liked nandini ..It will be difficult for me but I will always be there for my buddy

Nandini and navya come back to the security room and see the video.In that video they can clearly see that manik was not involved in soha's death.Evryone jumps with joy ..

Mukti: thanks rohit ..we could not have done it without u..

(rohit leaves from there)

Nandini : I Knew it.manik aisa kuch kar hi nai skta..now I will show it to nyonika that manik is innocent.Nandini to herself AIYAPPA thank you so much!

Cabir: But nyonika hai kaha ..we have to talk with her..hume police ko bhi to proof dena hoga..kya kare ab..

Mukti: pehle nyonika ko dhundte hai..then we will decide what to do.

Dhruv: ya u r right..but aliya kaha hai..hume usko bhi bolna padega na. Mukti tum usko cal karo..

Mukti calls aliya and tells her to come to the music room.Everyone reach the music room.

Cabir: lets do one thing..lets split..Aliya u come with me ..Mukti and dhruv u both try to find manik.And nandini.(nandini interrupts)

Nandini: Cabir I have my blood reports.They might help us.So mai wo leke aati hu.

Cabir: Great.I ll keep updating you. So guys lets get going.

Navya: Aap kuch bhul rahe.

Cabir: Nahi madhubala ji.hum kuch nai bhul rahe.

Navya: Arey hum bhi to hai yaha..hum bhi manik I help krna chahte hai..hume bhi btayiye kya karna hai?

Mukti: Navya I think you should rest..Tumhari halat theek nahi hai..Bichme kuch hogya toh? Tum ghar jao.Kisi chiz ki zarurat pade to just call me..okay?

Navya: Theek hai...hum chalet hai.Nandu tum apna khyal rkhna..Aur cabir hum to aap ko ghar pe hi dkh lenge..huh!! (Navya leaves)

Everyone leaves for there work..Cabir and aliya go to meet nyonika ..Mukti and dhruv go to Manik's house .Nandini goes to her house to collect blood reports..Cabir flirts with the receptionist and meanwhile aliya sneaks into nyonika's cabin but she doesn't find nyonika there..The receptionist is a huge fan of fab 5..Cabir says if u tell us where nyonika is then she will get the autographs of manik,mukti,aliya,dhruv and himself. She agrees and tells that nyonika has an appointment in magistrates office at 4 pm..Cabir gives his autograph and tells aliya to do the same.Before going cabir kisses that girl's hand and leaves from there. Meanwhile mukti and dhruv can't find any news of manik. Cabir texts everyone to reach magistrates office by 4 pm.Everyone leaves hurriedly as it was already 3:30 pm.

AT THE MAGISTRATES OFFICE

Manik and nyonika reach there by 4 pm. They are called inside by the magistrate .

Magistrate: Soha Khurana ki death ke liye Mr. Manik Malhotra ko accuse kiya gaya hai. Aap kuch kehna chahenge.

Lawyers try to prove manik's innocence.

Magistrate: This is not enough proof. Koi eye witness bh nai hai. So Mr. Manik Malhotra ki bail reject kr di gyi hai.

Manik is so angry that none of his friends is present here to save him. And nandini is also not there with him.Nyonika says that "Where are your so called friends and nandini? You saved her life and see now shez not here to protect you.Ab mujhe hi kuch krna pdega"

Manik in an angry tone: Nyonika!

At the same time manik hears a soft beautiful voice from behind MANIKKK" ..He knew this voice.He turned around and saw his shinning star running towards him and all his friends with her are also coming towards him.This brings a smile on his face.

Precap: Nandini proves that Manik is innocent

Manik and Nandini's romantic date night

PART 3

RECAP: Rohit hacks the cctv cams

Nandini and fab 5 reach the magistrates office

Manik turns around with a big smile on his face. Nandini comes towards manik and hugs him tightly. Manik is so happy and he hugs her back.Nandini says" MANIK I am here to protect you..Tumne kya socha mai nahi aaungi" Manik breaks the hug and looks into her eyes.Nandini says chalo abhi I have to prove something to some people and gives an angry look to nyonika.Nyonika looks away. Nandini goes inside the magistrate's office

Magistrate: Who are you? And how dare you enter my office?

Nandini: I am sorry sir. But I have proof that manik is not involved in soha's death. Infact she is a psycho.

Mr. Khurana: What the hell is this? How. (Nandini interrupts)

Nandini: Yes ..I have proof!

Magistrate: Then let's see what do u have!

Nandini shows the clipping to the magistrate where soha is behaving like a psycho and tries to kill nandini and then they skip to the part where manik walks on fire to save nandini.They see that Soha died because she slipped.Then Nandini says I also have my blood reports which prove that soha ne mujhe behosh krne ke liye injection diya tha. Then the magistrate looks at the report and tells his assistant to check it.

Meanwhile Aliya says "I hope now she doesn't mess up!

Cabir: Chill Aliya she has proof. Ab kuch galat nahi hoga. And I think tum sab ko use accept kar lena chahiye. Humara best friend us se ...he looks at manik and winks..

Manik gives a smile and says: Yes Cabir I I..I LOVE HER..

Cabir is shocked and says: Omg! Manik is smiling and he finally confessed.ohhooo..Dekho MANIK MALHOTRA IS SMILING..is ladki me kuch to jadoo hai.. Look Guys maine khud dekha hai how much he loves nandini .Kuch time pehle for Dhruv he sacrificed his feelings for nandini .He walked out from her life for his buddy.

Everyone shocked and everyone at the same time say: WHAT?????

Cabir: Yes guys..jab dhruv ne usko apni feelings ke bare me btaya tb manik ne khudki feelings sacrifice ki.. I could see and feel his pain. Tum sab ne notice nai kiya hoga..But this time I don't want to see manik again like that..

Dhruv: I am sorry buddy..Mujhe nahi pata tha aisa kuch hai..I accept nandini and I think Mukti and Aliya also should accept her.

Mukti and Aliya nod there head in yes

Manik: And buddy..No need to be sorry..And thank you everyone

After a few minutes the assistant comes and says that it is real and authentic.

Magistrate: With enough evidence and proof I declare that Mr. Manik Malhotra is innocent

Nandini: Thank you.. Thank you so much sir.

She goes out with a sad look on her face.Everyone is staring at her and they were scared.

Nandini jumps with joy and hugs manik and says: Ab sab theek hogya hai Manik

Manik also hugs her back and lifts her a bit

Cabir: Tumne to hum sab ko dara hi diya tha..

Nandini: Sorry cabir..

Manik looks at his watch and says: shit! Guys I have to leave.. Mujhe kuch kam hai

Nandini: Manik.. Before anyone could say anything manik leaves

At the same time Nandini receives one more gift from Manik..She looks around and sees Manik far away from here and he winks at her..Nandini is blushing and everyone is staring at her

Mukti: So guys I ll leave..Mujhe kuch kam hai..BYEE

Dhruv says : Muje bhi jana hai..Aliya come I ll drop you

Aliya is shocked but she leaves with dhruv

Cabir: To miss Nandini Murthy..ahem ahem kya plan hai aaj ka..

Nandini is blushing and says: Pta nai Cabir..Manik has planned something for me..

Cabir: Ahem ahem..Enjoy karo..Chalo I am going home now..bye

Cabir leaves and Nandini also goes home

Nandini reaches home and goes to her room and opens the gift..She got a beautiful pair of silver shiny shoes and pink note ofcourse..She is so happy ..She read the pink note in which the address and time to reach is written. She then takes the jar of fireflies and says" Should I tell him the truth today?" ..She starts blushing and falls on the bed thinking about the beautiful moments spent with Manik. Meanwhile Manik is also thinking about the beautifull moments spent with Nandini.

Precap: Nandini and Manik's Romantic date night

Mukbhi and Dhrulya scenes

Sorry.. I ll continue the MaNan's romantic date in the next part


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome ..
Post first part soon😆
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first part is great..😉
keep up the work
continue soon..
n pls mention in the title tht u hv updated frst prt😃😃😃
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awsome start...loved it..pls continue soon...😊
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hope in show the same happen .. but koi nahi we can make our stories here only... update it soon ... 😊👏
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Speaking Nandini style - Awsome!!! Continue Continue!!!!
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part 2 was mind blowing...pls continue asap...take care😊
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Woow awesome..totally opposite the epi...loved it
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PART 4

RECAP : Manik confesses his love in front of fab 5


Nandini
proves that Manik is innocent


Aliya leaves with dhruv. Mukti, cabir and
nandini also go home


Aliya: Dhruv . Where are we going? My home is in the
opposite direction.


Dhruv: Aliya just wait for some time. Tum samajh jaogi


Aliya: hmm..


Dhruv takes her to the beach. Aliya is shocked. Dhruv holds
her hand and says come with me. Aliya agrees and goes with him.


Aliya: Dhruv.. What.(Dhruv interrupts)


Dhruv: Shhh.. Aliya..umm.. I am really sorry for my rude behavior.
I don't know what had happened to me. I over reacted.. I am sorry for that. I know
it was difficult for u to digest the fact that Manik loves Nandini. Even I was
shocked to know about it.


Aliya: I am also sorry dhruv.. I should have..


Dhruv: Let me speak
aliya.. And don't be sorry. I can understand..Just forget all this and come
with me..Dhruv takes aliya to a place away from the crowd . It was a beautiful
place decorated with red and white heart shaped balloons..There was a table
with candles forming heart shape..The table was over the rose petals which was
also forming a heart shape.Aliya was overwhelmed and she said" Aww dhruv...This
is so beautifull" Then dhruv came in front of Aliya and said" Aliya I wanted to
say something..ummm..I ..I ... I LOVE YOU ALIYA" Aliya was blushing and she moved
closer to dhruv and kissed on his lips and dhruv also kissed her back. Aliya
stopped kissing him and cupped dhruv's face and said" I LOVE YOU TOO DHRUV"
Dhruv and Aliya both were blushing.


Meanwhile Nandini and Manik are thinking about each other
and the beautiful moments spent with each other. They both are lost in their
own world thinking about their first kiss. Nandini starts blushing and meanwhile
Manik tells to himself that "Nandini. Today I'll finally tell you how much I
LOVE YOU". Nandini to herself"I LOVE HIM ...I LOVE HIM.I am going to confess my
feelings today at any cost." She comes out of the trance and gets up to get
ready for the date. Meanwhile Manik takes a shower and gets dressed and rushes
to the venue as he as to look after all the arrangements. Nandini gets ready.
She wears the red dress, the silver heels and the ear rings gifted by Manik.
She reaches the place exactly at 8 pm.She looks around and finds the place so
beautiful .There were heart shaped balloons and rose petals all over the place.
She saw pictures of the beautiful moments spent with Manik hanging all over the
place.There were beautiful lights and lamps just as she likes..she says"
WOW..This is so beautiful"But her eyes were searching for Manik and At the same
time Manik comes from behind wearing a black and red suit..He puts his hands
around Nandini's waist and she says" Manik" and turns around. Manik looks at
Nandini . He puts the strand behind her ears and says" YOU LOOK BEAUTIFUL AS
ALWAYS" Nandini starts blushing and says" Manik you too look handsome and
charming as always and this place. This place is so beautiful." Manik smiles at
her and tells her to come with him and gives his hand.. Nandini holds Manik's
hand and goes with him. Suddenly Manik disappears and the lights go off.
Nandini gets scared and says" Manik kaha ho tum." The lights are on again but
this time they are dim and only yellow lights are on and they look like
fireflies.She saw Manik standing in front of her holding his guitar and Manik
says" This is specially for you my shining star" Nandini is so happy. Manik
starts singing:




[P]Tu Hi Meri Hai Sari Zameen

Chahe Kahin Se Chalun

Tujh Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukun

Tere Siva Maun Jaun Kahan

Koi Bhi Raah Chunu

Tujh Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukun


He goes near nandini and winks at her.. Nandini starts
blushing


Tum Mile To Lamhein Tham Gaye

Tum Mile To Sare Gum Gaye

Tum Mile To Muskurana Aa Gaya



Tum Mile To Jadoo Chaa Gaya

Tum Mile To Jeena Aa Gaya

Tum Mile To Mene Paya Hai Khuda





He stops singing keeps his guitar down and pulls nandini
close to him. He caresses her cheeks and then looks into her eyes and says" How
can someone be so pretty" Nandini says" And how can someone sing so well. My rock
star" Manik says" And you are my shining star"Both look into each other's eyes
and Manik says" Nandini I will be back in a minute and leaves" Manik comes back
hiding something in his hands. Nandini is about to say something but Manik says"
Shhh"..and gives her a red rose and says This one is for bringing out the good
side of me. He gives another red rose saying that this one is for being there
for me always. He gives the third rose saying that this one is for being my
shining star. He gives her the 4th rose saying that this one is for
always trusting me. He gives the 5th rose saying that this one is
for always protecting me..Nandini is overwhelmed and says" Manik" but manik interrupts
" Nandini please let me speak. I am really bad at expressing my feelings but
today I want to tell you what I feel about you..When you were not in my life I was
like a living dead soul. I was living my life but at the same time I wasn't
living a life. My life was hell even when I had fab 5 with me. Then things
changed you came into my life. Everything changed. You are like sunshine for
me. You taught me how to live. With you I can be myself. JUST MANIK AND NOT MONSTER
MANIK. I wish to spend each and every moment of my life with you. " Nandini is
so happy hearing such words from manik ..Manik went down on his knees and held
Nandini's hand and said" Nandini Murthy..I PROMISE THAT I WILL NEVER LEAVE YOU.
I WLL ALWAYS BE THERE FOR YOU. I AM IRREVOCABLY AND UNCONDITIONALLY IN LOVE WITH
YOU. WILL YOU BE MY VALENTINE? This bought tears in her eyes and she said " I
LOVE YOU TOO MANIK ALWAYS HAVE ALWAYS WILL. YOU ARE THE LOVE OF MY LIFE AND I
PROMISE THAT I WILL SHINE FOR YOU ALWAYS, YOU WILL ALWAYS BE IN MY PRAYERS AND
I WILL ALWAYS TRUST YOU" Manik was so happy and he got up and hugged nandini
tightly and lifted her a bit. Nandini broke the hug and came near Manik and she
put her hands on manik's shoulder. Manik kept his hand on Nandini's waist and pulled
her closer and she kissed his lips softly. Manik kissed her back passionately .After
a few minutes they stopped the kiss and nandini went all shy and looked down.
Manik smiled at her innocence and asked her for dance. Nandini agreed and they
both start dancing (ishq bulaava playing in the background)Manik twirled her and
now nandini's back was facing him. Manik slid his hands on her waist, he put
her hair on the other side and came near her neck and kissed her neck passionately
.Nandini started blushing but at the same time she was feeling shy so she
turned around and hugged manik tightly. Manik hugged her back and said "I LOVE
YOU". Nandini replied"I LOVE YOU TOO"


Meanwhile Mukti goes to the hospital where Abhi is admitted.
She had decorated his room with balloons and rose petals. She was wearing a
white knee length dress and red heels. Abhi was shocked to see all this and
felt someone hugging him from the back. Abhi turned around and saw Mukti and
all he could say was" BEAUTIFUL" Mukti smiled at him.


Abhi said" What (Mukti
interrupted)


Mukti: Don't start all over again now.. I know you are happy
to see me here. So let's enjoy this moment. And ya smile!! Tumne hi to sikhaya
tha mujhe smile karna ab tum hi aise sad hoke baithe ho.


Abhi started smiling: Oh..wow.. so now mukti is teaching me
how to smile. That's good


Abhi hugs mukti and says" I am so happy today that you are
here with me..Mukti says" Even I am very happy after a long time. Mukti spends
the whole night in the hospital. Mukti and Abhi have a very good time with each
other.


On the other hand, Nandini and Manik are still hugging each
other. Then Manik says lets have dinner my love. Nandini starts blushing and agrees
with him. Manik takes her to the dinner table and pulls the chair for her. She
sits down and Manik sits in front of her. They finished their dinner .Manik holds
his hand and takes her to place from where they could look at the stars..Manik
sits on a bench and nandini also goes and sits with manik hugging him and says"
Manik mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai" Manik says" Bolo na" Nandini says" I want to
tell the truth about my fireflies" Manik smiles and says" you have already told
me. Nandini says" No manik. I lied that day. The truth is that my maa used to
say that fireflies always shine when there is true love"


PRECAP: MaNan spend the night together



Dhruliya Mukbhi and Cavya scenes .

I hope you all like it..😊
Edited by chai_008 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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waoo amazingg loved the update ,, valentines night soo cute ,,😃
love confession amazing😳😳


wish we had this in the show ...👏

but u nailed it gal ,,,these days these OS,FF can keep us all safe from losing it as the track is going
😊


update soon

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