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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update ... 👍🏼 ...
Romance romance...
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
This was also awesome but NavNi part made me emotional yaar...u write so well
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
ty guys...I didnt knew wat to do with navya anymore and didnt wntd to bring tht pregnancy track here also so decided to make her exit...hope u guys likd my concept..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yaar this is very bad...u r making me addicted to this story...but I loved navy's in this...n aww manik guessed nandini reaction exactly...very cute...continue soon...can't wait
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amazinggg update,,,

loved navni part ,,


an manan little phone convo ...

updte soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Super nice but waiting for maniks arrival
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superb update.😃...waitng for nxt one.😔...
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#88

Hi everyone...heres the nxt part..

Chapter 8

Fab5 enters college together but Mukti had some work at admin department so she leaves from there.Whille walking through the corridor,she hears someone's voice coming from behind the wall so she peeps and sees Harshad holding a gal very close to him.

Harshad:Hey sweetheart..do u knw u are the most beautiful gal of this college..i mean there is no other gal who is near to ur beauty not even my sister Alya.

The gal blushes listening to his compliments while Mukti jst rolls her eyes coz she knews tht he is again jst flirting with no actual feelings for the gal.

Girl:Really..bt agar aisa hai to tum hamesha vo Nandini aur Navya ke sath kya karte the..and kal to us Navya ne tumhe propose bhi kiya tha na..

Harshad jst laughs and pulls her even closer.

Harshad:Seriously..u are talking abt tht behenji Navya..u knw na she is not even of my standard aur propose to muje har ladki karti hai bt tht doesn't mean tht I'l fall for them..Muje to tum jaisi hot and sexy ladki chahiye as a gf..

Mukti decides to leave fom there as she didn't wntd to listen this shit anymore.Bt as soon as she heards the gal taking her name she stops.

Gal:Aur wat abt Mukti..tum to uske sath pehle relation mai the na..aur vo to hot bhi hai aur sexy bhi fir tumne use kyu choda..

Harshad smirks and says:Vo hot and sexy to thi bt mere layak nai thi..i mean she doesn't deserved me...puri psycho thi...mere piche padi thi bohot salo se so jst to keep her heart I said yes to her..bt jab muje uske weird nature ke bare me pata chala to I left her..and nw lets not waste time talking abt al those stupids gals..

With this he pulls the gal in a kiss and Mukti jst walks out from there as she couldn't control her emotions anymore.. She runs and goes near an empty staircase and cries her heartout..

Nandini was coming from washroom and was headin towards musicroom wen she spotted Harshad coming with a gal from the opposite side.She jst glares him and walks away from there without saying anything to him.He looks at her and thinks.

Harshad:Dnt be so happy Nandini.Trust me I haven't forgotten anything wat u did with me..Tumhe itni aasani se mai nai chodnewala..Tonight u are gona pay for everything.

Nandini keeps walking bt suddenly she hears somene sobbing nearby.She goes towards the voice and to her surprise finds Mukti sitting on stairs and crying.She hurriedly goes towards her and sits near her and ask the reason for this.

Nandini:Mukti..wat happened..y are u crying..

Mukti doesn't answer her anything bt thn she remembers Harshad walking out from there.So understoonds its all bcz of him.She then tries to console her.

Nandini:Mukti..i knw tum Harshad ke vajah se ro rahi ho na..pls dnt do this..remember tumne hi Navya ko kal kaha tha tht he dnt deserve it..

Mukti stops weeping and looks at her.Nandini continues.

Nandini:You knw wat Mukti...I dnt knw wat happnd between u and Harshad and y guys brokd up..bt I knw very well it mst be all his fault only..so its completely wrong for u to punish urself for his mistakes..

Mukti:Nandini..u dnt knw..sometimes its required to punish urself for someone else faults coz thts makes u realise tht even u were at fault for trusting someone wrong.

Nandini:Maybe ur right..bt tht doesn't means ke tum uske liye lifelong suffer karo..tumhe kabhi na kabhi move on karna padega na..u can't live in past forever..

Mukti feels comfortable talking to Nandini so she leaves a sigh and wipes her tears and says..

Mukti:U knw wat Nandini..u are actually right..he dnt deserve it.

Nandini feels happy seeing Mukti finally getting better.

Nandini:I knewd Mukti tht u are a fighter coz tum Navya ki tarah weak nai ho jo problms se har mankar piche hat jao..u have faced him frm so long and I knw tum hamesha hi usse aise hi fightback karogi..

Hearing Navya's name,Mukti asks abt her so Nandini tells her whole story how she called her and decided to leave and nw she had finally left.Mukti feels bad for her.Nandini senses her feelings and tries to divert her mind.

Nandini:Anyway Mukti dnt mind bt can I ask u y suddenly u strtd crying..i mean..did Harshad said anything to u.

Mukti feels as if she could connect with Nandini so she decides to tell her everything

Mukti:No..actually usne muje to kuch nai kaha bt maine use kisi aurse mere bare mai bakwas karte hue suna..thtsy I jst cudn't control my emotions aur yaha akele mai akar...

She couldn't complete her sentence so Nandini speaks in between.

Nandini:U knw tumhe akele yaha nai rehna chahiye..i mean tumhare paas fab5 hai..they are more than a family to u na so tum unse apni feelings kyu nai share karti..i mean then u'l feel more better coz dard share karne se hi kam hota hai...

Mukti gives a sad smile and says

Mukti:I knw Nandini..tum sahi keh rahi ho..bt I wish mai aisa kar pati bt unfortunatly I cnt share it with them..

Nandini gets confused:Bt why not..i mean they are ur bst frnds na..

Mukti:Yes thy are..Bt u see I m more closed to Cabir in our group bt he and Dhruv both being boys won't understand a gal's feeling at all even if they are ur lifelong buddies and Manik is like a big bro to me..so protective and caring..agar usse ye bataya to kuch bhi samajne se pehle hi he'll go and start fighting with him..u knw na he is so aggressiv..

Nandini :Ya bt u have Alya na..she is a gal so u can express ur feelings with her and she'l obviously understand it..

Mukti gives a sarcastic smile to Nandini and says..

Mukti:I knewd u wud say this..bt Nandini let me remind u..jis ladke ke bare mai muje baat karni hai he is none other than his own brother..how do u expect me to speak ill about him infront of her...

Nandini understands her dilemma now and Mukti continues

Mukti:U knw Alya is very nice gal..vo hamesha apne bhai ke against jakar fab5 ko support karti hai..u can guess how much difficult it is for her..vo kabhi dikhati to nai bt v all knw tht wenever we speak bad abt Harshad she does feels bad..so mai kaise usse ye sab discuss karu..she'l feel more guilty then.

Nandini realises how much Mukti feels lonely inspite of having the best bunch of frnds..She tries to help her.

Nandini:I dnt knw Mukti if I have the right to say this or not..bt I jst wna say ke wenever u feel like speaking ur heart out u can always come to me and I promise I'l always listen to u and won't judge u never..

Mukti feels happy seeing this concern for her from someone other than fab5 she jst hugs Nandini and says

Mukti:Thnx Nandini..for comforting me so much..and ya if in future if I ever felt speaking to anyone then surely u'l be on top of list..

Nandini feels overwhelmed seeing Mukti showing her so much trust on her..

Nandini:And I swear I'l always try to bring smile to ur face wenever u'l come sad to me..

Mukti:I can't belive out of everyone I'l be the one who'l be needing u for finding solace in my life..Bt there's always a new beginning for everything na..so let this be ours..and I knw after Navya have left u wud be feeling lonely too so I have decided tht I'l too try to be the same support for u how u'l be mine..

Nandini smiles thinking tht even she lost one good frnd 2day still her aiyappa had sent a new for her.With this both heads towards canteen together.

Manik and Nyonika are still in hotel and Manik is getting more restless with each passing second coz he is missing nandu a lot..the only thing tht is keeping him sane is the memory of the last night beach date spent by them together.He remembers them and thinks

Manik:Damn Nandini..i never thought I'l miss u so much..Thts it I can't stay away from u anymore bt now first I need to get out from this place.

He goes and tells Nyonika tht he is leaving from here.Nyonika gets angry listening to Manik's stupid words.

Nyonika:Wat nonsense Manik..think before u say..Tumhe pata hai roads block hai..then how u'l go..

Manik:I dnt care..i'l find a way out..bt for now I m leaving from here..

Nyonika:Wat is so important waiting for u there..tht u cant wait till 2mrw..

Manik:Well thts none of concern..ur deal is done right..so ab mai jo chahe vo karu u shdnt worry abt it ok...

Saying this he leaves from there leaving behind a worried Nyonika.

Nyonika:All I wnt Manik is u to be safe..rest m happy with anything u say..

Manik gets in his car and thinks,"Here I come Nandini.." and drives off.

Nandini and Mukti arrives at canteen together smiling and talking to each other.Fab3 gets surprised seeing Mukti so cheerful after so longtime and tht also with someone other than fab5.

Cabir..ok so comeon guys..somebody pinch me and wake me up..

Mukti goes to him and gives a tight slap to him and says..

Mukti:Itna kafi hai tujhe wakeup karne ke liye ya ab sandal utar kar maru..

Cabir makes a scared face and says..

Cabir:No no..itna kafi hai..mai jag gaya..vaise bata ye tuje kya hua..tu kyu itni khushi ke mare uchalte hue aa rahi hai..

Mukti jst smiles and goes and sits with them and makes Nandini sit too..

Alya:Ha Mukti..bol na..tu itni khush kyu lag rahi hai..

Mukti:Well guys..itna bhi koi bada reason nai hai..its jst ab tak mai bas aisa formally keh rahi thi tht we shd be frnds with Nandini but nw I officially declare Nandini as my frnd and with wholeheartedly welcomes her to our group..

Evryone including Nandini too gets stunned listening this bt everyone seems to be happy with Mukti's declaration.

Cabir:Wat..seriously..ye tu bol rahi hai..muje to belive nai ho raha..

Mukti:Ab jyada footage mat kha..and get it in ur brains for once and for all tht ya..nandini is now gona be one of my besties along with fab5.So dnt even dare to mess with her..got it..

Suddenly Alya joins Mukti too to speak abt her and Nandini's new frndship.

Alya:Actually guys..not only Mukti bt eevn I have turnd frnds with Nandini..so m too on Mukti's side..

Alya and Mukti gets up and goes and hug Nandini together.This sight was enough for both Dhruv and Cabir to get a heartattack.

Cabir:Oh my god...Mukti..ek kam kar sachme sandal utar kar muje mar hi de coz muje sach me lag raha hai ke mai sapna dekh raha hoo...Mukti,Alya and Nandini turning best frnds..i mean this is not a scene jo roz dekhne mile...

Dhruv:Cabir..this time I m with u..coz muje bhi mere aankho par belive nai ho raha..kal jo frnd tlk hua vahi digest karna mushkil tha..bt ye gal grup hug to completely shocking hai..

Alya:Dnt wry guys...aisa shock tumhe ab roz milne wala hai na gals..

Both Nandini and Mukti says yes in unision and three of them starts laughing.

Cabir:Vo to ham jhel lenge coz it's the best shock we can ever get bt pehle ye batao ke tum teeno ke bich aisa hua kya jo u guys turnd besties suddenly.

This time Nandini says first.

Nandini:Well Cabir..lets jst say hamari destiny mai hame frnds banna likha to finally ham ban hi gaye..ab kaise aur kyu bane..tht really doesn't matter right..

Dhruv:I agree with u...watevr happnd tht doesn't matter..bt we are jst glad tht we can see the three most gorgeous gals of SPACE together nw..

Cabir:Thts true...well said Dhruv

Mukti:Vo to thik hai..bt sara credit destiny ko nai jata coz hamari Nandini bhi half credit deserve karti hai for being the sweetest and most caring frnd..right Alya..

Alya:Ofcouse..now its tym for gals group hug.

With this all three gals goes in a group hug with whole canteen looking shocked by witnessing the most unexpected event ever happnd in SPACE till date.Cabir takes picture of their together to give a shock to Manik as well.He thinks,"Aaja Manik beta,teri life ka sabse bada jhatka dene ke liye m so badly waiting for u.."

So guys sry again...Manik firse nai aaya bt promise nxt part mai our hero will be back with a bang till then pls bare this part...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww so cute mukti nandini friends...
Show mein ye chamatkar nai hota...update soon dear...CABIRA is the best
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
awesome ... amazing update... loved it
waiting for Manik...to back... pls update soon

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