Manan ff-Love is Manan(part 43-page 138)

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Hey guys...I have always been a silent reader of thisforum but now aftr seeing all this depressing tracks going on this show I havedecided to write my ff.Basically its going to be a very positve and sweetromantic ff with no melodrama so I just hope you guys like it.

In my story,Manik and Nandini are in a secret relationship after the Musicana night,and Dhruv have no feelings for Nandini and Aliya have also moved on from Manik.Cabir and Raghav had broken up before only and Cabir is also getting over it.Mukti is as usual as in show but a bit more sensitive.So now here it goes...

Chapter 1

Early morning with the birds chirping their most romantic tone waking up a beautiful girl whose been sleeping peacefully in the most comfortable pair of arms of her beloved,ie. her manik.Manik wakes realizing the movements.

Manik:Nandini,what happened?why you are moving sleep?

Nandini:Manik,I'm not moving in sleep.I m getting upcoz its morning now.And I think its time for you to get up too.You have to gofor your practice remember.Fab4 must be waiting for you.

Manik:Oh ya..I just forgot abt it.Thanx for reminding.

Nandini:Listen,I'l be downstairs making breakfast tillthat time you get freshened up ok.

Manik:Ok fine.

This had been the daily routine of both manik and nandini'sever since chacha-chachi had went to mangalore with rishab from 2 days for aregular visit to ams.Nandini had college hence she couldn't go along with themwhich had given manik and nandini to spend some time together.

At breakfast table,manik comes down and nandini serveshim breakfast and she goes to her room to get herself freshened.After havingtheir meals done manik and nandini droves to college.But nandini gets out ofthe car near college gate as she doesn't want anyone to see them together.Manikenters music room and nandini goes to navya and harshad.Ever since NH3 had lostat musicana not because of nandini but due to Fab5's better performance,harshadhad started misbehaving with others.

Nandini:Hey guys..

Navya:Hi..Nandini.

Harshad:So Ms.Moorthy hadfinally got time for her so called friends right ..By the way nandini where do you stay busy so much nowadays as you hardly give time to us.

Nandini:Harshad please,itsnothing like that.Early morning plz dnt get started with all thosebickerings,plz.

Navya:Nandini,tum pleaseharshadji se aise baatein mat karoy.Vo to sach hi keh rahe hai na.Aaj kal sachmein tumhare pass hamare liye waqt nahi rehta hai.

Nandini:Navya,ab tumbhi?Tumlogo ko jo sochna h vo socho,maine kaha tha na ke ghar par koi nahi haiisliye muje der ho jati hai.

Harshad:Ok if thts the casethen how come you always gets time for manik then...huh..Nandini say na.

Nandini:What do you meanharshad?

Harshad:Don't act innocentnandini.Maine tumhe aur manik ko kafi bar ek sath dekha hai..so is somethingbrewing up between you guys?

Nandini:Shut upharshad.Dusro ki life me interfere karne ke bajaye tumhe apne kam se matlab
rakhna chahiye.Aur kiske sath milti hu ya nahi vo meri personal life hai so ubetter mind your own bussiness.

Harshad:This is damnbussiness ok.Coz Manik is our rival and I don't want my bandmembers to befriendly with them.Do you get that.

Nandini:Fine...if that's thething is then I'm leaving your band so bye.

Navya:Nandini,ye tum kyakar rahi ho.Us manik ke liye tum apne frnds ko kaise chod sakti hu.

Nandini:Navya,Mai sahi karrahi hu.Harshad ke liye we are not his frnds jst a way to hurt Fab5 and nw mjst done with it.So m sry bt m leaving this band.Bye

And nandini walks out from there.Meanwhile inmusic room,fab5 are practicing and manik enters.

Manik:Hi everyone.

Cabir:Lo aagaye hamare Prince Manik.Nw guys we canfinally start.

Dhruv:Hey manik,where were you?

Manik:Sorry,guys actually traffic mai phas gaya tha vo...butanyways lets start practicing.

Cabir is here again as in show so he knows abt manan.Hewalks to manik and whispers in his ears,"Traffic mai phas gaya tha ya trafficmai phasa rehna chahta tha taki nandini ke sath aur duet kar sake.."

Manik:Cabir..shut up yaar..koi sun lega..ja jake drumsbaja tu..

Cabir:Ha bhai mere pass drums bajane ke alawa aur kaam kyahai...

Then they start practicing.

So this is it for now.Plz tel me if u liked it or not nd shdould I continue
further or not.
Index:
Chapter 2-page 2
Chapter 3-page 3
Chapter 4a-page 4
Chapter 4b-page 6
Chapter 5-page 9
Chapter 6-page 11
Chapter 7-page 13
Chapter 8-page 14
Chapter 9-page 16
Chapter 10-page 18
Chapter 11-page 19
Chapter 12-page 22
Chapter 13-page 24
Chapter 14-page 25
Chapter 15-page 27
Chapter 16-page 29
Chapter 17-page 31
Chapter 18-page 33
Chapter 19-page 36
Chapter 20-page 38
Chapter 21-page 40
Chapter 22-page 43
Chapter 23-page 45
Chapter 24-page 48
Chapter 25-page 50
Chapter 26-page 55
Chapter 27-page 59
Chapter 28-page 63
Chapter 29-page 65
Chapter 30-page 68
Chapter 31-page 73
Chapter 32-page 76
Chapter 33-page 79
chapter 34-page 83
Chapter 35 -page 89
Chapter 36-page 95
Chapter 37-page 100
Chapter 38-page 107
Chapter 39-page 113
Chapter 40-page 120
Chapter 41-page 124
Chapter 42-page 134
Chapter 43-page 138


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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awsm start
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How cute... 😳
My cabira ❤️ is again a cupid

"Mere pass drum bajane ke Alava kaam kya h" so cute my cabira is...
And MANAN ❤️ I love them yaar...
Conti soon ...can't wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start...after a long time harshad thing in ff...nice...plsss continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow interesting story..
pls do continue.😃
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awsome start...loved it...pls continue soon 😊
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amazing start dear ..congrats onn the new story .. loved to read how it unfolds,,😉
update soon

an if possible PM me 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So here is the next part guys...

Chapter 2

After fab5's practice session gets over, they all head towards canteen.While walking in corridor,manik spots nandini walking sadly in the opposite corridor.As soon as he looks her, he understands that she is sad.

Manik:Listen guys,you all make a move I'l join you guys in few minutes.

Mukti:Kyu..kya hua..kaha ja raha hai tu..?

Manik:Actually...vo..mukti..ummm

Cabir:Mukti..meri gadadhari bheem tu acp pradyuman kab ban gayi..itne sare questns ek sath..join karna hai kya cid

Mukti:Shut up...nautanki..mai to bas aise hi puch rahi thi..aur maine manik se pucha to tu kyu bich mai tapak raha hai.

Manik:Actually mukti..vo mera phone car m reh gaya hai..to mai bas vohi lene ja raha tha...muje abi yaad aaya na isliye..ok so bye

Dhruv:Y he left in so hurry...phone ke liye itna concern.

Cabir..Oh mere topiwale mukti..ab tu mat start ho please...muje bhuk lagi chalo canteen...jab manik vapas aayega na tab usse puchna nd if you want I'l suggest more 10-20 questins ok..but pls lets go nw..

Nandini is sitting on the stairs with a sad face nd suddenly she feels hot breathe on her neck nd she turns around and see manik sittin on a step above her leanin his face on her neck.

Nandini:Manik..ye kya kar rahe ho?

Manik:Can't you see kya kar raha hu..

Nandini:Manik pls...not nw..m already not in a good mood so

Manik:I know you are not in good mood...so nw tellme wat happnd

Nandini:Actually...tht harshad na..

As soon as manik hears harshad's name he get ups angrily.

Manik:kya..harshad..kya kiya usne..did he hurt you..now m nt gona leave him

Nandini holds him and tries to calm him down and says

Nandini:Jst calm down ok...he didn't hurt me or did anything...its jst tht he ws acting very rudely to me nd was questning me abt our relation.So I cudnt take it anymore so I jst left his band thts it..

Manik:Ohhkkk...Its good tht you left his band...Muje vaise bhi pasand nai tha wen you used to be around him..he can hurt you anytime..anyway leave it

Nandini:Hmmn...lets go nw

Manik:Wat lets go...huh..apne frnds se bhagkar tumhare pass aya hu nd you are telling to lets go...we are not going anywhere atleast not before I get something..And with this he lowers his lips towards nandini's and just before they touches manik's phone rings.

Manik:Wat the hell!!!he looks his phone and sees Nyonika's name flashing on it.He goes to cut it but nandini says in between

Nandini:Manik..I think you should pick it up...it might be important.So reluctantly manik picks up the call.

Manik:Ya say...

Nyonika:Hello..listen manik can you come to my cabin now...need to discuss something with you.

Manik:Discuss...vo bhi mujse...like seriously nyonika..

Nyonika:Manik pls,dnt start nw..just come to cabin..bye

Manik:watevr..fyn

Nandini:So we should leave then you have to go na..Saying this she moves to go but suddenly manik pulls her waist toward him nd lands on his chest.

Manik:And where do you think you are going Ms. Moorthy?I think jst now I said tht you are not leaving without giving me goodbye kiss..

Nandini:Goodbye kiss..huh..I guess hum vaise bi thode der bad vapas milenge hi..so goodbye kiss kisliye.

Manik:Us thodi der tak muje zinda rehne ke liye ur kiss is gona act like oxygen for me..with this he leans to kiss her but nandini bends down nd gets out from his grip nd pecks on her cheeks nd says

Nandini:Itne se time ke liye itna kafi hai tumhe zinda rakhne ke liye..ok..Mr.Malhotra..With this she runs away..leaving behind a smiling manik walking towards Nyonika's cabin.

At canteen,evryone is sitting nd nandini comes ther.Mukti comes taking two plates of sandwhiches in her hand and talking with aliya nd she doesn't see nandini coming and they both bump into each other.Nandini falls down with sandwhiches on her and mukti and aliya gets shocked.Nandini somehow gets up with mukti and aliya helping her out.

Nandini:I'm sorry gals...meri vaja se shayad ye hua..I shud hav been more careful but...

Mukti:No actually..its my fault..maine dekha nai..and you are apologising even wen you hav fallen down.

Aliya:Ya..mukti is right.galti hamari hai..and bcoz of us you got hurt bt I hope you are fyn.

Nandini:Oh no no...m fyn.pls dnt be sry.Anyway I'l go to washroom now bye.

Nandini goes from there and mukti and alya talks .

Alya:Dnt you think mukti tht nandini somtims gets way too sweeter.

Mukti:Ya..actually..I mean vo kabhi kisiko kuch shout nai karti ya back answer nai karti..infact galti na hone pe bhi she says sorry.

Alya:Ya..inspite ke maine past me uske sath kya kya kiya she never said anything harsh to me ever.

Mukti:Ya..i think we shud get to know her more...wat say?

Alya:Well..i dnt mind.

They go towards there tables.Cabir speaks

Cabir:Kya gals..tum log abi bi nandini ke peeche padi ho...I mean atleat ab to use rag mat karo...maine dekha abi kaise tumlog dono ne uspar sandwhices girayi.

Dhruv:Cabir is right.I really think you both should behave properly with her now.

Mukti:Hang on guys...ye kya lecture pe lecture dete ja rahe ho..jst listn to us first ok.

Alya:Ya..actually vo bymistakly mukti se plates giri..she didn't do it purposely ok...bt we did apologised to her but to our surprise vo khud sorry bolne lagi.

Mukti:ha..and we were trying to be polite with her..so chill ok.Infact,I have kinda strtd liking her

Alya:Ya..evn at some point even I have got some soft spot for her

Cabir and dhruv are shocked listenin to this.

Dhruv:Seriously..you guys like her...I mean that is awesome.

Cabir:Hey bhagwan..muje to apne kano pe vishwas nai ho raha hai...Meri lady bheem aur barbie doll mein itna sara parivartan ye sab kaise hua..

Mukti:Chup be...nautanki..chup chap sanwiches kha varna mera thappad khana padega..

They all start laughing.

Cabir thinks,"Manik ko jab ye pata chalega ke ye dono nandini ko accept karne lagi hai to pata nahi khushi ke mare kahi nandini se shadi karke inke samne na le aaye...Bt anyways on a serious note atleast un dono ke secret relationship ko khullam-khulla relationship bananeka accha rasta mil gaya hai".

Thts it for now guys..hope I didn't bored you all.Next part will soon be updated.

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loved it...pls continue soon...take care😊
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wow lovely update
loved it
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