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Posted: 10 years ago
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ty...and I too wnt to put manan scenes bt for the story to work I wntd to make nandu and fab5's bond to be strong...bt stil il try to bring manik back soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its nice but...no Manik...its pale😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWSOME UPDATE...LOVED IT...missed manik...but its ok yaar...loved the bonding b/w aliya and nandu...pls continue soon...would love to read more ...take care.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update... loved it...
no manan... ok
Nandu & Fab4 bonding superb... just loving it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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super cute but missed manan part
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ya..il try to bring manan scenes in nxt part..sry for disappointin I this tim..
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Originally posted by: LoveAngelsimmy

ya..il try to bring manan scenes in nxt part..sry for disappointin I this tim..



don't be sorry dear...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsm update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys..First of all I wna thank everyone for liking my story so much even being so lengthy everyone is stil reading it and liking it so m really thankful for it..and since I disppointed evryone in mornin with no manan scenes so I decided to make it up by posting the next part 2day only with a lil of manan for everyone..so hope u like it...nw m over with my speech so here begins my story..

Chapter 7

After spending a cute girly afternoon with Alya,Nandini decided to leave for home as it was late evening.

Nandini:Alya,I think I shd leave now..its getting late..

Alya:Oh ya..come I'l drop u home.

Nandini agreed and as they were leaving suddenly Nandini's phone start to ring.She checked and found Navya calling her.She hurriedly picked call,worrying she mst hsve not done something wrong.

Nandini:Hello..navya..tum thik to ho na..kuch hua kya..pls bolo na.

Navya:Nandini..shant ho jao..hame kuche nai hua..ham bas tumse baat karna chahte the to kya tum abhi hamare hostel aa sakti ho pls..

Nandini feeling a bit relieved hearing Navya to be normal again.

Nandini:Ya ofcourse...mai bas abhi aati hu bye..

Nandini cuts the call and decides to go alone to hostel as she dnt wnt Alya to face anymore embarassment there due to 2day's incident.

Nandini:Alya..listen na actually Navya wnts me to meet her at hostel so I'l bettr go alone coz anyway hostel is near only..

Alya understands the situation and agrees.

Alya:Ya ok..see u 2mrw thn bye..

Nandini:Bye..see ya

Nandini leaves from there.Suddenly again her phone starts ringing,she thinks tht its Navya again so she gets panick bt as soon as she sees the name which is flashing on screen,all her worries jst goes away.She sees Manik calling her she picks the call with a smile

Nandini:Hello..hi Manik.

Manik:Hi sweetheart..kaisi ho tum..u knw m missing u a lot..

Nandini smiles hearing the cute voice of her monster.

Nandini:I m missing u too baby..by d way Manik hame sirf kuch ghante hi hue hai milke to tum meri itni tension kyu le rahe ho..

Manik:Tension kaise nai lu..tumhari tension lena hi to mera fulltime kam hai afterall u are Nandini Moorthy jo problems ko to aaspaaske leke chalti hai..Tumhara koi ek din bhi bina kisi problem ke kaha jata hai..so obviously tension to muje leni hogi na..

Nandini:Manik..wat do u mean ha..mai kya jaanbujke problems mai padti hu..

she makes an angry face.Manik hits his head for again fighting with her.

Manik:Ok baby..m sry..tum kabhi problems mai nai padti infact problems tumpar padti hai..happy now..anyway say mere jane ke baad kuch hua to nai na and ur fine right..

Nandini goes confused whether she shd tell abt tht Harshad incident to Manik or not.Bt knwing how Manik's anger she decids not to tell him nw as she dnt wnt him to worry more abt her there.

Nandini:No baba..kuch bhi serious nai hua..pls tum jyada socho mat ok..bas apna kam khatm karo and come back soon..

Manik:Serious nai hua to kya kuch minor scene hua kya..tell me.

Nandini gets worried thinking wat she shd say.She decides to tell only abt proposal thing not after effects of it.

Nandini:Actually..2day Navya proposed Harshad infront of whole college and he rejected her badly and insultd her so she is feeling very hurt.

Manik:Wat..I cant belive Navya ne us Harshad ko propose kiya aur vo Harshad usse yahi expect kar sakte apna kaminapan vo chodega nai..Bt wait a sec..let me guess jab usne Navya ko insult kiya tab kahi tumne jakar usse jhagda to nahi kiya na..

Nandini gets stunned hearing Manik guessing the exact thing which she done.She wonders how well Manik knows her.Bt now she decides to lie him so tht he doesn't get angry by making his guess right as he doesn't wants her to get in any mess.

Nandini:No way..maine aisa kuch nai kiya..jst relax..aur tum abhi phone rakho muje Navya se milne uske hostel jana hai..she is waiting for me baki we'l tlk 2mrw ok..

Manik:Ya ok..fyn and do one thing tum aaj Navya ke hostel mai hi ruk jao..since I won't be there at night to it will be safe for u if u'l stay at hostel.Aur muje bhi tumhari tension nai hogi..

Nandini:Ok I'l stay with her..nw bye

She goes to cut the call bt Manik continues to speak..

Manik:Hey listen wait..dnt cut the call...I need to say something

Nandini:kya..

Manik:I love u..

Nandini smiles and replies back..

Nandini:I love u too my monster..nw bye

Manik too smiles and says bye..

Nandini cuts the call and goes towards the hostel and within 15 minutes she reaches Navya's hostel.As soon as she reaches her room she finds 2 bags lying on floor.

Nandini:Navya..ye sab kya hai..ye bags pack karke tum kaha ja rahi ho..

Navya holds Nandini and makes her sit on the bed.

Navya:Nandini..pls pehle hamari baat suno..phir jo bolna ho boldena..

Nandini gets quiet and listens to Navya carefully.

Navya:Nandini..tum hamesha hamre liye ladti rahi..jabse college mai aaye tabse tumne hamara sath diya..bt jab tumhara sath hame dena chahiye tha tab hamne tumhe chodkar Harshad ka sah diya..hame pls uske liye maaf kardo..aur aaj jo bhi hua usse hame yakin ho gaya hai ke ham iss sheher ki zindagi ke liye nai bane hai..ham utne smart nahi hai aur tumhari jaisi himmat to hamme bilkul bhi nahi hai..Isliye hamne yeh decide kiya hai ke ham vapas patna chale jayenge...pls hame mat rokna..

Nandini couldn't stay quiet anymore she starts shouting at her.

Nandini:Navya tum ye kya bol rahi ho..u really dnt need to sorry me for anything..we are best frnds hai na..and us Harshad ke liye tum apne dreams kyu chod kar ja rahi ho.pls dnt do this..U have to fight against him..

Bt Navya was in no mood to listen.She had finally made up her mind this tim and there was no way she was gona change her decisiion

Navya:Hame pata tha tum yahi sab bologi..Bt pls is bar hame apne man ki karne do bahut mushkil se hamne itni himmat jodi hai ab ham piche nai hatnewale..aur raha sawal apne sapne pure karneka vo to ham ek din zarur pura karenge par filhal ke liye hame jaana hi hoga yaha se door taki firse apne aapko pehle jaisa bana sake..issliye hamne kal subah ki 9 baje ki train ki tickets book kar li hai patna ke liye..pls tab tak tum hamare sath hi rehna.

Nandini didn't knew wat to say further bt she decided to respect her decision and agreed to it.

Nandini:Ok Navya..if thts wat u wnt...to I'l support u this time..bt pls promise me tum vaha jakar apne dreams ko nahi bhulogi..

Navya:Pakka..hum promise karte hai..

With this they both hugged each other and decided to sleep as they have to wake up 2rw early for Navya's farewell.

Nxt morning,both Navya and Nandini woked up early and got freshened up and left for the railway station.They reached on time and even train was also standing on platform.After putting her all luggage in the train,Nandini comes out and stands near the door talking to Navya..

Nandini:Navya..pls ek bar aur soch lo and pls stay back.

Navya gets sad.Bt stil stays strong on her decision.

Navya:Pls Nandini..ye sab bolkar hame aur kamzor mat banao..ham apna faisla nahi badalne vale hai..aur ab ye sab chodo..tum bas apna khayal rakhna aur hamare janeke bad tum akela mat feel karna kyuki hamne dekha hai kis tarh fab5 tumhe support kar rahi thi..shayad vo itne bi bure nai hai to tum unse dosti karlena..aur harshadji se pls door rehna hamare liye unse aur jhagda mat karna pls..aur raha sawaal Monster Manik ka to hame pata hai tum use bhi badal dogi..hai na

Both smiles then.The train starts whistling so both NavNi hugs each other for the last time and the train departs then leaving behind a sad Nandini waving her goodbyes to her bestfrnd.

Nandini then decides to go college as she needs to get a break from all this thinking.Meanwhile Manik and Nyonika have finished their meeting bt are stil in pune and are staying in a hotel as they couldn't leave from pune due to sudden landslide tht occurred on road lastnight.

Manik:Wat the hell is this..y can't we jst leave now..I wna go back to mumbai..

Nyonika:Manik..muje bhi is hotel mei rukne ka koi shauk nai hai..even I have some importat meetings waiting for me..bt is landslide ke vajah se sare roads block ho gaye so we can't leave now.

Manik gets more irritated listening all this as he was frustrated coz he hadn't met her nandu frm past 24 hrs which was increasing his temper.He jst leaves the room and goes to the garden of the hotel and decides to call Nandini which was the only thing which wud decresae his frustration.He calls her and within a few rings Nandini picks the call as if she was waiting for his calls only.He smiles knowing tht even she is missing him so much.

Nandini:Hi..manik..kaha ho tum..did u came back here..bolo na..

Manik gets sad listening this question as he knws tht he'l make her also sad with his answer.

Manik:Sry Nandini..actually I didn't came till now and dnt knw if aaj aa bhi paunga ya nahi..coz yaha ek landslide ke vajah se road blocks hui hai..

Nandini's face turns all sad listenng to this bt she thinks not to show it to him and make him more upset as she knows how much he mst be missing her

Nandini:Ohh..its ok..i can understand..anyway ur fyn na..tht landslide mai nothing happnd to u na.

Manik feels happy seeing Nandini's concern towards her.

Manik:Ya.. m all good..muje kuch nai hua..bt m jst sad ke mai aaj bhi tumse nai mil paunga..

Nandini to cheer him up says.

Nandini:Its ok..manik aaj nai kal ham mil hi jayenge so nw u dnt take more stress ok..bye nw I have reached college..so will tlk to u later ok..and ya remember I love u and missing u badly..

Manik moods gets lightened up listening Nandini's sweet words.

Manik:Ya I love u too nd evn I miss u a lot..ok nw u go college bye take care.

Manik feels so relaxed after talking to her as if she is the cure for all worries of his life.He then decides to message fab5 and inform them about his delay in coming back.He messgaes everyone,"Hey guys..sorry bt won't be able to come 2day also due to landslide on the road..So bye will meet u 2mrw.."

All fab4 reads his message and feels sad for not meeting him even 2day.

So finally done for nw..again didn't brouhgt Manik back in this part also so pls forgive me for this...Hope so u guys dnt get upset as il try to fulfill ur wish in nxt part.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome part...loved it...loved manan phone conversations...pls continue soon...take care...😊

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