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Yaar ur Cabir is too good...u have a great sense of humour

awesome Canteen scene n specially ManBir
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evn I love my cabir alot..thtsy aftr manan my priority goes to cabir only..
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Lovely update dear.. Pls continue soon
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lovely update.❤️... i dont mind if u write more lengthy update than dis...😉...
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Awww this is cute I so wish to see it really happing in the show
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love ur FF dear...
plz PM me the next part...
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cabir rocked again ..u really wright well ..perfect words and expressions
like the bonding of fab5 and nandini alot

continue soon


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awsome...loved it...
i like lengthy updates...so no problem...😉
manan awww so cute...
pls continue soon...take care😊
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So m back with my nxt chapter and here it goes..

Chapter 14

Nandini and Manik reaches Nandini's home,they come and stand near the door.nandini goes to ring the bell bt Manik stops her.

Nandini:Manik..wat happnd..y u stoppd me from ringing bell.

Manik:Bcz I dnt wnt u to go inside nw..

Nandini confusingly:Wat..bt y..

Manik:Bcz since ur family have returnd so from 2day I wont be staying with u at night and will not be able to sleep peacefully hugging u so before going inside I wnt u to give me a long tight hug which wud compensate for 2night.

He says all this by giving her a puppy face which makes Nandini go all awww...She cups his face and gently places a sweet peck on his cheeks and then hugs him tightly.She tlks while still hugging him.

Nandini:Aww..my cute monster...dnt wry coz ham sirf night mai sath nahi honge bt pure din to ham sath hi honge na..

Manik making a pout:Aajkal tum pure din mere sath hoti kaha ho, tum to apne new Best Frnds ke sath hi chipki rehti ho..

Nandini breaks the hug and looks at him and then seeing his cute pout goes and pulls his cheek and smilingly says.

Nandini:Aww..my baby is getting jealous vo bhi apne hi frnds se..well thts nt a good thing Manik...Anyway nw I have to get in and u also got ur hug na so nw go..

Manik:Wat..mai kyu jau..i'l also com inside with u na..

Nandini gives her a look and says.

Nandini:Aur tum andar kyu aaoge..dekho andar chacha-chachi sab honge so dnt make a scene and leave..

Nandini starts pushing him and Manik ws trying to stop her bt suddenly the door gets opened and chachi comes out.Both Manik and Nandini gets startled and move away from each other.

Chachi:Arey...nandu tu aa gayi..maine bola tha na college khatam hone ke baad aana...bt tu sunegi nai na..

Nandini stammers:Oh..ha..vo..chachi actually mai miss kar rahi thi na aapko to mujse raha nai gaya to mai aa gayi..

Chachi smiles hearing her answer and then sees Manik too standing beside her..

Chachi:Arey..manik beta tum bhi aaye ho..kitne din ke bad tumhe dekh rahi hu..kaise ho beta tum..

Manik:Ya..chachi m all good..aap batao kaise ho aap aur aapki trip kaisi rahi..

Chachi smilingly:Mai bhi thik hu..aur trip bhi acchi rahi..par tum dono yaha bahar kya kar rahe ho..aur bell kyu nai bajai..muje kuch awaz sunai di bahar se islye maine door khola..

Manik smirks loking at Nandini and then speaks to chachi with a innocent face.

Manik:Dekho na chachi...mai bhi aap logo se milna chahta tha aur kitna miss kar raha tha aapko..isliye jab suna ke aaplog vapas aagaye ho to Nandini ko drop karne ke bahane aapse milne aagaya bt ye Nandini hai ke muje andar aane se mana kar rahi thi isliye mai bas vapas ghar ja raha tha..

Chachi falls prey for Manik's drama and feels bad looking at his innocent face and then shouts at Nandini.

Chachi:Hayo rabba..kitna sona munda hai..hamse milne ke liye tuje ghar tak chodne aaya aur tu bichare ko andar aane nahi de rahi thi...nandu tu apne manners kaise bhul gayi..

Nandini gives a surprised look to chachi whereas Manik jst smirks looking at Nandini's expressions.Chachi then turns to Manik and says.

Chachi:Yeh sab chodo..chalo ab tum dono andar aao..

Chachi takes both of them inside and Manik winks at Nandini and goes in whereas Nandini jst rolls her eyes and gets in.After getting in,Nandini 1st goes and hugs rishabh who ws sitting on the sofa.Manik jst smiles seeing the love and affection between them.After they broke their hug,Manik too goes near rishabh and gives him a brotherly hug which rishabh happily reciprocates. They break their their hug and Nandini speaks.

Nandini:Kaise ho tum..tumhari tabiyat thik hai na..maine tumhe kitna miss kiya..

Rishabh in a stammering voice:Didi..maine bhi aapko bahot miss kiya..

Listening this Nandini gets emotional and tears start flowing from her eyes and she hugs him again. Tears coming from Nandini's eyes were the last thing which Manik wntd to see even if its of happiness.So to cheer her up,he goes in between them and seperates them both and says to rishabh.

Manik:Arey..rishabh apni behen se door ho jao..varna thodi der mai yaha ro-roke flood le aayegi aur tumhe bhi apne sath duba degi..

Rishabh and chachi both starts laughing listening this while Nandini jst hits Manik playfully still crying.Bt after seeing rishabh laughing she stops her tears and gives a thnk u look to Manik.Manik jst smiles back to her.Chacha also comes down from his room and comes near Manik and asks how come he is here nw so chachi tells him Manik's story which impresses chacha too.He happily speaks to him.

Chacha:Oh..aisa hai kya..vaise muje tumhari chachi ne bataya ke unhone tumhe hamari nandu ka dhyan rakhne ko kaha tha jabtak ham vapas nai aate aur Nandini ko dekh ke lagta hai ke sachme tumne bahut acche se uska dhyan rakha..so thnk u for tht.

Manik like a very good boy politely says:Chacha aap mujse bade hai to pls aap muje thnk u bolkar sharminda mat kijiye..accha nai lagta..aur chachi ke liye to mai kuch bhi kar sakta hu akhir unke tasty chole vapis jo khane hai muje..so itna to mai kar hi sakta hu na...

Chacha and chachi both gets very impressed by Manik after hearing such words.While Nandini jst stands there dumfoundedly nt beliving tht her rude,angry and arrogant bf had suddenly turnd so polite and sweet infront of her family.Chachi then speaks.

Chachi pulling Manik's cheek:Haye..kinna sonna munda hai..meri nandu kitni lucky hai jo usse tum jaisa dost mila hai..

Manik jst shook his head down in embarasment.Then chacha too praises Manik.

Chacha:Ha..beta tum sachmai bahot acche ho..aur tum na aisehi aage bhi pls hamari nandu ka khyal rakhna aur jab chahe tab nandu aur hamse milne aa sakte ho aur isse na tum apna hi ghar samjhna..

Manik gets very happy listening this as nw he can come anytim to meet Nandini without worrying abt anything. But for Nandini evrything happnin infront of her eyes right now ws like a dream.Few minutes ago she ws getting scared thinking wat her family might think by seeing him with her bt nw her family is only giving him full permission to come to her anytime.

Chachi:Ab sabki batein khatm hogayi ho to chale dinner karne...aur Manik beta aao tum bhi hamare sath dinner karke hi jaana.

Manik gets scared hearing dinner word coming from chachi as he was well aware of her cooking.So he makes an excuse to leave from there.

Manik:Vo..chachi..aaj nai..actually na muje abhi ek imp kaam yaad aaya hai..so muje abhi hi nikalna padega..so really sorry chachi..vaise bhi mai to bas aaplogo se milne aaya tha aur vo to hogaya na to dinner na pakka next time karunga..ok so ab mai chalta hu bye..

Chachi frowns:Oh..koi bat nai beta par agli bar pakka tumhe khilakar hi bhejungi..Aur nandu ja zara Manik ko bahar tak to chodkar aa..

Nandini suddenly comes out of her thoughts and gets startled bt still agrees to go as she has to ask many questns to Manik.Manik then bids evryone goodbye and hugs rishabh again before leaving and then exits with Nandini.As soon as they come out Nandini holds Manik's hand and makes him look at her and asks.

Nandini:Ye andar kya drama chal raha tha..

Manik innocently:Wat drama..maine kya kiya..

Nandini:Dnt act innocent ok..ye tum sabke samne jo good boy banne ki acting kar rahe the vo kya tha..

Manik then pulls Nandini towards her and holds her from her waist and playingly says.

Manik:ohh..so ur tlking abt tht..well I think ur jst getting jealous tht tumhari family tumse jyada ab mujse impressed hai..

Nandini:Oh really..mai aur jealous vo bhi tumse..anyway I mst say tumne actually mai unhe bohot jyada impress kar diya hai apni baato se..so congrats Mr.Malhotra.

Manik proudly: Ye to hona hi tha aftr all I'm The Manik Malhotra..u knw na evryone falls for my charm even the gal who before used to call me Monster has too started calling me baby and sweetheart nw..so u can guess from tht abt my charm..

He says this teasing to her for which she jst punches him lighly on his stomach,Manik then again continues.

Manik:Aur vaise bhi jab tum mere frnds ko impress kar sakti ho so evn I can impress ur family right..jst to return the favour u knw..and besides this I have my own selfish reasons for doing this coz I hav heard ke apni gf ke family ko impress karna is a big achievment in its own way..so m jst glad tht nw evn I'm one of those acheievers..

Nandin flirtinglyi:Oh so thts the case ha..so I think u do deserve a reward for such a big achievment hai na..

Saying this she comes closer to Manik and puts her arms around his neck and keeps her face jst inches away from his face and flirtingly says.

Nandini:So nw tell me wat reward do u wnt..

Manik jst gets shockd seeing Nandini flirting with him and then he too gets flirty with her.So he holds her waist with his both hands and pulls her evn more close to him,making her lips touch his owns.Seeing this,Nandini jst closes her eyes expecting a passionate and long kiss from Manik bt instead Manik jst gently gives her a soft peck on her lip and then let her go.Nandini gets astonish seeing Manik leaving her so easily as she knw tht hw much Manik craves for her kisses so she opens her eyes quickly and then stares him with a confused look.Manik seeing her expressions then says

Manik:Dnt look so surprised...maine tumhe islie itni easily jane diya coz chachi andar tumhara dinner pe wait kar rahi hai and u knw ke mai ek bar agar start ho jaunga to tum bhi muje rok nai paogi aur agar chachi tumhe bulane bahar aa gayi to I dnt think ke unhe apni sweet si nandu ka vo wild form dekhkar kuch khas accha lagega and top of tht mera pura impression bhi utar jayega..so better nw u go inside.

Nandini was speechless hearing all this wise words coming from Manik.So she jst smiles at him and then like a good gf gives him a goodnight kiss on his cheek and wishes him goodnight and then goes back to her home.While Manik jst watch her go in and after reaching near the door,Nandini turns back once more jst to see a smiling Manik still looking at her.She jst gives him a sweet smile and gets it.He then smiles back her too and after seeing the door getting closed,he then goes to his car andt drives back home.

Sry guys I knw this ws nt tht good part bt I'l try to make nxt one a bit better..till then pls give it a read..

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Posted: 10 years ago
This part was very good dear... Loved it... Just keep continuing and entertaining us

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