Manan OS 'Tune jo na kaha' Part 5 on pg 15 feb 6th - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Wow too good.Hope this really happens in ky2...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome...do continue 😊
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Manan OS "Tune jo na kaha" Part 2

Nandu in bus she just cant stop herself from thinking about the things manik said...just then she gets a call from chachi...

Chachi: Nandu kaha hai tu?? Aaj sham rishab ku hospital lejane k liye kaha than na maine...tu kaise bhool sakti hai...who zameen pe pada tha...usko phir se attack aya tha...mujhe laga tu ghar ajayegi jald hi isliye mai market gayi thi...kuch bol kyu ni rahi

Nandu: Chachi...woh im sorry im sorry...mai bas aarahi hoon...rishab kaisa hai chachi..woh theek hai na..mai bas aarahi hoon (she was crying profusely...chachi asked her to come directly to hospital where rishab was admitted)

After she cut the call...she literally cursed herself for forgetting about rishab...she was sitting impatiently and finally she reached Mumbai and then rushed to hospital

Chachi: mai dekh rahi hoon toh kuch dino se tu apni hi duniya mein rehti hai...rishab...tu rishab ko leke careless kaise hosakti hai...dekh laadoo..rona ni...(she cupped her face)mai jaanti hoon tu aur choti hai lekin...rishab se zyada zaroori kuch ni hona chahiya..woh zameen pe pada tha laadoo..(chachi too was crying she hugged nandu and consoled her)

Later doc informed them of rishab's stable status..and nandu rushed to meet him..

Nandu to rishab: im sorry rishab..didi ku maaf karde..im really sorry..(later they took rishab to home )

This turn of events had greatly effected nandu...She couldn't fall asleep...

nandu holding her parents' pic..self talk : yeah people come and go..but rishab k liye sirf mai hoon..aur mere liye mera rishab top priority hona chahiye..bakhi sab irrelevant hai (tears were streaming down her face..and she fell asleep)

Next day morning at farm house:

Cabir to manik: kal toh teri izzat toh lutne hi wali thi..ki mai hero ki tarah aya aur tujhe bacha liya

Manik: wat rubbish cabir..my head hurts...I don't remember anything..wat r u saying?

Cabir told to manik about soha and her antics..which left him in utter shock

Manik: wat woh...u mean shez mad..psycho...haan nandu kehri thi kay soha is weird take care kark..but I just brushed it off...

Cabir: we need to b really carefull and turn the tables around...

Manik: yeah...cabir..we cant let soha know that we are aware of her intentions...mai abhi ata hoon

Manik tried calling nandu but she was so pissed off that she blocked manik's number..manik felt uneasy..but cabir sensed it and said "network prob hoga yaar..letz strt our practice"

The entire day fab 5 had their music sessions infact following the time table which nandu has once told them to follow..and time and again soha tried to intervene to spend time with manik but mukti and cabir did everything possible to shoo her off..infact cabir and mukti were having a hilarious and fun time in pissing off soha...meanwhile manik he was least effected by soha..in fact he was literally counting seconds/minutes/hours to go so that he gets back to his life...nandu... he immersed himself in music so that he could complete songs much before 3 days.. every break they took while practicing manik was on his phone trying to call nandu...but in vain...he was feeling completely restless and lost...Seeing his state cabir tried to calm him down " chill manik yaha pe network ni hai"...the day passed by and it was almost night...mukti and cabir beforehand landed in manik's room and locked themselves with manik...making soha go wild and mad...

Manik (thinking): Itz been 24hrs aur ek baar bi use baat ni hui...aisa pehli baar hua jab se woh meri life mein ayi..and her watsapp status busy?? Like seriously workshop hi toh hai..kya karo mai iss ladki ka..atleast evening she should have called me..kya karu...(he was sulking with anger and frustration)

The entire night manik spend composing music...every other thought was just of nandini moorthy...he ended up writing...:

Aisa laga mujhe pehli dafaa
Tanha main ho gaya yaara
Hoon pareshan sa main
Ab ye kehne ke liye

Tu zaroori sa hai mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
Ho.. tu zaroori (tu zaroori)
sa hai mujhko (sa hai mujhko)
zinda rehne ke liye (zinda rehne ke liye..)

Maangu na koi aasmaan do sitaron ka jahaan
Banja tu mera humsafar na mujhe chahiye koi muqaam
Dil hi kaafi hai tera mere rehne ke liye

Tu zaroori sa hai mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
Ho.. tu zaroori (tu zaroori)

Here in Mumbai nandu was feeling too low..moreover the workshop which was to be held was postponed to the following day..so the entire day she tried diverting her thoughts by spending time with navya but in vain..time and again she would reach out to phone but she stopped herself...

To be continued...

Do let me know in comments if u liked it...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsm update
loved it
continue very soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
nice update...

plz make it bit longer next tym
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Awesome ... Please continue soon... The song manik wrote down is really nice..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
I love d song-"Tu zaroori" and I so wanted cv's to pic this song on manan. Very nice. Bt poor nandu she ws so tensed for rishu. update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
😉This ws awesome? Pls continue soon.. Can't wait whn manik will cum to knw abt nandu..awesome writing😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Wow yaar its awesome...n specially the song👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Wow...tooo gud...keep updating...and soon plsss.waiting

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