Manan OS 'Tune jo na kaha' Part 5 on pg 15 feb 6th

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Hello ppl...weekend time...hope u guyz r having fun...if missing KY2 here u go...read my OS😳

Manan OS -Tune jo na kaha...

Part 1:

This starts from yesterday's episode...(23rd jan)

It was almost 7:30 in the evening when they reached the farmhouse...nandu who was hiding in the bushes just couldn't get manik's words out from her head... " people come and go...bf/gf...but v fab 5 will always be together.."

" everything else is irrelevant"...a part of her was cursing her for doing such a stupid thing i.e.. sneaking into the car boot space..and other side of her was " wat if something happens to manik". Nandu was all confused just then she spotted soha spiking manik's drink and taking to his room...She thought of a billion things to do...in fact she was so enraged that she felt like barging into the room...just then she spotted cabir and she composed herself and realized any wrong step will be at the cost of album..and the train of thoughts..she had..manik's convo in the car...irrelevant...fab 5..cabir..album...ppl come and go.. This made her teary eyed and she felt helpless...the only thing she could think of doing was confiding in cabir...she went out and called up cabir..

Cabir: hello nandu...watsupp..manik shayd sogaya isliye not picking ur call..

Nandu: ni cabir..woh mai...actually called up to speak to u..mai na.. can u come outside now..?

Cabir: Outside? Ek second...but y outside...omg...don't tel me u r here.. (cabir was in utter shock)

Nandu: I don't have time to explain pls come fast and pls don't let anyone know..(cabir rushed outside and he spotted nandini..)

Nandu: cabir listen v don't have time..woh actually..(nd she told him everything what she saw in college and what she saw now...regarding soha) please jaldi kuch karo...

Cabir: ok ok relax..lekin tum yaha kaise aayi..(nd he tried connecting the dots..nd was literally shocked)nandu iska matlab u were in the car boot space...!!

Nandu was kind of embarrassed : pls cabir don't let manik know about this..i tried telling to him about soha but again...cabir...I know ye album tumhare liye kitna imp hai...but soha is not normal..she is psycho...pls kuch karo..jaldi kuch karo...

Cabir: relax relax u just stay here ..mai kuch karta hoon..

He rushed inside and removed the main fuse and by then soha made manik have the drink...cabir starting knocking manik's room and soha..was completely tensed...but still she opened the door...

Cabir: Soha tum yahan...

Soha: cabir wat r u doing here...manik and I r just chilling out..u..c..

Cabir who barged inside and started acting all scared..: Soha im sorry but mujhe andhere se darr lagata hai...aur bachpan se jab bi aisa hota mai manik k saath sota hoon...

Soha completely lost her cool..and she almost had a psychotic attack..(it was confirmed by cabir too that she is not normal)just then mukti entered seeing her soha cooled down and left the room...and mukti was confused seeing soha's attire...manik's state and cabir too in the same room!! Cabir shut the door and let mukti know about soha...he told her everything without mentioning nandu's name..saying that he was observing soha from past few days so he figured it out!! Asking mukti to take care of manik..cabir rushed to meet nandu...

Cabir: nandu u r awesum..ms. moorthy..aaj toh manik ki izzat...(he just stopped seeing her angry/shocked/worried expressions) Anyways..nandu toh ab kya..wer will u ..i mean..

Nandu: pls just drop me till the bus stop..mujhe ghar jaana hai...(she sounded low)

Cabir: ok..ok..lekin iss waqt...? Y don't u stay here..

Nandu: no cabir ...I want to leave...ye teen din itz now ur responsibily...manik aur album dono...I mean take care of him...and at the same time make sure u guyz get ur album..

Cabir: okies...chalo..nd he drove her to the nearest bus stop...(cabir was recalling the discussion they had in the car..."manik beta tu toh gaya") he could clearly sense the hurt in her eyes...

Cabir: nandu..woh car mein jo manik ne kaha...woh..

Nandu: kya kaha..acha woh...(was trying to sound as if it din't effect her) u know cabir...agar right from start u r clear as to kiska hona hamesha zaroori hai aur kiska nahi...things get easier right?..(she tried to sound casual faking a smile)

By then they reached the bus stop...and cabir bought ticket for her and ..while leaving nandu said

nandu: pls cabir manik ku ni pata chalna chahiye that i came here...i don't want to look pathetic...itz not like im cringing onto him..but...i just couldn't think of other ways...

Cabir: Nandu...relax...dis is not called criniging..itz not pathetic..itz ur genuine concern...jo har kisi ko nahi milta..so stop saying that..

(he brushed her hair with his fingers and send her off)

Cabir self talk : tum ni jaanti nandu...manik...manik ni rahega if u leave from his life...kya fab 5 kya dosti...aisi mohabbat k saamne!! (having said that he chuckled...and said to himself beta cabir im just too awesum...I should start being a poet) ab madam soha...ye teen din..tere naam..

Then he drove back to farm house...

To be continued...let me know...if u guyz liked it...

Part 2 on Pg 5

Part 3 on Pg 8

Part 4 on Pg 12

part 5 on Pg 15

Edited by mishaarshi - 10 years ago

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keerthu27 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that was a nice start haww CabNi convo loved it..
continue soon now waiting for next part wat will cabir do to make soha expose😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful os
I want this to be seen in ky2
Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it ws really nyc loved cabini but i so wanted nandu to stay wid manik since he is unconscious... n sh cud have just left early in d morning b4 manik or any other person comes to knw about her presence...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It is awesome...continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome ...loved it yaar...cabir and nandini's conversations was amazing and touching...
u penned it beautifully...please continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cabira will be cabira...nai sudrega ...ye aaur iske one liners... Awww my baby nandu is so upset...baba tho gaya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow.. this was just awesome.. I hope they show something of this sort in the show
Do continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its awesome..Nice story..
Loved Cabir Nandini convo..😃
Pls continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh dear its awesome loved cabini conversation hopefully cvs show us sort of dis in the show also u nailed it to well cont soon and do pm me

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