Manan OS 'Tune jo na kaha' Part 5 on pg 15 feb 6th - Page 3

Originally posted by: _keertu_

that was a nice start haww CabNi convo loved it..

continue soon now waiting for next part wat will cabir do to make soha expose😆

thq...glad u ppl like it...will update soon

Originally posted by: pannikutty

Wonderful os
I want this to be seen in ky2
Continue soon 😳

yeah even i wish..nandu manik ki achi khabar le...

Originally posted by: manan_flab

it ws really nyc loved cabini but i so wanted nandu to stay wid manik since he is unconscious... n sh cud have just left early in d morning b4 manik or any other person comes to knw about her presence...

hmm...yeah nice idea yar..while writing i had something else in mind...but yeah u r right nandu taking care of drugged manik will b treat to watch..atleast they shud show dat in ky2😛

Originally posted by: aavani

awsome ...loved it yaar...cabir and nandini's conversations was amazing and touching...
u penned it beautifully...please continue soon...

thnq...wil b updating soon

Originally posted by: prati_25

Its awesome..Nice story..

Loved Cabir Nandini convo..😃

Pls continue soon..

😛 yeah sure dear

Originally posted by: sauju

Cabira will be cabira...nai sudrega ...ye aaur iske one liners... Awww my baby nandu is so upset...baba tho gaya

baba will not b easily forgiven😆

Heeheee he shouldn't be forgiven easily dear...koi dashing ladka laa do meri nandu ke liye 😛
JAL JAL ke roasted chicken ban jaayega 😉
Aur hame pad ke maza aayega 😆

Hey hey hey!! 😃 That was Awesome!

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Well written, i liked how you portrayed nandini,s hurt yet her concern for manik,s safety. plzz continue, im sure you will do a grt job. This OS be the perfect medicine for weekend blues

thnq...will b updating soon😛

Woow it's awesome