OS- ..MAKING IT UP TO U..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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MAKING IT UP TO U...:-)



After the healthy day of fighting up for Navya ..Evryone decided to call it a day..

(AT NANDINI'S HOME)
Chachi-Nandu dekh,aaj maine tere aur Navya ke liye ek pyari dish banayi hai...tu guess kar ..kya hoga..???
Nandu-(pissed off😡) Chachi,dedo na..jo bhi hai..
Chachi-(getting lil tensed)Sab theek hai na Nandu?
Nandu-(realizing)Haan chachi ..ek project tha actually usi ki wajah se ..i m tired..sry..
Chachi-Koi baat nhi nandu..waise aaj maine Salty Manchurian wid Roast Chapati banaya hai..tere liye khas..(being proud)
Nandini-(confused😲)But chachi ..chapati to anyhow ..roast hi hota h na?
Chachi-Ya but bolne se effect zyada aata h dish ke name ka..tujhe nhi samjhega..chod..(serving n asking for navya)
Nandini-Actually chachi.. wo bhi thak gyi thi..to ..she slept ..aap rakh dijiye..she will eat..
Chachi-chal thik hai..khila dena use pakka..(still working)
Nandini-Ok ..

Here Manik thinks n regrets somewhere that he behaved badly with his star..

Manik's POV..
Already she has gone through hell.. all days earlier..(remembers each n every thing..he did ..with her..)
N today ..wen she needed me ..i ..i m so stupid ..i should hav been there with her..n here i m sitting ..only regretting..😭
I hav to make it up to her..yeah..i have to.😃
(Rushes to his car)...

(After reaching Nandini..)
He thinks of something n smiles😳..takes out his mobile n texts ..
M-frnd in need is a frnd indeed..😛
N-(sighs)Not again Manik,i cant ..now..
M-ok..i m not fine actually..wanted to ..go to doc..so i thought ..if u..can..(winks)
N-(worried now)wait i'll come😲

Nandini-Chachi..actually i left my imp folder with Cabir..i m going to take it..he's at nearest stop..
Chachi-(wondering who is he)...
Nandini-He is Manik's buddy chachi..
Chachi-ohh ..Manik's friend na then thik hai..koi aur hota to..main nahi jane deti..chal tu ja..
Nandini-ya..

Nandini sees Manik outside..waiting..
(Through glass)
M-Come on,get in..(waving hand)
(Glass down)
N-Manik..wat happened ?
M-I'm in pain..can't u see..come inside..aahh..(acts)😉
N-ok ok ..(gets inside)

(Starts driving)
N-Now tell atleast manik..i am worried ..
M-ssshhh..how can u banter so much..👏
N-Manik..its not banter...I just can't ..see u in pain..
M-ohh ..like that..why nandini ?
N-because...
M-because??
N-Yeah i m telling na.. (thinking)
M-telling ??? Or thinking??... (Winks)
N- Yeah because..like u said ..that day..u cant see me in pain..similarly..i too cant..
M-U couldnt even think one reason of your own friend..copy pasted mine..(laughs sarcastically..)
N-No its not like that..
M-it is..
N-Friends do share same thoughts..😊
M-ok i lose..u win..
N-(smiles)😃

(Stops d car)..steps out..
M-ok now come..bahar aao..
N-But Manik...where r we..doc to nhi dikh rha..(sees here n there)..na hi koi clinic..
M-Doc mujhe bahar aake greet nhi krega ki aao aao ..welcome to my clinic..
(Makes face)
N-Its So NOT funny Manik..
M-Then Atleast come out..

Stepping outside d car ..manik covers her eyes with a soft black cover..
She gets scared😒 but down the mind she trusts him..😳
M-Come with me..
N-(follows)..hmm..😊

After some walking..he slightly let her open her eyes..n that was pure magic..what she saw..she was dumbstruck ...

TO BE CONTINUED...

GUYS ..i m a newbie..havent tried writing before..so giving it a try..i know there will be lot of mistakes n all..n criticism is most welcomed..do help me improving n tell me how was it? if i get some suggesttions so as to continue i will b highly obliged to do so..tysm ..n truely ...manan really rock:-)







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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start dear...it is so beautiful and sweet...loved it...please continue soon...would love to read more...

take care
with love
aavani
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aavani

nice start dear...it is so beautiful and sweet...loved it...please continue soon...would love to read more...

take care
with love
aavani


tysm ..:-) :-) :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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luved it😉...Keep writing ..waiting 4 manik's surprise 4 nandini
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice strt..u hve written well.. Continue soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow yaar...nicely written👏 Cute MaNan

plz do continue,,,,,,,,,,,,i ll b waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey sweetniks! Your story seems interesting!! Plz continue!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manan4ever

luved it😉...Keep writing ..waiting 4 manik's surprise 4 nandini


tysm:-) :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: manan58

Nice strt..u hve written well.. Continue soon 😉


tysm:-) :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kresham

wow yaar...nicely written👏 Cute MaNan

plz do continue,,,,,,,,,,,,i ll b waiting

tysm:-) :-)

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