MANANBIR OS:Lessons we learn from each other-fnl prt updd n nt on pg25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Wow! hats off to your imagination. 👏Your works keep getting cuter and cuter! ❤️
MaNanBir is always amazing, and Cabir's one liners were hilarious. i love how you stay true to the characters...But i must say my Bira stole the limelight.🤣

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PaShRun221

@PaShRun221

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Ohh that was amazing continue

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@sweetpoison_ps

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

I luved your art of writing each nd evry dialogue so briefly at the same time beautifully..!!👍🏼 wud luv to see more of your works in future ! 😊

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1d_kisses

@1d_kisses

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

I am loving it ..
Haaye mera cabira intelligent h re
Do continue soon
And its seriously time for some TCL for my bacchas

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AAVANI

@vani86

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

wow...part 3 was out of the world...superb...awsome...amazing...👏
i really loved it...OMG!!!!!!!!😊
i laughed a lot..while reading...if we get a scene like this in ky2...then it will be a blockbuster...😃
i loved the talks b/w mananbir...especially...😊Bro..Teriwaali humesha se aisi thi..?" Cabir asked manik in a low voice..
"Haa.."
"You know what, i got an idea to help you out of this friends tag.."
"kya.."Manik asked with a new found hope on his face.
"Gift her with a how to date manual!.."cabir winked at fuming manik and got whacked on head..

continue soon...😊
thanks a lot for the pm...
😊
take care
with love
aavani

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tanshita171

@tanshita171

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

haha.. loved it!! Poor Cabir! Stuck between two lovebirds.. the confusion between right n left was too damn funny.. Good work 👏\

Continue soon 😊

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kresham

@kresham

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Ohh god this one was awesome... teriwali pehle se Aisi thi hahaha...
manual of dating..
..awesome cabir...
hope this time manik dint say it's not TLC n its just TC to cabir

thanks for the PM do write more I liked it very much..