MANANBIR OS:Lessons we learn from each other-fnl prt updd n nt on pg25

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

wow...awsome...i loved it yaar...cabir and his dialogues...mind blowing...and the shayari...

chalo Is khushi mei suno cabir das ka tadakta bhadakta doha..
Arz kiya hai..Arz kiya hai..
ek ande ne phoda pyaar ki baadal
Aur tip tip barse PaNi mei bheege ye do paagal"

wow...u penned it beautifully...please continue soon...
thanks a lot for the pm...
take care
with lots of love & prayers
aavani

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dushturain

@dushturain

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Forever19🤗

im sorry for being late...pls forgive me!!😳

I just love love love how the whole story is progressing. I love this comradeship between CabIni. I love them together. And you have handled the whole relationship between this trio exceptionally well.👏

and the poem,

ek ande ne phoda pyaar ki baadal

Aur tip tip barse PaNi mei bheege ye do paagal"

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

you know something weird?? I always used to hate it when someone used to burge in the middle of two sweethearts. But im loving this Cabir between MaNan. Instead of being a haddi he is acting as masala between the kababs...and Im just loving this whole situtaion so much.. So glad Cabir is with MaNan!!

MaNanBir rocks!!

want next update as soon as possible!!

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Ireena Zahan

@Ireena7

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

wow..wow...wow...yaar...that was so so so superb 👏

update it soon pls... 😳

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@navk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

wonderful update
all the time i was laughing like a manic
superb yr cabir my bay u always rock yr

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Forever19

@Forever19

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: dushturain
Forever19🤗
im sorry for being late...pls forgive me!!😳

I just love love love how the whole story is progressing. I love this comradeship between CabIni. I love them together. And you have handled the whole relationship between this trio exceptionally well.👏

and the poem,

ek ande ne phoda pyaar ki baadal
Aur tip tip barse PaNi mei bheege ye do paagal"

🤣

you know something weird?? I always used to hate it when someone used to burge in the middle of two sweethearts. But im loving this Cabir between MaNan. Instead of being a haddi he is acting as masala between the kababs...and Im just loving this whole situtaion so much.. So glad Cabir is with MaNan!!

MaNanBir rocks!!

want next update as soon as possible!!

Akhir tumne TLC barsa diya..Many thanks Ms.Busyforeva!😆Mujhe laga tumhare aane tak mei buddhi ho jaoangi🤗

Tum kab mujhe Ann Bulaogi brishty??😡..Forever19 bulake mere chot pe namak chida rahi hai tum😆..That is because he is cabira ..He is so awesome that even being a haddi we love him like anything..Mananbir is my jaan😳

About that shayari which is a kalank in the name of shayari, I just couldn't help but add some meta humor in my os..😆

Edited by Forever19 - 10 years ago

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Forever19

@Forever19

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

To all my readers who support me through likes and comments,

A big thank you from the bottom of my heart..You guys are⭐️..Because you gave me the courage to write even if i know that i suck at it!😆..Thank you and keep commenting, not just appreciation but criticism too.. It will help me to improve my writing..

Edited by Forever19 - 10 years ago

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appy111

@appy111

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Ur writing is worth praising so we comment... And seriously i didn find any faults in it... Pls do continue soon I think that wud br my suggestion that keep updating as soon as possible...

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Ireena Zahan

@Ireena7

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

I love to read your OSs...you are a ⭐️

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Forever19

@Forever19

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: appy111
Ur writing is worth praising so we comment... And seriously i didn find any faults in it... Pls do continue soon I think that wud br my suggestion that keep updating as soon as possible...

I'll try to update asap appy..But since I work, I can only do it during my leisure hours..Thats why some times i delay updates..sorry for that😊