MaNan TS- Jealousy-Part 3B-pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
AWesome... Was laughing all through..🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Again..this was wonderful.
Do update the other part.
Beautifully written.
And surely did Manik fall into his own trap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
YAY! you turned this into a TS 😃😃
this is a great update btw! Cabir and Nandini laughing at Manik's plight 😆
update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I laughed so harx that my stomach started aching and I had tears in my eyes.I had laughed a lot.
"What happened Nans?Why you laughing?"Soha asked.
Cabir stopped laughing with a lot of difficulty but i continued to laugh.
"Haan...Nans tell why you are laughing."Cabir told teasing Soha.
I looked at him and we started laughing again.
Oh my god I had never laughed so much.
I looked at my monster his nose was red in anger.
Well,I was loving it.
You were trying to make me jealous? Nandini Moorthy jealous?huh?
I was loving it. But i was sure he wasn't.
Finally Cabir and me stopped laughing.
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I looked like a fool.I did.
Cabir,he is my friend but laughing along with her.Like really?Soha,seriously this girl had made my life hell.
Phew!Mr.Khurana,don't I love him for giving his daughter some work.Oh,yes she had to leave.
FINALLY!
Now Nandu,what were you laughing about.
Cabir got a call and he went lot.
Now only my Nandu and I were left,all alone.
Wait,all alone?arn't we the two ok us. :-p
Slowly Nandu's smile vanished. Now I had a smile on my face.
"Hmm..so Nandu,why were you laughing?"I asked with a tease.
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Guys I'm dividing the 3rd part into 2 parts.
This is the 1st part..will update the 2nd part of part 3 in a short while :)
Hope u like this par. :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Super gud.. Post the nxt part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
hey update soon waiting for d nxt part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
😊awsome
post next part soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Wishing u & ur family a very happy and prosperous New Year!!!!!!!!
may god bless u...

with love & prayers
aavani
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Woh,main..I.."she struggled in coming with one of her lame excuses.
"Haan..haan badi hasi a rahi thi apko..ab kya hua?tell me na so that even i can laugh."I said winking at her.
Now,she was totally blank. She had a ? Look on her face.
But suddenlu she had a bright smile on her face.
I was confused.
"Abhi.."She literally screamed.
I turned back to see that loser at the door.
She ran to him.
Urggg!why?why should happen only to me.
"What happened baby doll?"He alsed.
I mean seriously BABY DOLL?
Now i had no control over my anger.I went and held us coller.
"What the hell Manik?leave him."she shouted.
But i was no mood to listen to her.
"You loser,how dare you? Huh?she is mine and only mine.stay away from her got it.she is mine,she is my Nandu..you.gey that?" I literally burst out in anger.
"Wooh..chill dude.She is like my sister."He said.
Sister? Omg this word gave me so much relief.
But,i had just admited at i was jealous.
I looked at her,she had a huge smile on her face.
I let go of his coller.
Was she smiling for the fact that i had admited that i was jealous?
Well, I don't care after so many days i had seen the genuine smile on her face.
I was about to leave,but she held my hand and came up to my ear.
"It's ok Manik Malhotra...it happens.Jealousy is good and to tell you thr truth..well i was jealous as well.."she said and kissed me on my cheek and ran away from there.
And I stood like a fool smiling.
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Sorry guys for d late update
This was d last part.
Hope u all liked it.

Edited by ToralRas - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
So cute...I loved it...
Please update soon
Thank u

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