MaNan TS- Jealousy-Part 3B-pg 5 - Page 2

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ToralRas thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a lot everyone.
Planing to make this into a TS :)
Will update the 2nd part soon :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Like really?She really thinks I'm going to be jealous? I'm never going to jealous.
Though I knew I was fooling myself by telling so,I wasn't ready to admit that i was jealous.
Yes,I'm jealous.But never the less I'm not going admit it in fornt of her.
And that loser!!urgghhh.I HATE HIM.
Suddenly I heard a giggle.
I truned back to see her all giggling, laughing and smiling with that loser.
I felt like choking Abhi to death.Before I could do so,there she was choking me to death,Soha.
Her hands on shoulder yet again which got me all irritated but I had put on fake smile.
"You know baby..."She started. I hardly heard what she told because I was busy looking at my ex spot.
I saw her looking at me.This time i could not see jealousy or anger in her eyes.
she was smiling looking at me.The 'you are falling into your own trap' smile.
after a few seconds she looked away and started to talk to that loser again.
"This is not happening..my Nandu"I mumbled.
"Kya?"Soha asked still sticking to me.
God.I had enough I have to get rid of this Soha.She is irritating,very irritating.
In the parctice room while Fab5 practiced.Our so called manager was sitting and listing to us.But she had a constant smile on her face.A smile with which she tried teasing.
Gone.My concentration had gone.
"Guys I need a break." I siad.
We took a break.
Mukti,Alya and Dhruv went to the canteen.
Suddenly I heard her laugh hard.
"What happened Nandini?"Cabir asked.
She looked at me and all of a sudden Cabir started laughing too.
I turned back and saw Soha.Oh my god.Not again.
Surely I had fallen into my own trap.
Trying to make Nandini jealous ,I have landed in a place from where I don't know how i can get out.
*****
So this wad the 2nd part.
Hope u all like it.
Maybe dis may have a 3rd part.
If so will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
plss update a long one...its too short...btw its awesome update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
awesome ...poor Manik...fas giya khud hi...update soon😊plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
😊awsome...
poor manik...
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Lol...the ending was superb of this 2nd part..continue...
ToralRas thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you all..
Will update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ofcourse u hv to write the third part. I'l wait for ur nxt update. Awesome part. keep writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update
loved it
manik falling into his own trap is always fun to see😊
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
👏
Please do continue..

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