Manik Nandini FF | The Makeover|Ch14 Pg104

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pooh2015

@pooh2015

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Posted: 10 years ago

#311

Manan's journey will embark from now
As Manik finally saw that she is a gal
Loved Manik and his sexy legs 😆
Bichare ko chotu k liye parlour Jana pada
Navya finally convinced nandu..Manik will thank her one day 😃
And its so realistic
Every character has shades of grey as well as a brighter side
Again ..grt job 👏

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Indulekha00

@Indulekha00

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#312

your Nandini reminds me of my teenager niece.. she is such an utter feminist that she fumes at her mom making girly suggestions ... even about wearing an earring occasionally.

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 10 years ago

#313

This was bloody awesome again, with every update this story seems to be getting just better and better.. 😉

The entire Nandini Harshad convo though creepy felt a bonding start there.. And Harshad's sexy leg's comment that was too weird like outta nowhere.. 😲

And then Manik's protective side takes over, though it was hilarious but I felt bad for Harshad too I felt pity for him.. 😳

And then the bharat ram sita milaap outside the theatre hehehehe nice.. 😛😆

Manik actually goes to the parlour for Nandini's waxing and plucking crap, so much for being Chotu's bodyguard.. 😆😆

And his reaction I feel was the best part of this update shit it was too good, he was fussing over Nandini being a girl.. 🤣🤣

Bus one sincere request isse update karo tum ek ghante main bus warna suspense ke maare mujhe insomnia ho jaayega and I won't be able to sleep until you don't update it so yea just update ASAP.. 😆

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#314

Hi dear

Harshad was a creep!

And I agree with Manik if you having waiting for a movie since one past year so I would sit back and watch it ;)

Nandu got herself cleaner up...

Manik ka reaction mast tha

lol

Thanks for the Pm

Continue soon

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: filter.coffee
your lines the way you deacribe scenes "he slithered slowly like an earthworm " 🤣 dude you rock
🤣 Thats pretty much how I imagined he would be moving, seat by seat, araam araam se. Those kind of people infuriate me 😆

so nandini tried to be nice to crybaby harshad and got stuck in a uncomfortable situation!

It's so normal nowadays for shit of that sort to happen. Been there and done that so many times

but 😆 manik ne jo class li harshad ki!

Hahaha. Toh kyaa! 😉

so harshad isn't that bad?good!i don't like too many negative characters.and i story can be interesting even without negative characters.

This is a normal teenage fanfiction. It doesn't have so much as a negative character.
In my fiction, people have both positive and negative sides, as it is normally the situation in life. nobody's perfect 😃

aww they all patched up

Yess. They did. 😃

and the much awaited makeover!lol manik was so against!kyon na hoga he got turned on by her even when she was ugly 😆

That was pretty much why I added that part because Manik did get turned on by her once before all this happened 🤣

his reaction man!she is girl now!let the struggle begin!

Yess. Struggle indeed. Now that has to happen 😆

loved it sindhiya!please yaar saturday se pehle do char aur updates de de!please!

Yess maam. Pakka without fail 😆
Thankyouuu sooo much Rez 🤗

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: princessangel23
This is Damn amazing !
do continue soon ! Pm me pls !
Eagerly waiting !

Thankyouu sooo much love 🤗

I shall update soonish 😃

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Manya

@manya_189

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#317

Haha! This is the best update!! Loved it but Harshad like always is Jerkshad!!

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: pani999
U updated finally 😃
This was beyond amazing 😊

As I always say, Sabar ka phal meetha hota hai 🤣

Thankyouu lovee 🤗

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anika mehjaben nahin

@mehjaben_nahin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#319

dear m telling u i seriously fell in love wid ur story i loved it loved it loved it its just awesome i was laughing like anything n maniks last said cracked me up badly cont soon dear waiting...:-))))

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: suv-kriyaansh
u knw wot ? im in luuuvvv with ur stry
i loved manan bonding 😳
pls continue ASAP if possible update tmrw because i cant wait more 😛

Awww! ☺️ Thankyouuu loveee 🤗

Tomorrow morning I'll update again pakka 😃

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