Manik Nandini FF | The Makeover|Ch14 Pg104

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Hey everyone, This is sindhyaa here. This is my first ever fan fiction on these two, so tell me what you think. 😆

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Chapter one:

There are two types of girls in this world, one who look at lizards, scream their minds out, jump all over the school benches and enjoy the little attention they get hence, and the other being, the ones who look at lizards, jump onto a bench, stare at the lizard with what may seem an evil death glare, and hope with all their hearts that it dies.

And then there was that crazy ass girl in class, Nandini Murthy. I'm sorry, girl is not the right way to describe her, a better description of her would a boy with a few lady like parts.

When all the other girls in class were perched on top of the class benches with a scared or menancing look on their face, Nandini Murthy stood near the teachers table, holding the lizard in her hand, making extremely inappropriate cute faces at it.

No, she didn't. Yes, she did.

That little un-lady like girl was so engrossed in making the lizard feel at home that she dint realize when the entire class started screaming at her to throw the damn lizard out.

"Aww, lily." Nandini cooed at the lizard in her hand. The lizard had stopped trying to get out of her grasp awhile ago, it had accepted her as her own now. Nandini was almost sure that the lizard might even like her.

"You named it? You actually named it?" Nandini turned around to see a boy from the other class grinning at her with unquestionable insensitivity.

"How is that any of your business, uh?" Nandini paused, what was his name again?

"Manik. Manik Malhotra." He approached her with unexpected ease for someone who was perched on top of a bench with his girlfriend a minute ago.

"Get away or Lily will bite you." Nandini gave him a menancing look.

"Oohh, bite me eh? I see someone's in a feisty mood." Manik grinned from ear to ear.

"Don't test me, you wannabe stud."

"I know, cant be as studlike as you, can I, Ms...?"

"Nandini. Nandini Murthy!" Nandini gave him a smug smile.

"So aggressive for a south Indian."

"Wait. What?" Did he just say that?

"Ohh, did your Lily block your ears along with your sensibilities?" Manik laughed like a crocodile at his own jokes. Pathetic.

"That wasn't even funny you know. Idiotic much?"

"Oh yeah, I seem idiotic don't I? Meanwhile you stand here, seducing a god damn lizard! Kisi bande ne bhaav nahi diya kya?" Again he laughed at his own joke.

"Listen, why don't you go back to that bench where your girlfriend is standing and behave like a complete sissy like you were a minute ago!" well, that shut him up, she smirked pleased with herself.

"Listen, I'm not a sissy." Manik looked around himself making sure nobody was overhearing their conversation and then turned around and left quickly.

Nandini watched him leave with utmost satisfaction. Bada aya, mujhse panga lene.

Being the extremely uncaring, boy that she was, she went upto her seat in the midst of all the screams that echoed around her, sat down on her bench, where beside her, her partner quivered with fright, and put the lizard down carefully on her table.

"Lilyyy. Do you want some milk? No? Some rice? No? Wait, I know. You'll have chole? My chachi packed me so much of it, lets share and eat? " Nandini was talking to the lizard, yes everyone, the lizard.

"What.. What the hell are you doing? That's a bloody lizard not a dog!" Her partner, Mukti, who Nandini found extremely annoying pointed out as she caught sight of Nandini feeding the lizard chole.

"Tumhe kya problem hai? Tumhe khila rahi hu kya?" Nandini vehemently retorted back.

"No. But listen, don't act stupid, woh tumhaare finger ko bite karega okay?"

"Mera finger. Meri lily. Mere chole. Meri marzi. Tumhaara isse kya lena dena hai?" Nandini made one of her extremely snobby faces and turned back to lily leaving Mukti looking extremely annoyed.

"No. Tumhari marzi nahi chalegi. Yeh meri bhi seat hai and I'm not comfortable with what that thing on my desk."

"Toh kahin aur baith jao? Mera kya jaa raha hai."

"Listen you-" But before Mukti could spell out all the different abuses that were coming to her mind, a hand caught her from behind. "Mukti, chill. Let me handle this."

Mukti turned around to see her best friend, Aliya Mukherjee, who was also the headgirl of the school. Ab aaega maza.

"Listen Nandini, if you want to stay in this school, you are going to dispose off of that lizard right now, or I'm going to go complain to the headmistress. Am I being clear?" Mukti stared at her best friend with appreciation. She was the most badass thing around town.

"Listen, if you both bother me like this again, I will complain to the headmistress that you both put this lizard in my shirt and never let a single opportunity go to harass me." Nandini stared at the two over smart girls with defiance.

"That's a lie Nandini. And do you really think that if you and I put forward a story in front of the headmistress, she would believe you over the headgirl? Its good to dream, but you are going over your head with this one. Now get that shit out or there will trouble." Aliya grabbed Mukti's arm and strutted out of the class leaving Nandini alone, muttering every rude and abusive word she had ever heard in her life.

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Suggestions and corrections are welcome! 😊

Index:


Chapter 1 Page 1

Chapter 2 Page 4

Chapter 3 Page 9

Chapter 4 Page 12

Chapter 5 Page 18

Chapter 6 Page 21

Chapter 7 Page 27

Chapter 8 Page 32

Chapter 9 Page 42

Chapter 10 Page 61

Chapter 11 Page 73

Chapter 12 Page 80

Chapter 13 Page 92

Chapter 14 Page 104

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I like it...different but nice. Please continue soon!😃
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Amazing strt.. Nice writing.. Pls update soon.. Excited to read further
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nice one dear! continue soon


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let me start off by saying congrats on this new story! 👏

Nandini sure is different here 😆
so you've written her to be the type of girl that is rude, annoying and that everyone's scared of??

either way, I cant wait for your next update 😃
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Sindhyaa 🤗 You told me you write. You never told me you write so well! I've also seen your edits in the CG. Ugh, multi-talented log.

Back to this. Love the start. The plot sounds really gripping. Otherwise this story gives off a quirky, funny, light-hearted vibe. Totally digging those kinds of fanfics at the moment.

Nandini my gal 🤗 She's so absolutely hilarious! And my Alya be the boss yo 😎 Manik 🤣 He is such a wimp! I literally cannot express my excitement for this one.

Now, off to read the next!
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